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now chapter --5




today arman was very happy. He had taken a leave from hospital to come in orphanage with bi.it was the most important day of his life,cause it was the day when his life,his love came in this world. It was basket's birthday. Whether she is with him or not, whether she is not in arman's life or not, it does not any matter to him , arman always celebrates her birthday and thanks her in his heart to come in his life, for giving him a lot of happiness ,whether it be for a short time,but its memories always gave him new spirit to survive in this world.


A kid : "arman bhaiya,aap to har saal riddhima didi ke bd mein humey cake ,chocolates khilate ho,toys dete ho…par didi keun nahi aati? Plz.ek baar unhe le aao na…humne kabbhi unhe nahi dekha.

A little girl : 'arey buddhu! Wo kaise aayegi? Arman bhaiya ne bataya na ki wo ek angel hai..angel yahan aa sakti hai kya?

The boy : "ok,feer aap humari taraf se unhe bahut pyar aur kissi dena….

Arman said with moist eyes.." jarur beta,mai usey aap sab ki taraf se bahut pyar dunga aur kissi bhi. Chalo ab basket ball khelen…..

Suddenly arman's mobile rang…dr.mohit was on other side…"hello,dr.arman…come soon..emergency….


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Today was riddhima's birthday,but not a rejoicing day for riddhima. Her eyes were raining from a week continuesly. She wanted to give up her life, she wished to die. she had lost her baby,her armina. When she was in maldives,suddenly sidh phoned her that armina was missing. To hear it ridhima had become totally mad,dr .seema managed somehow and took her back . sidh confessed her that he was very tensed about some problems of hospital that day and don't know how he lost his temper and heated argument with kaki and made her to leave the house.


But next day, he realized that he had done such a idiotic work and then he phoned " public service union "and they sent a new maid servant for armina.


The maid servant maya managed everything nicely and assured sidh about taking care of armina. Armina was a jolly baby,so she made friendship with maya soon.


That day, as usual sidh had gone hospital at early morning . late night when he returned home, didn't find anyone at the home, neither the maid servant nor armina. As soon as possible,he reported police station and phoned riddhima. But now 1 week had passed,but police failed to get any news of armina.


Kaki had came back getting this news and she told everything what was happened that day, how armina was got injured,how sidh was avoided her.

Sidh came to say sorry to riddhima.he told with a guilty face ." I am sorry riddhima,mai aisa nahi chahta tha. Aur usdin mai kuch cases ke kaaran tensed tha,so lost my temper and did a big mistake."


riddhima could not speak a word,but her heart said "kitna difference hai tumme aur arman mein sidh. Wo apna temper khota to khud ko hurt karta par dusron ko kabhi nahi."


Riddhima's world was ruined . without arman she was leaving her life like a hell , and then armina came who made her life like a heaven …" kahan hogi meri bachchi!! Mumma ko kithi chahiye beta, apni armina wapas chahiye, wapas aa jao meri bachchi,mai ab kabhi bhi tumhe chodkar nahi jaungi…." Riddhima was mumbling in her sob.


She remembered,how armina seemed happy,when she returned from hospital…at once she jumped on her lap and kissed her both cheeks with saying in her kiddish voice…."mumma,nith ,kithi…

And when riddhima played armina's fav.song "hum to chale they dost banke ,jaane kahan se dill mill gaye" on the music system, she used to clap with a great joy and uttered…mumma,doth, nith……muaaa……(mumma,dost,nice,muaaah).


And how she did insist to riddhima for album and seeing arman's pic in album how she used to clap and utter …"pappa…nith..kithi…lima..kithi pappa…..(papa,nice,kissi,riddhima kissi papa).


"kahan hogi meri bachchi !" riddhima was crying bitterly .she took out arman's pic and said.."arman,maine tumhari beti kho di..mai tumhe kya kahungi arman.maine tumhari amanat kho di."



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It was the case of bus accident. Bus was coming from aligarh.many died, a few injured …there are many children in the bus too.. Arman ,dr. mohit ,dr. naina,dr. sahnaaj…they tried day and night to save life. A lot surgery, frustation made them tired mentally and phisically too.next day at evening , Dr.naina came to arman.."arman,plz mujhe thori help karoge?"

