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Posted: 13 years ago
yipee! AR r 2gether finally!
eagerly waiting 4 next part...plz cont asap
thnx 4 pm sweetie...
love ya
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Posted: 13 years ago
Hey Punam! Awesome part! :) Loved it! So happy abt the reunion!!
Thanks for the PM! Looking forward to the next update.. Do continue soon!! :)
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Posted: 13 years ago
awesome part and loved the reunion between AR ❤️
and thanks for the PM ...😊😊 continue soon...
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Posted: 13 years ago
Awesome part. Finally AR are together. Thanks for the pm
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Posted: 13 years ago
QUOTE=Riarai2346]mai nai karo gi comment:(
ak to itna late update or phir itna chota sa:(😭

plz.1 comments de de meri pyari bahna..i am begging you jaan..and promise ab jaldi ud karungi..and parts itna long likhungi ki sab padhkar faint ho jaynge...😃..love my sweetheart...
punam[
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Posted: 13 years ago
plz update the next part soonest..

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Posted: 13 years ago
despite of its being short*huh..angry look*I am commenting..
It was a gr8 part punam..thank god finally riddhima realize her importance for arman and came back to thme:)and i loved the end..AR reunion(or ha yar ab kajen ki shadi news purani ho chuki hai:P)
thank for SUCH A SMALLL PART(mera first per comment karna ki kushi bhi katahm ho gai thi:(
but hope you will give a long part next time and if not dont except me to comment*dhamki
love
maria:)
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: anamika2010

QUOTE=Riarai2346]mai nai karo gi comment:(
ak to itna late update or phir itna chota sa:(😭


plz.1 comments de de meri pyari bahna..i am begging you jaan..and promise ab jaldi ud karungi..and parts itna long likhungi ki sab padhkar faint ho jaynge...😃..love my sweetheart...
punam[

what if u not and between my name is maria:)
call me be my name ok:)
and u better update soon with longgg part:)
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Posted: 13 years ago
Heye my sweet & cute sisi.. finally Im back!
Just loving to read all ur updates from where i missed..
They are just mind blowing dear.. so chalo lemme reply to ur update sequencially..😛

Chapter 3:
Aww.. tht was succha sweet chap,
thgh I'm really sad to see Ridzy & Ammy's condition,
but happy to knw abt their daughter Armina, succha sweet name..😊
Loved the scene wherein she called Ammy as "pappa" for the first time..
ossum feeling.. hope ammy hears it too..😊 hehe

Chapter 4:
Aww.. Armina is na similar to her father Ammy..lolz she is soo naughty & cute mahn!!
I loved the way she was troubling Sid wid her cute & innocent manner.
Uff, ab yeh Sid ko kaun samjhaye ki she's just a kid & very innocent unaware & not mature enough to understand what he is thinks abt..
Sid, u did it wrong yaar, even after knowing abt Armaan & ridz u married her, if u truely loved her u wud have let her be happy wid Armaan
rather than marrying her himself.. & most of all ur taking revenge frm tht poor lil baby.. aww..thts bad!
Koi ise samjhao Life is not a Game! huh 🐷

Chapter 5:
Bloody Sid is succha bum! 👎🏼
He lost Armina! Damn I can't believe it, how careless can he be yaar!
huh..😡
(Lagta hai baby ka apne asli pappa se milne ka time aa gaya hai..hehehe)
Poor ridzy, i feel really sad for her.. 😔

OMGGG!!! I can't believe it yaar!! Finally Armina met Ammy & how!!! 😲
Aww.. i justtt the scene yaar.. kept imagining it & started dancing Punam! lolzz..😛 hehe
Love u for the ossummmesttt updateee!! muaaah!! ❤️


Chapter 6:
Aww.. succha cute update sisi..😳
Loved the way Ammy had already started taking concern abt Armina unaware of the truth that she is his & ridz daughter..😃
Its soo nice to read it deary, his attchment wid Armina..Im soo loving it! ☺️ hehe
Yippiee, finally Armina is wid her father Ammy at home..
Aww.. she has got a new name Rishima..hehe soo cute..muaah! 🤗
Happy to knw tht finally its happening & ridz & ammy r again bonded wid each other, if not directly but through Rishima..yippie..😃

