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Posted: 14 years ago
hayeee thuddd read the last para .hmmm interesting part .khanak experience with the doc and the guys in the apartment was well put .it a cruel world oustide and it becomes even more cruel for a girls with such kind of jerks around .was so lost reading it .the part were she hugs him when is comes was the best for me she was missing him and wanted him badly by her side that emotion was all out in the hugg beautiful as ever .and last part no words hands down no one can beat u in that beautiful words for a beautful couple like them very well put.thanks for a longgg update was satisfied with this
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Posted: 14 years ago
hey simi u have addressed the part that is crucial to each and every woman whether in india or elsewhere...the prejudice of taking women as granted and all that...here i will like to relate to a simple fact...if a girl is sexy and hot she is told filthy words but the same doesnt happen to a man...there are numerous such instances which we all can relate to...
anyways this update is better than the previous ones though the previous ones also dont fall short in any way...
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Posted: 14 years ago
great update simi but i m realy scared not dat shaan is going for a week but still v shud always be positive so i hope nothing bad happens in d story ahead pls continue soon
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Posted: 14 years ago
haa Simi a very sensitive update.

Day in and day out we women face this, be it work or elsewhere. Of course it is lesser to a certain degree in the US but it is definitely there.

Love how you bring about the insecurities Khanak is having with herself and the fact that she does not want to show Shaan her edgy behaviour...so that she is not mistaken by him for worrying constantly. We all go through these emotions and more often do not share these feelings with our partners.

Also like the way that Shaan is not completely immune to her, he realizes that something is amiss even though its not being conveyed to him directly. This is what I like most both can sense this in each other but want to give it some time.

This of course is the sign for a mature loving relationship...SIGH what else can I say.

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Posted: 14 years ago
Simi... waiting to meet Shaan in Chennai... my home town 😛😛😛😛good update...
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Posted: 14 years ago
Hey 😊

simi this should be a part which comes from heart😕

Now a days we r seeing many atrocities towards women in various situations by men irrespective of the place 😭
who else could well describe them .
As a doc,u can see the pain in patients eyes 😕i can understand what r u trying to say exactly with this update

i loved this reality update its really touching and truly good well suitable for current situation in the world👏

who r those spoiled brats making mess with her😡
simi r u going to create a serious problem for her when shaan is away😭
ohhh poor girl how could she manage this gonna be a maha twist in HAA😲

great description👏

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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: mystory

hi czarina...

was missin u re 🤗

daily checkd the thread if u had come or not...apnay czar ko itna na tarpao

so m feelin bad for angel...she was so scared na...poor sweet thing apnay shaantanu kay bina kesay rahegi 1 week

i love them ...there undying love fr each other just rejuvinates me each day

i want to bash that dr gadha shriram or watever...buddha saala

shaan ko pata chala na toh budhay ki umar ghat jayegi death time say pehlay

plss czarina love birds ko judda mat karo...they r made fr each other

thanks for the update

love yaa

urs
handsome hunk czar

ps: @candy : deary sautan...love yaa 2 n miss yaa 2. bahut dino say digestion nahi hua sahi say tujhsay pyar jo nahi jataya. 😉



@bold: chee..chee..! Kaisa pyar hai ye??😵

Miss you too 🤗
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Posted: 14 years ago

Hey Smiley Sim

Brilliant writing……hats off to you👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏

First of all Thanks a ton for the siggie 😃 & Sorry sabko pareshaan karne ke liye especially you candy & Ramzzz.😳 Loved the Siggie.⭐️ Too amazing & cute. 👏 👏 👏

Returning to the update hats of to you Sim for highlighting the Big issue of Females.👏 Loved your detailing & discribtion abt Khanak here.⭐️ & the Dr, Sriram is the worst insaan 😡 (dharti ka bhoj kahi ka 😡) Dr.Sriram is papa's age n he behaving like this..disgusting….. Mere bus cahle to is ka bhi khoon kar doon.😊 Khanak felling sad & frustrated & decided to go for the shopping.😒 Brilliant discribption of her thoughts here,👏 She is completely unmindful of what she is buying.😳 Wonderful discribtion of Little guy & his Mom.👏 asie har gali mein milte hain log specially in Pune. *phew* she is blaming khanak for all the issue

