MG FF #2 Lambi Judaai: Part 47/Page 47 - Page 6

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Posted: 13 years ago
#51

Originally posted by: Geetmaan1234

S= uperb
A=mazing
b= eautiful
A= wsome
AND

H= eart touching
I= ntersting
R= omantic
A= dorable


Loved it very much...superb hiru sabu
Plz cont soon
Muahhh lots of lots of lots of love
Sehri

Awww thanxs sooo much Sehri 😃😃😃
Love you lots tooo my sweety!!!!!!!!!! 😳😳😳😳😳😳😳
Saba xxx
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Posted: 13 years ago
#52

Originally posted by: Geetmaan1234

S= uperb
A=mazing
b= eautiful
A= wsome
AND

H= eart touching
I= ntersting
R= omantic
A= dorable


Loved it very much...superb hiru sabu
Plz cont soon
Muahhh lots of lots of lots of love
Sehri

haaii so sweet sehru
we love you
we will try update it this weekend *fingers crossed*
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Posted: 13 years ago
#53

M&G…Lambi Judaai…Part 40

Geet and Maan broke apart from the most beautiful kiss they ever had, Maan looked intently into geet's eyes as if trying to read something.

Geet: Kya hua Maan?

Maan: I'm trying to read your eyes, to see if you feel the same way I do?

Geet smiled and then thought about teasing him a little.

Geet: What feelings Maan?

Maan looked up confused

Maan: Love ofcourse.

Geet: WHAT! Haha you actually think I love you

Maan looked at Geet shocked at what he heard. Why was Geet saying that?

Maan: Matlab tum mujhse pyaar nahin karti?

Geet: Pyaar?, nahin toh, maine toh ainvaayi tumhe hug kiya kyunki I liked your whole idea of the plane and everything. Waise mazaak acha karte ho tum. You and love me? Hahaha

Maan: Geet, its not a joke, I do love you.

Geet went round Maan and stood behind him and whispered in his ears.

Geet: main janti hoon Maan. And I love you too. I really do. Main toh bas tumhari taang keench rahi thi.

Maan grabbed Geets wrist all of a sudden and brought her close to him.

Geet could see the pain in his eyes, then thought maybe she went a bit overboard.

Maan: Geet, aisa mazaak kabhi mat karna. You nearly killed me.

Geet got tears in her eyes seeing maan's love for her. She came close and kissed his cheek.

Geet: mujhe maaf kardo maan, I really didn't mean to hurt your feelings. You should know by know that I love you more than anything in my life. Isi liye toh main yahaan itne door aaye.

Geet bit her tongue as she wasn't supposed to tell him that, she didn't want to sound obsessed infront of him.

Geet: woh mera matlab hai.. woh

Maan was shocked to hear that geet had come to London for him, and not actually because she wanted to study here.

Maan: Kya? You came all the way from india to be with me. Iska matlab hai kai tum mujhe pehle se pyaar karti ho?

Geet looked down not able to meet eyes with Maan, she was too shy to speak and the intensity in Maans eyes were just making her go crazy.

Geet: Haan… Woh… main

Maan: Geet how long has it been?

Maan was now serious; he really wanted to know for how long Geet had been in love with him.

Geet: For the past 4 years

Geet could feel herself blush really badly, Maan was shocked to hear that Geet had loved him for so long without letting him find out. He admired her even more that she did not let him find out and gave him the space he needed.

Maan cupped geets face and says

Maan: Geet mujhe maaf kardo mujhe tumhe aise chod ke nahin aana chahiye tha na, tum kitni roye hogi. Geet lekin ab main tumhe kabhi bhi dukhi nahi karoon ga, I promise aaj se sirf aur sirf khushiyan hongi.

Geet looked at maan with teary eyes, she couldn't find the right words so just hugged maan tight, she felt so safe in his embrace, she couldn't hold her in her sobs anymore.

Maan didn't stop her, he knew how hard it must have been for geet to keep all her emotions in, today she could pour it all out.

Geet soon became calm and just rested her head on maans chest and closed her eyes feeling content.

Maan: Ab aur nahi rona. OK?

Geet: Hmm

Maan: acha toh ab kya karne ka plan hai.

Geet: anything you want maan, im sure you've got something very nice planned.

Maan: hmm soh toh hai. Actually I was thinking we do some horse riding.

Geet came out of Maans embrace and looked at Maan with a bright smile. She loved the thought of horse riding, she had always wanted to.