Sid kuch seekho Armaan se..😵

OMG! aisa kya hua jo Bi ne Ammy ko suddenly ghar bula liya?😲
Eagerly waiting to knw tht Punam!! 😉
chalo lets read the next update to see wat happened..😍

Chapter 7:
OMG! watta twist sisi, 😲
Nope Ammy, Armina is not Sid's but urs & ridz's daughter!!
wen will he cum to knw.. m w8ing soo damn eagerly!!😍

Damn, no Ammy Ridz is alive! plz dnt cry..😔

Lolz.. I loved the way Armina said "pappa,chup'tedy hupp!!Dody hupp!!dolly hupp!!bi hupp!!..."
hehehee ..choo chweet..muaah!! 🤗

Hmm.. so Bi has informed abt Armina being wid Ammy.. aww.. now will Ammy lose Armina too after he lost Ridz..😭

Damn, m soo sad to see Ammy sad.. im really crying after his convo wid Rahul..😭

Just crying ... no more words left to say.. just can't see my Ammy sad at all..😭 😭

Chapter 8:
Nice meeting sheeting wid frnds & all haan..😛
Liked it dear, 👍🏼
cute humour between Muski & Rahul wen rahul said tht "tu to pehle se hi meri gulaam hai" 😆 hehe.. sounded funny.😛

Oyye hoyye! loved ur shayari sis..though armaan said it..(but likhi to tumne hi hai na 😆 hehe)

OMG! Finally Ridz came to meet Ammy , they met after yrs.. yippie..😃
Loved their still position narrating complaint, resentment, love in their heart ☺️
Alas, ammy came to knw tht Armina is his & ridzy's daughter..yippie

Damn, y is Ridz so arrogant! wen ammy wasnt der wid her she missed him, & now wen he's here..she insulting him..😔 sheee..gandi..😛 😆 hehe
Oh! she really gave Armina to Ammy? gosh! 😲 though she is not expressing , it mi8 have been so damn diff for her..😔

Nice chap sisi.. ur really doin it like professionals do! must say! 😉
I just hope all gets well soon between Ammy & Ridz want to see them together..😊

Chapter 9:
OMG! Ridz, what did she do, where is she?😲
Damn.. she has already suffered so much..yet goin to suffer more..nahiii..😵 😛

Proud of Anji tht she finally realised tht silence will not leave to any conclusion but will worsen the situation..

WTH! How can Shanky be so heartless! 😡 Ridz is missing n still he's behaving as if she isnt his daughter only! Hate him!! 😡

Sid,bloody selfish man.. can't he understand AR r made for each oda & ridz wnt be happy wid Sid!! 😡 &
can't sid get it yet tht his love is also one-sided & selfish!! huh! 🐷

Aww.. my shweeto Ammy unaware tht his Ridz also loves him still & has gone missing!😕
Gosh.. lets see what happens next..😉
Waiting to read the next update too..chalo lets read it now..😛 hehe

Chapter 10:
OMG! I just realised, u wrote this update on the New yr sisi.. srry wasnt active much..😕
I knw im late but still.. Wishing u a very Happy New Year sis!! 😆 hehe
muaaah..hugsss & kissesss to uuu..🤗 ❤️

Coming to the update,
Wowie! 7 yrs have passed..Oh! no..my Ammy is still soo sad..😭
aww.. sweet Armina cares soo much for Ammy..😊
Lolz.. loved their cute dance, pillow fi8 & their lovable bond wid each other..😉😃

OMG! wat did Ashima say.. she hates her mom? Damn thts so sad..Ridz...😔
Aww.. but she realised her mistake too.. thts so sweet of her..🤗

Ain? wat did Anji say? Wowie! Is ridz at Atul's mom dad's place? 🤔
Im soo excited to read wat will happen next..will ashima be able to get her momm back? 😍

Nice update sisi.. happy to read the turn in storyline..ur doin a gr8 job sisi..😃👍🏼

Chapter 11:
Aww..Anji ...happy to knw tht there's sum1 to tell Ashima abt her mom ridz..😉😃
Her narration, rejoiced my mind wid all those beautiful AR moments..😊
Happy to see that Anji & Atul are contributing in AR's reunion!
I hope they & Rishima succeed in getting Ridz back in their & most importantly in Ammy's Life..😃😉

Nice update sisi.. but its too sad.. i want Ammy to be happy.. as i always say..my heart is crying to see him sad..🥺

