DEJAVU II (horror) UPDATING - Page 16

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Posted: 13 years ago
Awesome Samra...loved the update...Geet is getting closer to her destiny
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Posted: 13 years ago
hi all here is the update
enjoy reading and dont forget to comment
if you want pm add sschPm in your buddylist and thabs wd send you the pm as she being a sweet heart has taken the resposibility of sending pms.
Part 4:

It was raining heavily. It was only 9 pm but the roads were so deserted. Not a single soul was visible. She was running madly .The heavy rain was making it more difficult for her and on top of that wind was blowing as if its gonna blow the whole town with it. She could not breath her legs were giving away and then the unbearable pain started. She clutched her stomach but she cdnt stop .

I have to hurry. I promised I will be back soon. She staggered toward her destination . The pain was becoming unbearable. She cried out loud and lost her balance and fell.

Ahhh

Her cries were ear piercing but she did not know what was more her physical pain or soul pain and then she felt it . she was bleeding. The end had come. The pain was becoming more and more unbearable.

Geet utho utho are you alright?

Ahhh

Geet meera shook her up

Meera I have to get back . he is waiting for me I promised

You promised what kaha jana hai.

Tu aise chila q rahi thi.

And that's when she realized she was dreaming .it was the same dream she had her whole life but it was never this clear.

Kuch nahi khawab daikha tha. Tu so ja.

Geet tu yahi ruk let me get you something to drink and she brought her water.

The same routine occurred everytime she slept . but now she wd keep an alarm in her hand before sleeping so that when ever she wd close her hands in pain she cd squeeze the alarm and wake up before meera cd come.

Some weired things kept on happening to her.she wd often feel as if someone is watching her. Her things wd disappear and different things wd appear in place of them.

The next day same thing happen. Geet slept with alarm but when meera came in to check on her she removed it.

Same dream again. Her cries were ear piercing but she did not know what was more her physical pain or soul pain and then she felt it . she was bleeding. The end had come. The pain was becoming more and more unbearable.

She felt her life draining and then she closed her eyes.

Geet

Mera wait karna I will be back

The unbearable pain was making it difficult for him to even utter a word. But he smiled smiled for her.

Ye sab mere wajah se hua. Why did you do this.

How cd I let this happen to my life you are my life I will live in you

No we will live together. you promise me you will wait for me

He smiled . till the end and even after.

His smile gave her the courage. She tried getting up.

The pain excceded all limits.

Ahhh

Geet utho geet

After a while

For how long have you been dreaming like this

I don't know. Forever they are just getting clear now

I don't know who this girl is or who that boy is? They were in so much pain.. I cd feel their pain . I cd nothing to help them it almost felt as if I was the girl so I let it happen again and again and today for the first time I saw it he took my name I was talking to him. I was that girl.but who was he. His face was so not so vivid.

Mere sath he yeh sab q hora hai'.why me?

I know you are here I can feel you .you are the one who is doing all this. What do you want. '

Bus geet bohat hogya hum wapis chalet hai. Rahul k parents bar bar tere or uski shadi k liye date mang re hai.

And the lights went off. . the sudden wind started blowing'.

PRECAP:
kia chahte ho tum'..?.

Edited by ssch - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago

hmm pichlay update say mujhay laga ki she feels sum one 's presence around her kharkay😲 !!!

but usay dreamz may bhi uss hi person diktha hai.😲..
im sure ki that shud be maan😳...
she is here in india ...just because doctor adviced her!!!
they cant her treat her in better way kya😕?????
hay whose this rahul bdw😲???
greeedy update!😲!!!
awsum job samra⭐️!!!!
Edited by aziza_ahmed - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago


Hey Samra...Geet is experiencing dream in which someone is calling her and she is watching her dyeing...her marriage is going to be fixed to some Rahul...story is getting more mysterious with every update

precap---very interesting but please update fast...

thanx for pm
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Posted: 13 years ago
Loved the update Samra
continue soon
love-Piya
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Posted: 13 years ago
he is all around her
atleast let her see his face
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Posted: 13 years ago
awesome update boss ji

continue soon
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Posted: 13 years ago
loved the update...
please continue soon...
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
looks likes its gonna be intresting from here after

do conti soon boss ji !!!!!
😉
Edited by aziza_ahmed - 13 years ago

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