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Posted: 13 years ago
#91
hey dear first of thankx alot for considering me as your friend i am grateful to god to have friend loke you|:)
one more think cant press like button bu i guess net prob sorry for that
lovey update dear)
you make me remember some old memories the start of dmg gr8 update:)
sorry for late reply
continue soon
thankx for best wishes
and a very very happy new to you as well:)
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Posted: 13 years ago
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hey Punam! how r u sweetie? i m toh enjoying here!
da updt was awesome s usual!
luved da way u've shown AR's journey!
luved Anjie 4 dis! i hope dey r successful in bringing Ridz back in Armaan's life!
cont soon nd thnx 4 pm
lots of luv...Sunita:-))
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Posted: 13 years ago
#93
Nice part and thanks for the pm
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Posted: 13 years ago
#94
wen r u planning to update??😔update soon please😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
#95
I hope Rishima may bring Ridz back to Armaan.
I liked the way njy revealed the truth to Rishima keeping the details aside...
You are an amazing writer Punam...
Plz update the next part soonest.
love
Asma
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Posted: 13 years ago
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The following 7 member(s) liked the last post:


TANVI_SEXY, crazy4KASH_AR, vidu87, araja1234, hotKaJen, Riarai2346, AR_LOVER ...thanks a lot my loving readers and friends, for appreciating my hard works...hope you will like this part too...


now...

chapter --12





"kya aapko basket karna aata hai?"rishima asked riddhima,rounded her almond eyes.

"yes, kya mai aap logon ke sath khel sakti hun? Plz'." riddhima requested the girls.

"yes,of course''.humey khushi hogi " Angel bowed her head.

Riddhima smiled to see her antics and took the ball from her hand.


And in a few minutes ,she made a lot baskets.all the children were looking at her in a great amazement,but rishima and angel were smiling in their heart'.."well done basket! Aap to kuch bhi nahi bhuli'aap abhi bhi champion ho'love u ."



rishima was fascinated to see her mom..."meri mumma kitni khubsurat hai!! bilkul ek pari ki tarah..nahi nahi koi princess jaisi...kitni sweet smile deti hai! kitna pyar se bolti hai! kitna achcha basket karti hai! thanks papa,mujhe itni khubsurat mumma dene ke liye...mai bhi promise karti hun,aapki basket aapko milegi and of course mai ab apni mumma ko liye bina nahi jaungi.."





Riddhima came to rishima and waved her hand in front of her eyes'"hey princess! kahan kho gayi? Ab mujhe jana hai..bye.."



Rishima caught her hand quickly.."plz.don't go'I will miss you."



Angel immediately pressed her shoulder to warn her and whispered'"control ,rishzi control!



Riddhima startled to hear it''."kya mai isey janti hun? Keun bahut apna sa lag rahi hai?"



Rishima controlled herself''."I mean'aap itna achcha khelte hain to keun na aap humey basket ball sikhayen? "


Riddhima : "mai coach nahi hun beta'mai ek dr.hun..



Rishima 's tongue slipped'."I know..


Riddhima looked at her surprisingly'"kaise?"



Rishima made a smack to herself in her heart.." nahi..i mean'aap dr.jaisi dikhti hain'.



Ridhima praised her '"hmmm'very clever'smart girl'what's your name?


Rishima answered innocently.."aapne hi to kaha na princess'


Riddhima :" wo to aap bahut khubsurat ho na isliye kaha'



Rishima ; "aap to mujhse bhi khubsurat ho like a princess ki mummy'I mean bari princess'.



Riddhima smiled :"hmmm..aapko bahut baaten banani aati hai..but now I have to go..barna mujhe late ho jayegi..



Rishima held her hand :"promise karo aap kal phir aaoge'.


Riddhima made close to her'."promise'.bye'.


And it was the beginning of their friendship.riddhima is still used to do her morning walk and even takes a rest at the basket ball court's entrance . It was her a cute habbit which had made her to meet with her love arman once and now with her daughter armina.




'''''''''''''''''''''''''''..


Next day after basket ball play'..




Riddhima :" bachchon ,now I have to go'.

Bachche'"bye di'

Riddhima looked at rishima who was standing tilting her head down with a sad face..

Riddhima :" hey princess,kya baat hai? aap itni sad keun ho gayi?

Angel managed :" wo aap ja rahi hai na'wo waisi hi hai,bahut emotional'.mujhe dant bhi isliye khati hai'


Suddenly riddhima remembered her anji di who had always scolded her for this reason. Tears came in her eyes'she realized that she was missing her anji di'how long it have been to see her,to speak with her,to hug her'..to hear her scolding'.

Angel : "what happened dr'.aap ro rahi ho?

Riddhima wiped her tears quickly'"nahi'achcha princess beta,aap mere ghar chalogi?

Rishima jumped with a joy'.."aap apne ghar hume le jayengi?but aapka duty?

Riddhima caressed her hair.."aaj mera off hai'.