Chapter 12:
Aww.. soo sweet of Rishima.. Loved the way she met Ridz & played BB wid her.. her sweet thghts made me smile..😃
Yippie.. happy to see that they are frnds now..
Loved the convo between them..😉

Aah! nothing's changed.. she's still the same..My Ammy's basket ☺️

Aww.. i just loved to read the sweet convo between them at the orphanage wen Ridz asked Rishima,"aapke papa ka naam kya hai batao?' & she replied,
"mere papa ka naam'pappa hai.."
lolz..choo chweet..🤗
but have to admit..Rishima is veryyy smart & clever..aakhir beti kinki hai!!! 😛 hehe 😆

Oh My goodness, wat an exciting chap sisi.. just can't wait to knw wat will happen next! 🤪
I had a smile all through reading this update! 😃

Chapter 13:
Loved the way u interpretted the story sis..👍🏼😉
now finally Ridz had got Rishima's habit & not seeing her one day made her feel so lonely..😊

Wow, so finally after 7 long years, she felt to go back to Ammy.. 😃
Im sooo happy!! yippieee...

Lets see wat happens next..😉

Chapter 14:
Oyye hoyye! Armaan ki beti bilkul uski tarah bahane banati hai.. aur woh bhi uske hi style mein..😆 hehe cute..😉
But love the way Anji's smart Angel corrects her mistake everytime..🤗

Enjoyed reading the convo soo much dear, just had tears in my eyes as I suddenly remembered DMG AR separation moment..😔
cudn't forget Ammy's face even once..his tears.. his pain..

I hv become sad again.. after reading this chap.. miss the happiness..🥺
hope everything turns out well soon..😉

Chapter 15:
Finally! Ridz saw Atul & Anji wid Armina & Angel..😃 yippiee..
Aww.. her Ammy is gonna be der soon.. but wid his wife? oops.. Ridz doesnt knw abt their plan na..😛 hehe
nvrmnd, she'll come to knw soon..oyye hoyye!! Im soo happy!! dhinchak dhinchak dhin dhin..😆🤣

OMG!! WTH!! Ridz is really mad yaar!! Y did she leave again! huh! misunderstanding!! nahiii...

Ossum chappp sisi!! Love u soo muchh!! muaah!! 🤗
Im sooo eagerlyyy waiting to read wat happened next! 🤪

Chapter 16:
Thank God, Ridz returned to the orphanage,
though she feels the gang mi8 hv left till now.. but i dnt think so..😛 hehe
chalo lets read further..😉

Oh! God! I can't believe its finally happening!! My Ammy will finally meet her Basket & Ridz will finally meet her Armaan..😲😵
finally watta surprise she got! loved it.. she met all together Anji di,atul,muskan,rahul,nikki,armina,angel …all (except Armaan!! where is he?? ) 😲

Awww... the best re-union everrr!! 👍🏼
OMG! OMG! OMG! OMG! OMG! OMG! OMG! OMG! OMG! OMG! OMG! OMG! OMG! OMG! OMG! !! I can't believe it that they actually met ,hugged & finally kissed yaarrr!!
Was dying for ittt!! Im sooo happyyy!!!! Showers of tears flowing through my eyes at this moment!! can't express wid wat happiness im goin through this very moment!!😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃

Thank u sooo much for writing such an ossum FF sis.. 👏
Im feeling very lucky as well as happy to read an amazing FF like this.. it rejuvinated the DMG Era.. The AR love.. Romance & Everything related to it..⭐️
Its my first FF that i read completely!! Can't tell u how happy I am sis!! 😃
You made my life yaar!! I will cherish this FF all my life for sure!! 👍🏼
Love u sooo muchhh sisi!! ❤️
Your just tooo goood!! Hatts off to u for re-creating The Era of AR LOVE!! 👏
Your just the bestesttt!!! Love u for everythinggg!!! 🤗
OMGG!! Im going nutsss in happiness!! 🤪 Party timeee!!!

Updateee sooon!!! Can't w8 to knw wat happens next!!!!!!!

