MG FF #2 Lambi Judaai: Part 47/Page 47 - Page 8

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Posted: 13 years ago
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Amazing romantic update,waiting for their romantic dinner.
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Posted: 13 years ago
#72
Awww beautiful update...
luved it... hmm romantic dinner sounds fun..
plzz continue soon
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Posted: 13 years ago
#73
Thanxs for all of your comments!!! They mean sooo much!!!
Saba xxx
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Posted: 13 years ago
#74
awesome ... superb ...

thnx 4 d pm ...

continue soon ...
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Nice updates...
please add me in your pm list
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Posted: 13 years ago
#76
awesome...

geet told him abt her love for him...

dinner on the way...

continue soon...

thnx for PM...
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Hi guys ok firstly very sorry for the late update, we both have been extremely since school has started.
so guys heres what all of you have been waiting for, tried to make it as romantic as possible, feel free to critisize, and please do comment and press the like button. We'd like thank all those that have been regular in commenting and liking our ff its because of you guys that we've reached so far, thank you sooo much, love you all 😳😃🤗 so now without further adieu heres the update x
M&G…Lambi Judaai…Part 41

Geet couldn't believe what she was seeing, the whole room was decorated with red roses and candles around the room, the lights were dim giving the room a romantic feel, in the middle of the room was table covered with white cloth with red border, she looked further and saw a projector screen which displayed pictures of her and Maan from previous holidays, and school trips.

Geet was too awestruck to say anything right now, first the surprise I LOVE YOU in the sky and now this, she felt so special.

Maan understood that she was too shocked to say anything so he didn't speak either instead just moved towards her and hugged her from the back, nuzzling into her neck. He brought his lips toward her neck and kissed her there gently, then slowly went up to her nape and kissed her gently there, then turned her around so she was facing him, he looked into her eyes, her eyes showed desire, a different look, a look he had never seen before in her eyes. He gently put his hand over her eyes closing them and gently kissed both, then slowly made his way down to her nose then both her cheek, then gently pecked her lips and did that a few times, teasing her.

Geet felt like she was floating in air, she kept her eyes closed the whole time cherishing the moment, she felt as if she was being tortured when maan placed gentle peck rather than one long kiss, she unknowingly said.

Geet: Maan…Pll…eea.aase

Geet pleading voice, the desperation in her voice made the devil inside him awaken. He pulled her closer and closed the gap between them, he kissed her with as much passion possible, he could feel geet responding with equal much passion and fervour.

As soon as their lips met geet felt as if life had just entered her soul as if she was never alive before.

After a good 10 minutes, both parted for air, they both were panting. Maan rested his head against hers and kept it there, then rubbed his nose against hers

Maan: I Love you geet, I really do, tumhare bina ab meri zindagi adhoori hai geet.

Geet: I love you too, aur main bhi ab tumhare bina jee nahin sakti.

Maan gave geet a mischvious smile, to which geet blushed and his her face in her palms.

Maan: waise geet jab tum mujhe kiss kar rahi thi tab tumhari ye sharam kahan gaayi thi, aur ab jab main kuch kar bhi nahin raha tumhe sharam aarahi hai ,hmm?

Geet smaked his arm playfully and his her face in his chest.

Maan just laughed and pulled her into an embrace.

Geet: waise maan ye sab tumne kiya kab, I mean itna time kaise mila tumhe?

Maan: who kya hai na jab tum soh rahi thi , subha 4 baje toh main yahaan aagaya aur iss sab ka intizaam kiya?

Geet came out from his embrace and looked at him in shock

Geet: KYA! 4 BAJE !

Maan: haan, kyun kya hua ?

Geet: Maan itni taqleef uthane ki kya zuroorat thi?

Maan: geet maine yeh sab tumhare liye nahin kiya

Geet looked at him in confusion

Geet: Phir kis ke liye kiya

Maan: Geet main bohot selfish hoon, aur meri selfishness tumhari yeh khushi hai.

Geet smiled at him and kissed his cheek

Geet: tum sach mein duniya ka best lover ho, yu know that

Maan: Hmm woh toh hai

Maan said pulling up his collar with attitude.

Geet playfully slapped his arm

Maan: acha geet baatein toh baad main bhi karsakte hain, challo abhi khana kahte hain

Geet nodded and moved to the table, Maan being a gentleman maan went forward and pulled geets chair out for her to sit on.

Geet smiled and sat down.

Maan: geet tum yahan baitho main abhi khana leke aata hoon

Before geet could say anything, maan went to get the food.

After a little while maan came back pushing a trolley full with food.

Geet was surprised by the amount of food there was.

Geet: itna saara khana ??