Geet: Kya? Sach, horse riding, wow sounds like fun.

Maan: I'm glad you like the plan. Chalo

Maan took Geet to the stable that was there, he let Geet choose what horse they could ride on.

Geet chose the white horse, it didn't seem as big as the rest, and of course white was her favourite colour as well.

Geet: Maan I didn't know horses were this big, how am I supposed to get up there?

Maan slightly laughed seeing his mishti's innocence.

Maan: mishti tum bhi na, dekho main dekhata hoon tumhe kaise chadh na hai ispar.

Maan instructed geet to first put her feet on the stirrup and push up; Geet struggled to get up so Maan pushed her up by her waist.

Then when Geet was safely seated, Maan sat behind her so that Geet was safe and there was no risk of her falling of the horse. Maan then got the reins in his hand and off they went. (Sorry not very good at describing how to ride a horse, I've never really done horse riding)

Geet initially was very scared so kept her eyes closed but then slowly started to open them as she could see Maan had very good control over the horse.

Maan slowly leaned onto Geet so that he had his chest pressed against geet's back and slowly moved his face closer to her ear.

Geet could feel her heart beat raise with the proximity and closed her eyes again but this time for whole different reason.

Maan gently kissed geets ear, and whispered
Maan: I love you so much Mishti, tumse khoobsoorat aur koi nahi.
Geet sucked in her breath feeling maans breath on her ear, she really couldnt control her self anymore.
Geet: Maan, aise baatein karoge tho main kahin gir hi na jaaon.
Maan laughed at her innocence.
Maan: This is what i love about you, your innocence. tumahara yeh sharmana, tumhari ye bholapan. I just love it.
Geet smiled and rested her head back on maans chest
Geet: sach! Maan main iss din ka kitne saalon se intizaar kar rahi thi.
Maan: ab intizar khatam hua geet, no one can seperate us now.
All of a sudden dark clouds started to form and rain started to fall. Maan looked up and sighed, but then smiled knowingly, there was still much more planned.
Geet: Oh no Maan, Baarish shuru hogaaye ab kya?
Maan: What did you think that your special day has finished, abhi toh bohot kuch plan kiya hai.
Geet: Matlab ?
Geet was confused what more could there be, but then she knew this was MAAN SINGH KHURANA he has probably got so much planned. Geet smiled with that thought.
Maan: just wait and see Jaan
Geet smiled at how maan kept giving her new names.
Maan and Geet got of the horse and took it back to the stables.
Then Maan took Geets hand and took her towards the farmhouse. Maan tied Geets eyes with a hankerchief.Geet wondered what Maan was upto.
Geet: arre maan yeh kya?
Maan: its a surprise, so you'll just have to wait.
Geet smiled and nodded.
When they reached to where they were supposed to be Maan took the hankercheif off geets eyes.
Geet slowly opened her eyes and what she saw stunned her.
Precap: Romantic Dinner

Guys I know you were expecting the romantic dinner, really sorry but thought they should do something else before that, next part mein zuroor hoga.

Hope you liked it, Please please comment it really motivates us to write further. So the more you guys comment the faster we update, and of course don't forget to hit the like button

Love you all xx

Saba and Hiraa xxx

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Posted: 13 years ago
#54
yay finally an update
was waiting for it
beautifulll one
love it
maan got to know geet loved him from 4 years yippiee
love the horse riding scene
beautifully written u guys
cant wait for next part
please continue soonnn
thank u
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Posted: 13 years ago
#55

Originally posted by: maangeetcrazy

yay finally an update
was waiting for it
beautifulll one
love it
maan got to know geet loved him from 4 years yippiee
love the horse riding scene
beautifully written u guys
cant wait for next part
please continue soonnn
thank u

thanks glad you liked it 😳
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Posted: 13 years ago
#56
awww soo sweet and cuteee
cont soon
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Posted: 13 years ago
#57
Superb amazing hiru sabu
Really really loved it
Muahhh
Xxx
Plz plz cont soon 🤗
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Posted: 13 years ago
#58

Originally posted by: Geetmaan1234

Superb amazing hiru sabu
Really really loved it
Muahhh
Xxx
Plz plz cont soon 🤗

aww thanx sehru
love yu x
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Posted: 13 years ago
#59
Thanxs for liking!!!
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Posted: 13 years ago
#60
oh so romantic...i loved that she told him she came here for him...he will be further surprised when he will know that his daadi also knows about it

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