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Posted: 13 years ago
sam so nice update.
just can't wait when
geet can see maan.
very interesting story
line.this is becoming
more & more superb.
great going sam
Edited by simm28 - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago

awesome updt

mysterious & creepy but intresting as well

so geet is seeing herself & dat"sum1" in her dream & she is running & screaming in pain

poor meera had to see her sis being lyk this

btw why does this rahul interfere at d end maan & geet r meant to b one

cont soon

thnx 4 d pm

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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: ananya95

awesome updt

mysterious & creepy but intresting as well

so geet is seeing herself & dat"sum1" in her dream & she is running & screaming in pain

poor meera had to see her sis being lyk this

btw why does this rahul interfere at d end maan & geet r meant to b one

cont soon

thnx 4 d pm

thankyou so much ananya
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Posted: 13 years ago
amazing update...
loved it😊😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
awesome updte samra
i loved it
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Posted: 13 years ago
Fantastic update dear! Do continue soon!
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Posted: 13 years ago
hey everyone

Part 5:

And the lights went off. . the sudden wind started blowing….

Aik to ye yaha ki weather. London ki weather se ziada kharab hai. Mosum ka koi aitbar hi nahi hai.

Look outside it seems as if a storm is coming.

Hmmm tofan to ayga hi.

Ha per daikh na abhi thori dair phle kitna shant mosum tha

Tofaan se phle ki khamoshi..

Geet tu na philosophy ki bate bohat krti hai

Tere behan jo ho….as she came to meera to close the window

They both laughed but their laugh was interrupted when they heard banging sounds outside.

They rushed outside. It was dark only moon light coming in. all curtains flying windows and doors banging on their own. Both geet and meera rushed to close them but as if they had their own mind . they wont close and then the glasses started to fall down.. ahhh

They screamed

Meera

Geet chal yaha se bahir nikalte hai

Wo daikh main door us taraf hai. They went toward it but the door wont open things started to fall glasses breaking frames falling on the floor

Ahhh

Meer geet and meera were crying scared to death.

Geet us kmre me chal

As they went toward it the door closed on its own.. ahhh

Then they a saw a shadowed figure passing infront of them,

They were too scared even to breath..

Meera fell down as one light fell down on her.

Meera…. Geet screamed she kneeled down to see her, she was bleeding

Meer to thk hai. Meer ankhe khol to thk hai na

Geet……. And she fainted.

Kia chahte ho tum? Q tang ker re ho hame.? Geet screamed while crying and she could swear she heard a faint sound which felt like tumhai.

Q tang ker re ho. She broke down crying bitterly. She was turning hysteric.

Jao yaha se chor do hame aakela. Chor do hamara peecha. Jao….. she said while sobbing.

And it happened suddenly she cd hear footsteps and then the front door opened and closed and the whole atmosphere lightened.

But she was still to scared to move . she with great effort stood up cautiously and brought meera to the bedroom and did her bandage.

Precap:

Kia hua geet

Bhaiya take this right turn.

Per madam ji wo to shehar se hat ker hai.

Tumhai extra paise mil jae ge.

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Posted: 13 years ago
amazing upd di!!
woh maan hi tha na?
yaar di yeh mysterious hoti jarahi hain mein iss ke bare mein
soch soch ke pagal ho jaon gi 😕
mujhe yeh nahi samahj arahi hai maan geet ke
peche kyun parha hai?
wase awesome upd di!
pm abhi nahi aya but advance mein
thnx thabs dear 😊
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: Qiraat

amazing upd di!!
woh maan hi tha na?

yaar di yeh mysterious hoti jarahi hain mein iss ke bare mein
soch soch ke pagal ho jaon gi 😕
mujhe yeh nahi samahj arahi hai maan geet ke
peche kyun parha hai?
wase awesome upd di!
pm abhi nahi aya but advance mein
thnx thabs dear 😊

thanks kiddo
ummm abhi samjh a jae ga
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