DEJAVU II (horror) UPDATING - Page 3

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Posted: 14 years ago
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congrats on season 2

continue

update soon

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Posted: 14 years ago
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Samra congratulations on ur new thread. Just completed reading Dj vu Season I and loved it. Have sent u a pm on my feelings. Pls read and am eagerly waiting for Season II.

Ps. Pls add me to ur pm list.
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Posted: 14 years ago
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CONGRATS on the season 2...
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congrats boss ji
i m looking forward...
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Congrats on season 2
Thanx for the PM
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i am in for it 😊 waiting
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I am eagerly waiting for Deja Vu season 2!😃 Congratulations and celebrations!🥳🥳
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Originally posted by: KamalikaG

I am eagerly waiting for Deja Vu season 2!😃 Congratulations and celebrations!🥳🥳

thankyou so much kamalika
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Hi all . thankyou all who encouraged me to continue with this attempt at horror.

and those who did not bothered commenting well maybe one day you will also ike my work hoping against all odds😉
here is the first part. enjoy reading don't forget to comment
those who want pm add sschPm in their buddylist.

PART 1

The lonely deserted roads and the evening breeze were making it more creepy for her. She had never been to this part of shimla technically this was not even the part of the city it was a secluded far away deserted part .

she had been driving up the hill for past 15 mints and still there was no sign of any banglow but finally she saw a distant light and she knew she had reached her destination.

She sped up the car another 15 mints and she was standing infront of a huge bunglow. The gate was closed forcing her to park her car outside. All alone at this deserted place it was freaking her out but she could not just go without talking to him it had taken most of her day to bribe the office clerk to giver her his address.

She sighed a deep breath and touched the gates of the big villa. The dying sunlight was still shining over the gates . she out of curiosity tried to clean the area on which some letter were carved. G.M .

G.M villa what does that mean.. she cleaned her now dirty hands with her pants and pushed the door . it creaked. An animal roared in distance almost making her shriek.

Ye sab mera veham hai. Chup chap ander chal.aj daikhti ho wo kaise bhagta hai mujh se.

She started walking on the long road that wd take her to the main door. She could see the villa was divided in two parts which were interconnected.the whole villa was old but not as ancient . maybe he was not taking proper care of it she looked around

Or maybe he does not take care at all.she reached the main building she knocked but nobody answered. She knocked again but nobody answered but then door opened itself.

She blew a breath maybe it was open from before my knock pushed it.

She stepped in. wind chimes were blowing it was all dark in there even the dim sunlight was not coming in there anymore.

She went ahead in search of light but with every passing second her heart beat was rising. She could almost feel someone was watching her but who. She many a times turned around but nobody was there. And then she heard a distant sound of something falling .

She could not control anymore she turned back and started running blindly towards the exit only to hit in something solid. Someone solid

She shrieked out loud.

What the hell are you doing in my house and why are you shouting.??

PRECAP:
she has to come here . she will come here .you will see everyone will see. we will be together
he was saying it with so much conviction but he had lost hope he knew better there was no medicine for his wound.
sorry for a short part but i got short comments . what could i do 😉😉
Edited by ssch - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
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AWESOME START!
it's sooo intense and kinda creepy!
me likeyyy
cont soon
thanks for the pm

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