Arman :"sure dr.naina…kahiye."

Dr.naina…"actually 2 din ho gaye mai ghar nahi ja payi. Tum jante ho na meri beti beemar hai,abhi ghar se feer phone aaya tha,usey feer se high fever hai."

Arman assured her touching her hand.." don't worry,mai aapki duty sambhal lunga. Aap apni beti ke paas jao. Kya koi surgery baaki hai?

Naina :" nahi,kuch bachchon ke fractures hue they.all surgeries are completed. Bas, children ward mein 2-3 round de dena. Hope koi problem nahi aayegi."

Managing time, arman went to the children ward.there were many injured children in the ward .arman brought chocolate for them.they were very happy to get chocolates. Other children knew arman very well. They called him arman bhaiya.arman made love to all, gave chocolates ,told stories. He was so much tired ,so he had to go to home.

A boy : "arman bhaiya ,aur ek kahani sunao na,princess wali.'

Arman caressed his hair.."beta,kal aaunga to sunaunga..abhi mai bahut tired hun.ok..bye ..aap sab saitani mat karna aur wo jo naye bachche aaye hain,jinhe bahut chot lagi hai,unka dhyan rakhna.

The children…"bye…arman bhaiya…don't worry,unka hum sab milkar dhyan rakhenge."

Arman moved to the door, suddenly he heard a sweet voice …"pappa…pappa..nith..kithi…

Arman turned at the baby who was stretched her little arms towards arman saying these words repeatedly ..

Arman overwhelmed to see the baby…."kitni khubsurat bachchi hai!! kya ye bhi bus mein thi!!
Arman questioned the sister…"sister,ye bachchi kya us bus mein thi?"

Sister.." ji sir,aur iske mummy papa ka death ho chuka hai us accident mein."

Arman felt so sad for this baby,who was continouesly uttering these words streching her arms to arman…"pappa..papa..mumma..nith..kithi…meethi ..kithi…

Arman picked up the baby in his arm.baby at once kissed arman's cheeks and gave a sweet smile.

Sonu : "arey arman bhaiya,iske bhi aapke jaise dimples hain!'

Arman kissed her soft cheeks…"haan sonu,isliye shayad isey mai pasand aaya hun."

Arman to sister.."iske koi aur relatives ka pata chala?"

Sister : " nahi dr.arman…

Arman : " okay sister, beechari bahut hi choti hai,kuch bol bhi nahi sakti.sister aap iska khyal rakhna."

Sister ; " ji….

She wanted to take her from arman's arm..

Armina nodded in na..."nanna..na…na.." she caught arman tightly.

Arman lovingly.." jao beta,mujhe ghar jana hai.."

Baby nodded again in na and kissed arman's cheeks.."pappa…

Sister : "dr.arman..mujhe lagta hai iske papa aap jaise dikhte they."

Arman's eyes were wet….he mumbled.." beechari ko pata bhi nahi uske mummy papa nahi rahe."

Sister took armina bit forcely from arman and it made armina crying bitterly.arman did not realize what was the strange feeling arose while making close the baby in his heart. His heart was saying him not to leave the baby alone…..."kal early morning aa jaunga .aur iske relatives ka pata lagana parega."he thought .
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love u all
punam
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Posted: 13 years ago
#52
Hey I love ur ff so pls count me in!!!!!!
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Posted: 13 years ago
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lovely update love it
wana know what will happen next thankx for pm
continue soon
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maria:)
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Posted: 13 years ago
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hey..
nice part..
continue soon..
loving it..
cant wait to read more..
thnx 4 da PM!!
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Posted: 13 years ago
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awesome part. Waiting to read the next part. Thanks for the pm
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Posted: 13 years ago
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awesome update hope armaan gets to know the truth soon
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Awww...baby apne papa k pass aa gayiii

yayy

ab AR ko b milwa do
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Posted: 13 years ago
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dat was n amazing part!
i m getting curious 2 know dat what is gonna happen now nd how r AR gonna meet!
cont asap
thnx 4 pm
luv...Sunita:)
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Posted: 13 years ago
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chapter --- 6


" gunahon ka devta"...