And in a while she saw that both the girls caught her hands firmly such as won't leave her anyhow..'"chaliye dr'.humey aapke ghar jana hai..


Riddhima :" wait wait'aapke mom-dad aapko dhudhenge toh nahi?
They both nodded with confidently'.'"no'



They came at orphange with riddhima'..riddhima introduced them with the orphanage children'

Bachche :" hi'..

Rishima and angel.."hello '..humse dosti karoge?

Bachche :" ya,sure''

Riddhima :"bachchon ,aapko school jana hai na'jaiye ready ho jayen ,kal Sunday hai..kal aaplog inke sath khelna'

The kids nodded in yes and went from there'

Rishima (giving a surprise expression) :" aapke itne saare bachche hain!!!

Riddhima laughed at her innocence'."yes'inka koi bhi nahi hai mere siwa'ok,ab aap dono apne baare mein batayen'maine aapko pahle nahi dekha yahan?


Angel :" actually dr.hum yahan summer vacation mein ghumne aaye hain'

Riddhima :" ok,but where are you from ?


Angel :" from mumbai'.


Riddhima :" I love mumbai'.


Angel : "aap wahan kabhi gayi hain?



Riddhima :" hmmm'yes'achcha meri baat chodo,ab aapke papa kya karte hain,unka naam kya hai batao'



Rishima(quickly) : "mere papa ka naam'pappa hai..



Riddhima :" nahi,unka naam bataiye'


Rishima : " bataya na,pappa hai'.


Riddhima laughed'"achcha! Means aap nahi batayengi..but why beta?


Rishima :"ummm! Actually papa ne kaha tha sabko nahi batana chahiye'



Riddhima :"but mai to aapki friend hun na'.



Angel :"aap to badi buddhu ho!!aap to itne barey ho,friend kaise hongi?



Rishima managed.."aap friend ban sakti ho,agar aap hume aloo ke parathe aur gazar ka halwa khilao'


Riddhima smiled.." ok'



she was missing someone very badly!'.someone her own,who is very close to her heart'.."dill chahta hai roj mai aise gazar ka halwa khata rahun aur roj banane wali ka hath chumta rahun"'




Angel interrupted in her thinking :"kahan kho gayi aap?'



Riddhima :"kahin nahi'.mai abhi aap logon ko aapki pasand ki cheezen banakar khilaungi..achcha aapke papa kya karte hain ye to bataoge na'.



Rishima : " hmmm'wo humey aur mumma ko bahut pyar karte hain'



Riddhima laughed.."ok,means aap nahi bataoge..


Rishima (making face): "abhi itni bhi dosti nahi hui hai '..



Angel again scolded'"bittu'.badon se aise behave nahi karte na'.


Rishima( holding own ears)'"cholly di'.



Riddhima remembered her childhood ,her di,her papa ,her nani,mom and someone who is close to her heart'.she asked to herself.."kya baat hai,jinhe wo bhulne ki koshish karti rahi,aaj inhe dekhkar wo itne keun yaad aa rahe hain? Nahi,usey bhulna hoga'ab tak to shayad sabhi usey bhul bhi chuke honge."


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The children had gone.riddhima was feeling a deep loneliness'she took out the album 'and started to caress the pics '. '.papa and chottu riddhima'di and her ridhzi'.nani,ma and riddhima'friends ---atul,sapna,muskan,rahul and riddhima.. her princess armina and armina's lidima ..and her jaan arman and arman's basket.. they all were such an integral part of her life that she could make distance from them but could not separate them from her life.



"Armina!!..na jaane ab kitni bari ho gayi hai!!'shayad princess aur angel ki tarah!kya wo kabhi apni beti se mill payegi? Kabhi usey pyar kar sakegi? Kabhi uski pasandida dishes banakar khila sakegi? "




"Arman! Kya wo phir se kabhi uska sath payegi? Kya kabhi wo pyar se phir usey gale lagayega? Usne bahut badtamiji ki thi na,dill tod diya tha uska'but wah abhi bhi usey utna hi chahti hai'uski bahon mein samana chahti hai..pyar karna chahti hai."




Again tears started to flow from her eyes'.she didn't know how she had controlled them until now'which came out again after meeting those loving children.




"phir yaad aa gayi is duniya ki sabse masum par ek adhuri prem kahani'jo shayad ab kabhi puri nahi hogi,ranjha aur heer ki tarah,romeo-juliet ki tarah,laila-majnu ki tarah,sirhi-farhaad ki tarah."



love you all
punam
Edited by anamika2010 - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
#97
nice part and thanks for the pm
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Posted: 13 years ago
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hey Punam! dat was so adorable!...luved it!...cont soon nd thnx 4 pm
luv...Sunita:-))
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Posted: 13 years ago
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awesome part and thanx for the pm.😊
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Posted: 13 years ago

superly awesome part

luvd it 2 d core
thnx 4 d pm
cont super soonish

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