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wonderful yaar!
who s ds kunal?
i think kunal killed his sis,rt?

NO NOT AGAIN
THE CLIFF HANGER
is that sonu?
i think so
and kunal
i m sure he is maan's mama ji hai na
the stupid man
i sooo wanna kill that man with my bare hands
arggg

now who was the person geet met in dehli

Originally posted by: Maaneet4everXxX

I was sooo close to logging out but then I saw it say updating so I thought I would check it out and now I am first!!!!!!!! Wooo hooo!!!!!!

The update was absolutely amazing!!!!! Loved it sooo much!!!! You always leave us on our toes Bushra with your cliffhangers... you have to update really quickly lol... I'm waiting 😆😉

Love you

Saba xxx 😳

thank you for your lovely comment dear!!
sorry but my aunt was here for two weeks, so was busy with cousins.
Updating now😃

Originally posted by: Remya_Pillai

wonderful yaar!
who s ds kunal?
i think kunal killed his sis,rt?

who he is will be out later dear and yes, he killed his sister.
he havent done the act himself, but because of him she died along with her son.

Originally posted by: teju2292

NO NOT AGAIN
THE CLIFF HANGER
is that sonu?
i think so
and kunal
i m sure he is maan's mama ji hai na
the stupid man
i sooo wanna kill that man with my bare hands
arggg

😆😆😆

hmmm??? could kunal be maans mamaji???
and yes, he is realy stupid and I hate him too.
what a say?
mayne I will kill him later in the story, if I get enough voites for it😃
😃
😆

Originally posted by: t_areeb

now who was the person geet met in dehli

and that mysterious person is a psyco who want to help every family in which a girl ran away

who this person is you will find out in the next update dear and the man is realy a psyco.
may be thinking to eliminate him later from the story

Originally posted by: shalinisaran89

a mazing upd...

thx dear.
I have updated part 10 a long time back, but couldn't pm anyone.
now updating next part😉

Part 11:

Geet: Maan!!

She turned around to find Maan standing in front of her. She was so happy and relieved, that she hugged him and he held her just tight in his arms with the happiness to have her back in his arms and reaching there without anyone recognizing him.

But their happiness lasted just for few seconds, as Maan saw Brij and Sonu running to their direction.

M: Geet!! Brij and Sonu are here!! There are running in our direction!! We have to go away and that very fast!!

G: Kya?!

She turned around and was shocked to see them there. She was rooted to the place and couldn't move an inch, if Maan wouldn't have taken her hand and pull her with him to the main road and into the next cab he saw.

Brij and Sonu run as fast as they could after them, but couldn't reach them, as there was a large group of tourists in front of them. When they came out of the crowd, they both have been gone. At this moment, Brij regretted to have agreed to the man that he could attend his meeting and to be so sure of himself to catch them on his own. He cursed under his breath.

In the cab Maan tried to calm down Geet, who was still afraid and clung to Maan for dear life and crying her eyes out.

M: Geet. Shhht. Everything is fine now. We hung them up. They aren't following us. We are safe.

G: Are we realy safe?

M: Yes jaan. We are safe.

He hugged her more thightly and kissed her forehead, which calmed Geet down. After a few moments she stopped crying.

G: Maan?

M: Bolo.

G: Where are we going now?

M: We are going to a pension for this night. Then we will look what we will do. Ok?

Geet just nodded and laid her head on his shoulder.

After a while they reached a well lived place and went out of the cab. Maan paid the driver and took Geets hand to walk through the full streets to reach the pension.

He knew that Geet never was in such a place before and he just pulled her more to him and slide his arm on her slim waist to make her sure that he won't let her get lost in this crowd. Geet snuggled closer to him.

After a few minutes and full roads they reached a building which looked a bit like a motel. They entered and Maan booked a room for them.

They went upstairs and entered a room with a bed for two, a cupboard, small table and a couch. The furniture looked old but the bed had fresh washed covers and the room was clean. Maan locked the door behind him and lay flat down on the bed. Geet went near him and sad beside him.

They looked at each other's eyes and understood what the other was thinking. Maan lifted his hand and cupped Geets cheek with it. He caressed her cheek and she turned her head more to his hand and closed her eyes to feel his warm touch. He lifted himself to a sitting position and Geet opened her eyes when she felt him taking his hand back.

She looked at his eyes and saw happiness, relieve and an immense love in them. She just hugged him and laid her head on his chest. He lifted his arms and hugged her back with the same intense. They sat there for a while when Maans stomach began to grumble. Geet let out a chuckle at it and broke the hug to look at him.

G: Is here someone hungry?

M: As if you have eaten something properly in the last few days?

Maan frowned and looked away. Geet sighed and put her hand on Maans cheek to make him look at her, but he looked away. Geet spoke with a teary voice.

G: Are you angry with me?

Maan quickly turned to her side when he heard her speaking and cupped her face to wipe her tears which were running down her beautiful face.

M: Nahi Geet. I could never be angry at you. Never. Remember that.

Maan could never be angry on his Geet. Not in this lifetime and not in any following ones.

Geet smiled at his answer and put her hands on his hands, which were still resting on her cheeks. Maan just smiled back at her and kissed her forehead.

He slowly took his hands away, stood up, walked to the door and unlocked it.

G: Maan?

Geet was confused. Why was he going now? Where was he going now? Maan turned back and looked at her cute confused face. He smiled at her cuteness and answered her unspoken questions.

M: What do you want to eat jaan? Indian, Italian, Chinese or something else?

Geets face lit up when she understood his intentions and smiled widely at him.

G: Anything you want. But plz plz plz hurry up!! I am sooo hungry, that I can even eat

But Maan cut her in the middle of the sentence.

M: Ok ok I got it. I am leaving now. Lock the door after me and don't open it till I return. Do you need anything else?

Geet thought for a moment and shook her head. Maan just nodded and left with a "I will be back soon" smile on his lips.

She stood up and locked the door. After checking if the door was really closed, she went to her bag and took out a green dress and the toiletries bag and headed to the bathroom to take a shower and wash away the tension and the worries of the last few days and their bad memories.

She was sure that now everything would be well, but she didn't know that this was just the beginning to all the danger, fear and terror, which would be her loyal companions for the next parts of her life'

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