Fall Out ~MG~ 4 ~ LAST PART PG 23 07/09

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maaneetsangel

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Posted: 13 years ago

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congrats !!!!!!!!!!! 4 d new thread ...

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maaneetsangel

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Posted: 13 years ago

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loved part 26 ...

awesome ... superb ...

thnx 4 d pm ...

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maaneetsangel

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Posted: 13 years ago

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chapter 27 ...

awesome ... superb ...

thnx 4 d pm ...

loved n enjoyed the entire journey ...

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Jazmin

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Posted: 13 years ago

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ok...finally got time to sit and read all your updates aaram se!! i didnt want to just rush through it...thats why it took me a while...sorry i couldnt give more feedback when you sent out that PM earlier...

Chapter 24
dont kill me...but im reading after ages and im a little lost on the Adi/Pinky thing...😕...is this the first time you're mentioning them? as a couple at least......haila...Meha..i had forgotten all about her!! meri choti si jaan!! 😳...seriously...yeh MSK kya samate hai aapne aapko!! geet is better off w/out him!! 😉😉...oh oh...this is where NT left Dev after what he'd one...not im all caught up...cuz i was so lost for a bit 😆...pinky gave in way too easily to adi!! i dont know why i like the girls torturing the guys!! 😛

Chapter 25
Pammi & Dev...no comment 🤢...just loving geet being totally mean to maan...jale pe namak chidakna and all 👏👏👏..."hitherto"...did you just say "hitherto" 😲...🤣..wow...big words...jaz so proud!! he he..just teasing...havent heard that word in a looong time!! a request...dont try to redeem Devil like the cv's did...let him rot in jail for what he's done 🤬...aare...Maan's a big boy..a little cut by his ear is no big deal 😉...

Chapter 26
Pinkys little rambling session...too funny!! 😆😆😆...i do that though...ramble on in my mind!! 😳😳...there he goes...mr khurana..sticking his foot in his mouth again... munda khabi sudrega nahin 😡...i can just imagine maan's face when geet told him annie is in love with him😆😆😆...dont tell me he tried to kill himself...oh come one...grow a pair Mr Khurana...suicide is the chickens way out!! tauba...😡😡😡...

Chapter 27
the full truth is finally out..Pammi got her just desserts and Maan saved Meha...wah wah...aur kya chahiyeh! i was going to demand an epilogue but i saw that note saying that there was one in the works 😃 i shall wait patiently 😳

awesome story my luv!! now im off to read the others i have pending😉
JAZ

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Mishu

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Posted: 13 years ago

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-memorable-

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Posted: 13 years ago

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read the last 4-5 parts in one go all together & cried & smile with it

good that you end it without any hustle 👏 👏

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Posted: 13 years ago

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guys will update the epilogue in a few days... i need a little time...😊

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-bansi-

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Posted: 13 years ago

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eagerly waiting for it muski..!! 😍 😉

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Posted: 13 years ago

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WE will wait. WE understand that writer needs to think first and only if the thoughts are clear they would be able to write. WE know that if we want an update we would request rather than demand as if the writer is your servant. WE also know that it hurts to read comments threatening you what to update and what not. WE know that whatever that comes in the writer's mind and whatever the writer is comfortable with..they can proceed with that. WE know to keep our bloody officious personality out of a story if we are not interested in it. WE also know that WE can threaten and order a writer what to update when but that only will make us look as a stupid arrogant senseless creature who treats others as filth. Finally we'll wait. I hope its convincing.
Ps: u know my pwd Meenu so if u feel m rude edit it off. But i cant shut my bloody mouth if any god damn creature dared hurt u n u know that

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sanu3108

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Posted: 13 years ago

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Originally posted by: --Shika--
WE will wait. WE understand that writer needs to think first and only if the thoughts are clear they would be able to write. WE know that if we want an update we would request rather than demand as if the writer is your servant. WE also know that it hurts to read comments threatening you what to update and what not. WE know that whatever that comes in the writer's mind and whatever the writer is comfortable with..they can proceed with that. WE know to keep our bloody officious personality out of a story if we are not interested in it. WE also know that WE can threaten and order a writer what to update when but that only will make us look as a stupid arrogant senseless creature who treats others as filth. Finally we'll wait. I hope its convincing.
Ps: u know my pwd Meenu so if u feel m rude edit it off. But i cant shut my bloody mouth if any god damn creature dared hurt u n u know that

umm ... wat did I miss 😕

meray muski bachay ko kisi ne kuch kehnay ki himmat ki kya "rolling up the sleeves" 😡... bring it on ... moi ready