Lotsss offf Loveee!!!!!
Ur sis,
Jyo...❤️
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Posted: 13 years ago
hey my lovely lovely friends..
peachgirl, TANVI_SEXY, Jyo_Ksg, Kriti_rox, araja1234, hotKaJen, crazy4KASH_AR, helen_of_troy, teenorchid, Riarai2346, samades, AR_LOVER..thanks a ton ,thanks a lot dear for your lovely lovely comments...



dharmita darling,thanks dear ,your comments make my day...you are my beloved reader ,my sweet sis,who makes comments on both place,in dmg blog and on IF too...love you sweet heart...muaaah!!




and asma dear...mai tumhare comments ke baare mein kitna bhi kahun,kam hai...kuch aise pyare readers and friends mill jaye to jindagi apne aap khubsurat ban jati hai,jina meaningful ban jata hai,but mai hi late ho jati hun tumhe comments karne mein...actually jab tak mai tumhari ff achchi tarah ,aram se padh na lun..kuch bhi comments nahi kar sakti...aur ek baar nahi,mai 2 baar padhti hun..😃..1st jaldi jaldi and phir usey aram se...aur tab comments karti hun..😃😃..anyways ud karte hi mujhe link jarur bhejna...




and sorry so sorry maria, now i will call you with your name..."MARIA" its a beautiful name...and please don't leave to do comment...



and jyoti...overwhelmed to see your long and inspiring comments, you won my heart shona...i think it should be included in Guinness book of world...such a beautiful comment!you did hard work to make this comment...reading each part and making comments one by one on every part is too tough ,i know it janu...so now i will call you my "jyoti janu"...you gave me the best gift of my life ...actually i have no words which describe my feelings,my expression seeing your comments ...thanks a lot dear...love ..love ... love...


now enjoy the next part...chapter --17


RECAP...


Without saying a word ,he stretched his arms towards her basket….inviting her to enter in his life….. And in a while,they were in each other arms, wrapping tightly,caressing each others with their lips……



NOW...




Gunahon Ka Dewta





Arman whispered : "basket!! Ek gunah ki itni bari saza?

Riddhima breathed…."agar wo gunah tha,to mai chahungi,ye gunah hum har janam me karen…wo gunah nahi arman,pyar tha.tumne mujhe pyar kiya tha,koi paap nahi."

Arman squeezed her in his chest…caressing her hairs and again whispered…"ab mujhe chorkar jaogi to nahi?"

Riddhima nodded in na and hid her face in his chest…..

They didn't know how long they stood like this .perhaps they wanted to live in each other's arm..in each other's feelings forever..…..after a while riddhima whispered..."arman…...

Arman uttered : "haan basket…

Riddhima looked at him with her almond eyes,which had full of complaint..…"sabne mere liye welcome geet gaaye,par tumne nahi…

Arman smiled and kissed her hair…"keun pata hai basket?

Riddhima said na through her eyes….

Arman kept his finger under her chin and lifted it…"keunki tum kabhi meri jindagi se gayi hi nahi. Har waqt,har lamha,har din tum mere sath rahti thi ,ho aur rahogi. Phir welcome song keun gaun?

Riddhima pouted.." phir bhi…

Arman showed his dimples…"agar tumhe pasand hai to gaunga,par aaj nahi…jis din tum mere ghar aaogi..meri jindagi ka hissa bankar…riddhima arman mallik banakar….

Riddhima's cheeks became red tint to listen it and she again hid her face in arman's chest..the best place to hide her expressions.


Suddenly they heard armina's voice…"offoh pappa!! Ab aapki basket mill gayi to beti ko bhul gaye?

They parted at once…rishima was in front of them ..naughtiness was clearly showing in her almond grey eyes…. But arman pulled riddhima in his arm like a shameless lover and said to rishima…"aapki mumma hai hi itni khubsurat aur pyari…


Ridhima blushed :" arman!! Bachchi ke samne..

Arman laughed: " ye bachchi nahi saitan ki nani hai tumhe nahi pata riddhima…


Rishima pouted.." bhalai ka jamana hi nahi raha,itni hard labour ki do lovers ko milane ke liye aur uska ye mujhe award mill raha hai…

Riddhima come to rishima and pulled her in arm…"meri beti duniya ki sabse achchi aur khubsurat ladki hai…aapko kya award chahiye beta?...