"pappa…mumm..kithi..mithi….pappa..A-A-N—A-A-N---the baby was crying uncontrolably opened her tiny arms towards arman…..arman opened his eyes with a jerk!!!. No,not real,it's a dream only . It's the first time when arman was dreaming anyone else than riddhima..he was worried about this baby.he mumbled

….".kahan jayegi! Pata nahi koi aayega bhi nahi usey lene.hope grand father and grand mother honge ,jo usey apne dill se lagakar rakhenge. But agar nahi hua to? Bhagwan aisa keun karte hain,usne to duniya bhi nahi dekhi,papa mom ka pyar bhi nahi mila aur wo duniya se chaley gaye!!!!!"


Arman got up from his bed and came in the balcony. He didn't know why a tremendous pain was arising in his heart.

"kya hua beta,aaj phir wo bura sapna dekha?" arman heard bi's voice .

"Nahi bi,need nahi aa rahi"arman said sighly.

"beta 2 din se hospital mein they,rest lena jaruri hai." bi told him lovingly .

Arman looked at bi and said," janti ho bi,ush bus accident mein kaafi logon ki death ho gayi."

Bi : " haan beta,bahut dukh ki baat hai,but hum bhagwan ke aagey kuch nahi kar sakte. Bhagwan unki aatma ko shanti de.aur beta,aap to dr, ho…aapko to ye sab dekhna hi parega."

Arman said sighly.." I know bi.janti ho bi,ek bachchi hai,choti si,badi pyari si…uske papa-mom ki death ho gayi accident mein."

Bi asked sadly : "hey bhagwan!! uska aur koi relative?"

" abhi tak to nahi aaye hain,2 din ho gaye. Janti ho bi,aaj mai jab children ward mein gaya to wo apni choti choti bahen failakar papa …papa kah rahi thi..aur mere bahon mein aate hi bahut khush ho gayi.aur jab usey chorkar aa raha tha,bahut ro rahi thi… arman told with choked voice.

Bi : "shayad uske papa aapke jaise dikhte honge….beechari!!... " bhagwan karey,koi uske relative aa jaye usey lene…beta kya mai aapke hospital ja sakti hun,usey dekhne.?"

Arman : " sure bi,jab tak wo yahan hai,mai bhi kuch time uske paas rahunga."


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1 week had passed ,but no one came to claim the baby. Whenever arman got time, he went to the baby and she became too much happy to see arman and yelled with her sweet kiddish voice .. "papa..mumm…kithi..mithi..nith…."

Now arman got understand her kiddish language. he realized that he couldn't live without the baby.before its ,only riddhima had come in his dream ,but now the baby comes , calling him stretching her arms .."pappa,kithi,nith….


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And one day arman returned home with a great joy….with the baby in his arm. He was very excited like he got a treasure…"b!-iii-ii!..bi-i-ii! dekho aapke ghar mein ek pyara so ,chotu sa guest aaya hai."arman was yelling with joy.


Bi (surprisingly) :" arey,isey aap ghar le aaye!!!'

Arman caught the baby close to his heart.." bi,actually abhi tak iske kisi bhi relative ka pata nahi chala hai ,to maine hospital authority se permission lekar isey apne paas le aaya.aap isey sambhal logi na bi?"


Bi smiled : " haan ,sambhal to lungi,lekin jab iske relatives aayenge to isey dena parega na beta."

Arman(sighed) : "janta hun bi, aur agar na aaye to mai isey apne paas hi rakhunga.kabhi bhi apne se alag nahi karunga."

Bi : "lekin beta..yah kab tak aapke pass rah sakti hai?"

Arman kissed the baby's cheeks…."saari jindagi,mai isey adopt kar lunga.dr.arman mallik ki beti banegi ye.." rishima mallik"…"nahi nahi.."dr.rishima mallik"…..hai na beta?"


The baby shaked her head and giggled….

Arman : "dekha,meri beti ko naam bahut pasand aaya. Bi,isey bhukh lagi hogi,aap iske liye apple juice lao,mai isey apne room mein le ja raha hun.

bi ..(lovingly)." thik hai beta….

