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Posted: 14 years ago
jaldi ... jaldi ... me waiting ...
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Posted: 13 years ago
hi all here is the update
hope you like it
plz leave comments as it motivates me to write further
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Part 3:

She was standing in the window looking outside on the out skirts of the city.

Why did I come here. I don't know any one here. I don't even know if I belong here or not. Then what was that urge that was driving me crazy to come here. As if something was pulling me towards it. But why am I still so restless why still I am thinking that this is not my destination my destination is still somewhere far.how will I ever find it.Just then the door creeked. She at once became attentive. She looked around but it was so dark in the room that it was impossible to see anything around.the wind chimes started ringing. She turned back to look at them and then she heard the distant foot steps.

He was here she could feel it. Her heart beats were rising with every step. Her cheeks were turning crimson red . finally he stopped right behind her. She closed her eyes in anticipation. . She could feel his breaths falling on her left ear.. she hugged herself tightly. There was a slight breeze and his deep breaths were sending shivers down her spine.

And then finally in his deep husky voice he whispered in her ear.

Geet...

Just one word from his mouth had given her the feeling of getting all the world treasures.

She smiled and unknowingly tears started rolling down her eyes

She was afraid to even breath what if he leaves her again. They stood like that for what sounded like eternity . She had reached the delight of her life.

Geet aaj mere taraf daikho gi nahi.

She smiled and blushed profusely and slowly turned around

But then she felt sudden emptiness she opened her eyes and the lights turned on too.

Geet tu kia ker ri hai yaha.

Geet looked frantically around the room.in search of him. She could swear that was real he was here. But then again he vanished into the dark.

Geet kia hua kisi dhond ri hai. Or tu ro q ri hai. Meera had been looking for her

Ha.

Kia hua tu itni pareshan q hai.

He was here.

Kon who was here?

I don't know. He was here I cd feel him.

Geet koi nahi tha yaha tujhe veham hua hoga. We are at 15th floor there is only one enterance to this room and I came from that no body went out and no body is in here means yaha koi nahi aya tha.

Wo yahi hai.

Geet tu idher a yaha lait ye le she gave her the medicine tu so ja aaj bohat thak bhi gae na itne travel k bad. Tu so ja I will be around.

Within minutes geet was asleep.

But meera sat there looking at her. They had come to India cuz her auditory hallucinations were increasing day by day. The doctors had advised that if they take her to some new and different place maybe she will get better cuz her hallucinations and imaginations were just because of her overstress lifestyle. And that's when she said she wanted to go to India.after the decision she was so happy with no mishaps that everyone relaxed that if even the name of country can bring her so much peace what wd happen if she goes there so they took the next flight and came here. Rest of the family stayed there only meera and geet came. But Meera cd sense some difference in geet. She was so happy on her flight smiling to herself just looking out of the window.

. She kissed geet on forehead and left for her room which was right next to her.

But what just happened now. Was she getting better or worse.
I won't tell anyone about this. Even I can feel something here. What if geet was right all this time. What if there is something that only she can feel. I even became pshyc for her but aaj tak kabhi mujhe kuch feel nahi hua per aaj kuch tha. Agar ghar pe kisi ko kuch bataya to wo hame wapis bula le ge. No I have to let geet follow her path. Cuz jab tak wo is path k end tak nahi pohanche gi she wont be able to survive normally.

To begin new she has to end this. We will stay here

PRECAP:

Who are you? Kia chahte ho

And a faint sound came from background she cd swear it said tumhai.

Edited by ssch - 13 years ago
TanuDDian thumbnail
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Posted: 13 years ago
Awesome update...

Looking forward to it...
Edited by geetsweet - 13 years ago
saam123 thumbnail
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Posted: 13 years ago
sam i am so so happy
so love u finally u update
this .wait 4 so long so
awesome . he found geet
just can't wait 4 next one
sam if u can't pm it's alright
as long as u update .can
read on CM so don't
worry .just keep updating
so love u
Edited by simm28 - 13 years ago
t_areeb thumbnail
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Posted: 13 years ago
she can hear him
but where is he?
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Posted: 13 years ago
thnx 4 pm

he found geet

'update soon
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: simm28

sam i am so so happy

so love u finally u update
this .wait 4 so long so
awesome . he found geet
just can't wait 4 next one
sam if u can't pm it's alright
as long as u update .can
read on CM so don't
worry .just keep updating
so love u

you are a sweet heart sim
thanx
ssch thumbnail
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Posted: 13 years ago
hey come on you know i dont write sad fictions so cheer up😉
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Posted: 13 years ago
Amazing update...awesome...continue soon tc...:)😊

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Posted: 13 years ago
awesome, brilliant part
loved it
continue soon

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