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FF:(abhiya)Nature dont want us together
hi
everyone,
This is my
first FF in india forums.i used to read a lot of FFs of Abhiya then suddenly
tis idea struck ma mind n i thought of writing it.actually i m nt a gud writer
and this is ma first attempt.hope u all like it and plz suggest me n plz do
comment so that i would be able to improve ma writing skills.
CHARACTER SKETCH
ABHAY
RAICHAND:a mysterious guy,son of haseena and chand...residing in the dark
forest of Dehradun...belong to aristocrat raichand family that shifted in
dehradun 2 yrs ago...arrogant n hav no frens...handsome...dream boy of every
girlsof the town...seems ok frm outside yet hollow n incomplete
inside...searching 4 his life, his soul, his soulmate...[/B]
PIYA
DOBRIYAL:adopted daughter of arnav and madhu...adopted at the age of
2...bright and intelligent and quick tempered...she is simply more than a
human...even arnab noticed that she is nt a normal human bt neglected
it...studying in paris for past 3 yrs...has her own dark side,own secret
that no one knows of nt even herself...
MISHA:piya's
sister...hav tomboy nature...full of laughter...also a fighter...lovws her
sis a lot.
KABIR SINGH
RATHORE:piya's and misha's bst fren...secretly loves piya...
(many new
characters will enter as the story proceeds)
what happens when these two mysterious persons meet each other?
what fate is awaiting them n how will they deal with it?
will love flourish btn them despite their own dark secret?
a story full of love,hatred,betrayl n mysteries,attraction n
repulsion at the same time...
CHAPTER 1:The predator
Dehradun's
jungle: a full moon night .the forest floor is illuminated by the pale
moon light.trees were dancing and wishpering with the movement of the
air.rustling sounds were made by forest animals.
On the
top of a tree,a pair of pierceing blue eyes were scanning the forest with full
attention and low snarl.a low rustling sound of the bushes caught the attention
of those eyes.the predator freed all his senses and pounced on the deer to
pacify the burning pain of thirst.
raichand's
mansion: chand and haseena were sitting on a couch infront of the fireplace
sipping their favourite drink.chand called out:abhay
Abhay:yes dad
chand:how was
the hunt?are u satisfied?
Abhay:yes
dad.i got a deer.m quite satisfied.the jungle is quiet as usual.dad n mom,now u
sld go hunting.i will stay here.
haseena:but
abhay...
Abhay:dont
worry mom.for 200 yrs i have been practicing and i can handle this life.i
wont do anything reckless and reveal our true identity.trust me mom.if u r
worried abt me being alone then its just ridiculous mom...i have always been
alone since birth...
(hearing
this haseena felt sad and hurt.though she is a vam,pire she is nt able to
control her emotion n conceal her expression)
abhay:(seeing
haseena's expression)sorry mom ididnt mean to hurt u.i am grateful towards u
4 supporting me all these years bt still the emptiness n loneliness inside me
is always hunting n tormenting me.n u know why mom.
haseena:ya abhay
bt still i m worried abt u.
Abhay:plz dont
worry mom m alright.dad seems restless.i think u should go now.
chand and
haseena leaves 4 hunting.Abhay enters his room and sits on the couch.he closes
his eyes and the flashback starts...
chapter
2:the past...
hope u all will like it
plz do comment n dnt hesitate to point out ma mistakes...
The predator-page 1
chapter 2-page 3
chapter 3 n 4-pg 4
chapter 5-pg 6
chapter 6-pg 9
chapter 7-pg 12
chapter 8-pg 15
chapter 9-pg 19
chapter 10-pg 22
chapter 11-pg 28
hi
everyone,
This is my
first FF in india forums.i used to read a lot of FFs of Abhiya then suddenly
tis idea struck ma mind n i thought of writing it.actually i m nt a gud writer
and this is ma first attempt.hope u all like it and plz suggest me n plz do
comment so that i would be able to improve ma writing skills.
CHARACTER SKETCH
ABHAY
RAICHAND:a mysterious guy,son of haseena and chand...residing in the dark
forest of Dehradun...belong to aristocrat raichand family that shifted in
dehradun 2 yrs ago...arrogant n hav no frens...handsome...dream boy of every
girlsof the town...seems ok frm outside yet hollow n incomplete
inside...searching 4 his life, his soul, his soulmate...[/B]
PIYA
DOBRIYAL:adopted daughter of arnav and madhu...adopted at the age of
2...bright and intelligent and quick tempered...she is simply more than a
human...even arnab noticed that she is nt a normal human bt neglected
it...studying in paris for past 3 yrs...has her own dark side,own secret
that no one knows of nt even herself...
MISHA:piya's
sister...hav tomboy nature...full of laughter...also a fighter...lovws her
sis a lot.
KABIR SINGH
RATHORE:piya's and misha's bst fren...secretly loves piya...
(many new
characters will enter as the story proceeds)
what happens when these two mysterious persons meet each other?
what fate is awaiting them n how will they deal with it?
will love flourish btn them despite their own dark secret?
a story full of love,hatred,betrayl n mysteries,attraction n
repulsion at the same time...
CHAPTER 1:The predator
Dehradun's
jungle: a full moon night .the forest floor is illuminated by the pale
moon light.trees were dancing and wishpering with the movement of the
air.rustling sounds were made by forest animals.
On the
top of a tree,a pair of pierceing blue eyes were scanning the forest with full
attention and low snarl.a low rustling sound of the bushes caught the attention
of those eyes.the predator freed all his senses and pounced on the deer to
pacify the burning pain of thirst.
raichand's
mansion: chand and haseena were sitting on a couch infront of the fireplace
sipping their favourite drink.chand called out:abhay
Abhay:yes dad
chand:how was
the hunt?are u satisfied?
Abhay:yes
dad.i got a deer.m quite satisfied.the jungle is quiet as usual.dad n mom,now u
sld go hunting.i will stay here.
haseena:but
abhay...
Abhay:dont
worry mom.for 200 yrs i have been practicing and i can handle this life.i
wont do anything reckless and reveal our true identity.trust me mom.if u r
worried abt me being alone then its just ridiculous mom...i have always been
alone since birth...
(hearing
this haseena felt sad and hurt.though she is a vam,pire she is nt able to
control her emotion n conceal her expression)
abhay:(seeing
haseena's expression)sorry mom ididnt mean to hurt u.i am grateful towards u
4 supporting me all these years bt still the emptiness n loneliness inside me
is always hunting n tormenting me.n u know why mom.
haseena:ya abhay
bt still i m worried abt u.
Abhay:plz dont
worry mom m alright.dad seems restless.i think u should go now.
chand and
haseena leaves 4 hunting.Abhay enters his room and sits on the couch.he closes
his eyes and the flashback starts...
chapter
2:the past...
hope u all will like it
plz do comment n dnt hesitate to point out ma mistakes...
The predator-page 1
chapter 2-page 3
chapter 3 n 4-pg 4
chapter 5-pg 6
chapter 6-pg 9
chapter 7-pg 12
chapter 8-pg 15
chapter 9-pg 19
chapter 10-pg 22
chapter 11-pg 28
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