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Posted: 13 years ago
Best update ever
Loved man's pure and genuine love for her and how he washed away her pain
The words he said to her before he took her in the shower were so deep and profound I had to re read them
Thanks for a wonderful update
Continue soon
And I don't mind about the 18+ updates it's up to you and the other readers :)
Looking forward to the next part
Xx
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Posted: 13 years ago
nice update.
pls continue and update soon


i can read any thing. 18 + as well. what ever u write is good for me to read
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Posted: 13 years ago
Comment pending...will do so in a bit...was busy all day
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Posted: 13 years ago

Washing the Pain!

Ritz,

Humko tumse pyar hai and that is why we the posters n what not.


The title fits perfectly washing away the pain emotionally and the shower scene makes it a ritual, it kinda brings a closure for Geet and her trauma that she experienced. Also, it makes it more symbolic and brings further healing for her because it is the love of her life that is doing the symbolism. I mean he is erasing the painful memories and is imprinting new ones in her mind, her body and her soul. What more can be more healing than this'

I loved the collective gasps from the family, the silent eye contact between the two love birds and their family witnessing it'

Pari ' one thing I always forgot to ask you about her'.when Geet was not present in her's and Rahul's wedding, Pari was resenting her and u had mentioned that in one of your updates'.after that I am not sure if I read any updates in which Pari apologized, well not really apologized but I should say reciprocated her life towards Geet'.cus afterall Geet went away cus she wanted her brother's wedding to take place'

I had not initially liked Pari long back when she had hated Geet'sorry typing it out in this update'

Raj is the best dad ever'.I mean so understanding and trusting and all that'.we after all we are talking about Maan'.loved Raj's gestures'

Geet being able to say he touched me and placing his hand over her B*****'.I am not sure if a girl can really do that after going through hell like her'but den It also depends on the relationship she has with her Maan'n I guess in ur FF the relationship is very transparent. 'with no hidden agendas or masks'.

I am glad she was able to share her inmost pain with him and he was there to soothe her and wash away her pain as I mentioned above.

I loved the update'it was emotional and brought two lovely souls closer to each other than they could ever imagine.

18+ sounds good after all the roller coaster rides these two had...and I think they deserve it. 😆

Edited by Water. - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
awesome, beautiful, brilliant, mind blowing, excellent part
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Posted: 13 years ago
amazing update loved the way Maan helped Geet to wash away her pain. no worries about the 18+ updates u can continue
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Posted: 13 years ago
SO TOUCHY UPDATE...SWEET DAT MAAN DID...WANNA MORE...UPDATE SOON...
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Posted: 13 years ago
Totaaly amazinggg;D:D
thansk for the pm;D
cont soon;D
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Posted: 13 years ago
this is about the 18+ stuff ... as i'm 26 .. i have no probs .. but ..

well it should be as per the story's requirement ...

n about readers n writers discretion ... with due respect to one n all .. i guess no one is naive here yaar .. people who r 12 or 13 write it so why not read it ...

once again its my opinion ... with no offence to any one ...

sorry forgot to mention it yesterday ... i remembered about it when i was reading d update again today ...
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Posted: 13 years ago
Loved the way family reacted to Maaneet's love story😉 Hope Maan will be able to recover Geet from the pain she is feeling now... and waiting for the functions to start!!!

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