Maan: haan, tumhe pata hai kitna time laga hai yeh sab prepare karne main, lekin its all worth it.

Geet: KYA!! ye sab tumne akele banaya?

Maan: not completely but yes most of it just with a little help of nakul.

Geet: Maan sach main yeh sab karne ki koi zuroorat nahin thi, eik simple sa i love you bhi chalta

Maan: zuroorat thi geet, main tumhe dikhana chahta tha ke tum mere liye kitni special ho.

Geet held both of maans hands and brought them up to her lips and kissed them.

Geet: I love you maan, tum bohot ache ho

Maan put his hand over geet and said

Maan: acha chalp bohot baatein hoogaye, challo khana kah lete hai, thanda ho raha hai,

Geet: nahin mujhe aise nahin khana

Geet said making a baby face.

Maan: toh phir kaise khana hai

Geet: tumhare haath se.

Maan smiled and said

Maan: acha ji toh ye baat hai, ok chalo i'll fed you.

Geet nodded her head in excitement.

Maan prepared her plate and started to feed her, geet noticed that he was not eating anything himself so stopped him midway and turned his hand towards him.

Maan smiled and took the bite from her hand looking at her eyes lovingly.

When both were done feeding each other, Maan bought his hand forward offering her for a dance.

Maan: Geet may I have this dance?

Geet smiled and nodded, she brought her hand forward and placed it in Maans hands so she could be lead to the dance floor.

Maan signalled someone to turn the lights off and turn on the music.

As soon as the lights went off geet became scared but then the spot light came on them and the music started.

(Guys do play this while reading to get the feelEmbarrassed, http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=tbKex6_N5yI)

Geet turned to look at maan as he stood there with the most beautiful smile.

Geet started walking slowly towards him.

Maan holds Geets hand and put his other hand on Geets waist.

Tumko paya hai to jaise khoya hoon
Kehna chahoon bhi to tumse kya kahon

Geet and maan gently swayed to the music looking deep into each other's eyes
Tumko paya hai to jaise khoya hoon
Kehna chahoon bhi to tumse kya kahon

Kisi zaban mein bhi woh labaz hi nahi
Ki jeenmein tum ho kya tumhein bata sakun

Main aagar kahoon tumsa haseen

kaynaat mein Nai hai kahin
Tareef yeh bhi to sach hai kuch bhi nahi

Maan twirls her around then Brings her back to his embrace, again swaying.
Shokhiyon mein dooobi yeh aadayein
Chehre se jhalki hui hain
Zulf ki ghani ghani ghatayein
Shaan se dhalki hui hain
Lehrata aachal hai jaise badal
Bhaahon mein bhari hai jaise chandani
Roop ki chandani

Geet put her arms and around maans neck and maan put his hands on her waist bringing her closer

Main agar kahoon yeh dilkashi
Hai nahi kahin na hogi kabhi
Tareef yeh bhi to sach hai kuch bhi nahi
Tumko paya hai to jaise khoya hoon..

Geet looks at maan with loving eyes and keeps her head on maans chest still gently swaying in his arms

Tum hue meherbaan
To hai yeh dastan
hoo Tum hue meherbaan
To hai yeh dastan

Maan places soft kisses on geets neck and shoulder, and goes behind her and hugs from the back as geet puts her head back enjoying the moment

Abb tumhara mera ek hai karwaan
Tum jahan mein wahan
Main agar kahoon
Humsafar meri
Apsara ho tum ya koi pari
Maan moves a little away then goes down on his knees and holds her hand and kisses it, Geet gets teary and brings maan up and hugs him tight
Tareef yeh bhi to sach hai kuch bhi nahi
Tumko paya hai to jaise khoya hoon..
Kehna chahoon bhi to tumse kya kahon

Kisi zabaon mein bhi woh labaz hi nahi
Ki jeene mein tum ho kya tumhein bata sakun

Main aagar kahoon tumsa haseen

kaynaat mein Nai hai kahin
Tareef yeh bhi to sach hai kuch bhi nahi
Tumko paya hai to jaise khoya hoon..

The music stops but geet and maan were still too lost in eachothers embrace,listening to the others heart beat.

Precap : No Precap sowy
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Posted: 13 years ago
#78
Thanks glad you liked it 😳😃
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Posted: 13 years ago
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😃amazing mindblowing fantastic superb
muahhh really really loved it
mindblowing update
plz plz continue soon😳🤗
love u so much xxx😃
Edited by Geetmaan1234 - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
#80
this was awesome...i loved maan's surprise for geet...poor guy...he took so much of time for this...but then it was worth it...

it was so sweet to have both of them feeding each another...and then the dance part was amazing...

continue soon...

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