Arman took armina in his room and said …"aaj se ye hum dono ka room ,thik hai rishima?...

Armina nodded in yes..."nith….than tu..(nice,thank u…she learnt the new word in the hospital.."thank u")

Arman laughed…."aapko pasand aaya…thank god,meri beti ko pasand nahi aata to problem ho jati."

Suddenly armina pointed at the wall where was riddhima's pic ,and said….."mamma…kithi…mumma…

Arman overwhelmed to hear it.he kissed the baby and said…"kash! Riddhima aapki mummy hoti!! "

Armina laughed and clapped …."mumma,nith…kithi…

Arman : "achcha !to mumma ko kissi karna hai? ok,my sweet heart….chaliye kiss karein,aap ek aur mai bhi ek..


Baby: "yeth….

Arman hugged the baby tightly . tears rolled down his eyes…"kash! Ye sach hota! Riddhima aur wo sath hote aur ye pyari si bachchi unki hoti! Na jaane aise hi kitne pyare sapne dono ne saath milkar dekhe they…jo tutkar bikhar gaye!!...



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At sidh's house


Riddhima was lying on the bed…dr. nishar came to check up

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Dr nishar : "dr.sidh,dr.riddhima bahut weak ho gayi hai.aisa hi chalta raha to she has to admit in the hospital."

Sidh (sighly) : " kya karun…khana to chor hi di hai,har waqt roti rahti hai….
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Dr.nishar (with a sympathetic voice): " apni jaan khoyi hai unhone dr.sidh, apne bachche ko khone ka dard shayad ma ki alawa koi nahi bata sakta….

Sidh : " kuch samajh nahi aa raha kya karun."


Dr.nishar : " I know dr.sidh,aapko bhi apne bachche ko khokar bahut takleef ho rahi hai, any hope?

Sidh : "police to try kar rahi hai,wo kah rahe hain ki aaj kal ek gang ye sab kar rahe hain,kisi ke ghar mein maid servant bankar aate aur feer mouka milte hi bachche ko kidnap kar lete aur feer kisi ko bachcha bech(sell) dete…ek heavy amount mill jata unhe.


Dr. nishar…" right,aur pahle se hi sab arrangement rahta,bachche ko lekar wo family kahin dur chale jaate,police ki pahunch se baahar."


Sidh(sighed) : "sab meri mistake hai ….

Dr.nishar patted him to assure…."Allah ne chaha to aapko aapka bachcha jaldi hi mill jayega.and I think aap dr.riddhima ko mumbai le jaayen,unke relatives,friends ke paas,jo usey samjhaye,usey sahara de."

Sidh : " but I know , wo nahi jayegi."


Dr.nishar.."aap unke kisi relative ko bulao,jisey wo bahut pyar karti hai aur kaha bhi manti hai."


Sidh:" thanks dr.for this suggesion…mai naniji aur anjali ko aaj hi bula leta hun."


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15 days had spent...arman was now very happy…he got an angel..he got her rishima…after hospital's duty he came to home like flying where armina waits for him and seeing him she jumps and utters "pappa..pappa"..clapping with her tiny hands. And then they make a lot masti. At night armina sleeps on arman's broad chest . now arman never seen nightmare,now he dreams about his loving family…"his riddhima and rishima" …


And when he woke , got armina sleeps on his chest giving her little arms around his neck . he cuddled her and mumbled sighly …"kash!ye sapna sach hota! Riddhima aur wo sath hote! Riddhima is nanhi angel ki mom hoti!



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One day when arman was in the hospital,bi phoned him…she was very tensed…..


Arman : "kya hua bi? rishima thik to hai?"

Bi : " haan beta,wo bilkul thik hai….kitni der se bas "pappa jah !!!pappa jah !"..(pappa chale gaye)..kah rahi thi,feer so gayi…


Arman : "to feer kya baat hai bi?"

Bi :" beta aap ghar aao,mai phone par nahi bata sakti...



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Posted: 13 years ago
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aww!! the update was soo cute loved armaan n rishima ...hope AR come together soon can't see them apart...thanx for the pm ..plz update soon:)

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