Rishima : "hmmm….thik hai,time aane par mang lungi,mana mat karna…

Riddhima : " kabhi nahi,meri princess jo mangegi milega…

Rishima yelled with joy…."ye!! that's great!! Mumma chaliye na , sab wait kar rahe hain…mera birthday celebrate karna hai…

Arman : " rishima beta,aap jao..hum abhi aate hain..in a minute…

Rishima: " okay……

After rishima leaving the room ,arman again pulled his basket in his arm,like if she goes away from him, surely he will lose her again….riddhima whispered…"arman,humari beti humara intzaar kar rahi hai…


Arman (reluctantly) …."haan,chalo…par mere paas hi rahna ,dur mat jana….."




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After the celebration of armina's birthday, all friends did chatting the whole night……atul,anjali,nikki,muskan ,rahul and arman aur riddhima.they had a lot things to say each other,which had happened in their lives last 7 years….but all those moments were incomplete without their friends….they complained to arman riddhima that why they did it….why they separated…why they left mumbai sanjiwani..why they left their friends……while they knew that they were incomplete without each other,then why they tried to keep away from each other.


And at last arman assured all…."mai promise karta hun ab kabhi bhi apne friends aur apni basket se alag nahi rahunga…

Rahul : 'aur riddhima tum?

Riddhima made close to arman.." kabhi nahi,ab mai apni family chodkar kahin nahi jaungi…


Nikki rounded her eyes : "family se! that means humey chorkar jaogi?

Riddhima caught nikki's hand lovingly : "nikki,tum sab meri family hi ho sirf dost nahi..promise,mai kisi ko chodkar nahi jaungi.

Friends…"ye hui na baat….


Anjali : "ridhji,maine abhi pappa,nani aur ma se baat ki,wo bahut khush hain…tumahara wait kar rahe hain..


Riddhima : "di, hum kab jayenge mumbai?mujhe papa ,nani aur ma se milna hai…


Anji :" kal hi chalenge ridhzi….mujhe bhi pappa se milna hai…nani aur ma to humare ghar aa jati thi milne par pappa se itne salon tak nahi mili…




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Next day at orphanage


Golu : " di,aap hume chodkar phir se ja rahe ho?"

Riddhima : "sorry beta,princess ko meri jarurat hai..

Pari : "aapki beti aapko mill gayi di,to kya humey bhi apne mummy-papa mill jayenge?

Muskan : "sure beta…aapko bhi mumma-papa mill jayenge ekdin.

Atul : "idea! Keun na hum apne sanjiwani mein ek aisa centre kholen jahan wo parents contact kar sakte hain,jo bachche adopt karna chahte hain….

Rahul patted atul's back : "ya,atul..shabash!!…nice idea..phir wo yahan se bachche adopt kar sakte hain."


Kaki : "aap sabko tension lene ki jarurat nahi,mai yahan hun ,lekin agar aisa ho to achcha hi hoga .bachchon ko ek achcha ghar mill jayega…


Riddhima hugged kaki :"thanks kaki…mai yahan aati rahungi…aap inka dhyan rakhna.


Kaki caressed her hair…"thanks to mujhe tera kahna chahiye ki tujhe akal aayi…aur haan,ab jab aana to dr.arman aur meri armina sath lana,burna mai yahan enter nahi karne dungi tumhe.pata nahi phir unko chodkar mera dimag khane yahan rah jao to!...


All laughed to hear kaki's words.

Arman wrapped his arms around riddhima's waist ..."nahi kaki,ab koi chance nahi. Ab aapki pyari riddhima ko mai ek pal ke liye bhi apni aankhon se dur nahi jane dunga."

Muskan hit him :" oyye khote,kuch to sharam kar,itne bachchon ke samne…


Anjali : "ab chalen,flight ka time ho gaya……



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At sashank's house


"kya maine itna bara crime kiya tha riddhima,jo mujhe bilkul bhul gayi?"dr.sashank told with choked voice.

"papa,aise mat kahiye..maine hi galat kiya tha,aapki baaten na mankar..par mai kya karun papa..i am sorry papa…."riddhima lowered her head.


Nani : "ab wo baaten sab koi bhul jao…sashank,humari riddhima humey wapas mill gayi,ye kya kam hai?..aur sath mein anjali bhi ab aa gayi ,armina,arman…aaj humare liye kitni khushi ka din hai."



Dr.sashank : "yes ma,hum sab ke liye isse bari khushi ka din koi nahi,mujhe meri riddhima wapas mill gayi. Aur haan ,wo dr. arman hai kahan? I want to talk to him something important….






Love you all
punam
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