Khanak is so scared ki she even runs away from store manager 😊, your discribtion so real ki I litrally felt a goosebumps here.👏 Than those idiotic bunch of guys I so hate them.😡 So they had a tushan with Shantanu khandelwal.😉 Poor khanak got so scared yaar.😭 Shaan is tensed as he is late coz of Mumbai traffic 😕….Yaar sacchi Mumbai traffic is very khatarnaak.

Shaan finally enters the house 😊 & the way she reacted as soon as shaan entered the house 😊..was the best 👏 the way to described their love & her trust over hubby.😊 Waise Kudos to you simi for the beautiful discribtion ⭐️ the Security, the trust, the faith, the love, the dependence in the relation of a Husband & Wife described beautifully here,👍🏼 but why she didn't shared it with him.😕 Waise Shaan is going to channai for a Week.😲 Ooh ho ab khanak kya karegi ek week ke liye 😕 (let her go with him 😳 ya phir kuch karo but no duriyaan between the love birds yaar please 😳)

Last part was as usual fantastic.👏 Your way of discribtion their togetherness, was magical.😍 Khanak feeling Secured & most importantly the feeling of belongingness the sweet pleasure made her cry 😊. ..shaan feeling bad seeing her tears..worrying whether he hurt her.😊 Superb Superb Superb 👏 & the final lines the Red & Purple one was just out of the world ☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️

🥳 SHANAK FOREVER. 🥳

Sorry Simi for commenting late 😳 actually My papa came yesterday to meet me from Jaipur so didn't commented. 😳 Was busy with Papa.🥳 Sorry.😳

Waiting for the next part……..Jaldi dena. 🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗

Love u 😊

Pranjal.

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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: candy84


Oh God!! one day and so many mishaps 😲😲

I agree Simi, these things are very common now-a-days...no matter how educated ppl are, but they always forget their manners.
As they say, "A rotten apply makes the whole basket rotten", these few handful inhuman ppl spoils the image of the Best creatures (Humans) of this world...

I am not amazed...1st that Dr Sriram (an elderly person), then dat Kid (small boy), and last but not the least those 20 something IDIOT Boys...ALL MALE CATEGORY ( despite of their age groups)...only know how to dominate females...

Simi, gud you highlighted this serious and sensitive issue in ur FF 👏

But i am really glad Shaan is always there for Khanak!!

PS: Ramzz stay in Chennai and handle Shaan new project (if he gets it, which he surely will)...Please RLBs ko separate mat karo with ur Brilliant idea 😡😉😆








Poo!! How right you are!! Education doesn't matter..what matters is how you are brought up!!
@Bold: You said it right ..Munnu's mom is aready preparing him to be a MCP..by showing him that its ok even if he is in the wrong!!
Lets..see wht happens! ...can't reveal everything now, can I??😉
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: foreverRBO

😆hey!!

thanku 4 d pm again.. 😃
n xtremely sorry 4 nt being regular wid d comments..😔
@update - wow!! so many real lyf situations dealt in d same update...
n dat too wid such finesse... 👏👏👏
it s so sad dat dese dirty minds do exist in our society...😡😡 n we girls hv 2 deal wid dem everyday... everyplace 😔
i so hope dat d bunch of brats do nt bother khanak in shaan's absence..
hw r dese RLBs gonna spend 1 week away frm each oder 😕
bt d mst imp question s hw r we (d readers) gonna survive widout d RLBs being together ? 😆😆
n dat too 4 a week
continue soon
luv🤗
nimisha

Thanks for yr compliments!! We cannot ignore these dirty minds even if we want to..
Our RLBs are strong because their love makes them so. Lets see what will happen next..
😃😉

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