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Posted: 19 years ago

Originally posted by: sia_lovely



wow!!superb and awesome part ....... 👏

thanx sia dear😳

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Posted: 19 years ago
Hey guys, right now i have to go out to the beauty parlour..i have to go to some1's mehedi rasm 2nite ..but i will be back..and i will update this 😉

so anu dear, dont be upset 😛 😉
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Posted: 19 years ago
Hey guys, I got a decision for you all to make: I thought that why not start this ff from the start again..but only this time i will make it more refreshing and romantic and better than it is now 😉

for example, diya and karan met each other after the school days, and i can include all of us girls and boys in school..enjoying the romantic teenage years when we r all 16-year olds 😛 😉

kaisa laga yeh idea? plus..some of us girls met our luv-interests after school..when it is in school..it is better..so...who wants it from the start?

and i will start off the ff in a zabardast way..and i will make it more zabardast then it has eva been 😃

if u do agree to this, then just reply back 😊

like tuhina came after the 2 year leap..i can get tuhina and sohan together in school 😃 😳
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Posted: 19 years ago
Shirl tum iss ff ko jaldi se khatam coz yeh ff is aaise pt. pe aagaya hai ke is ka ek nice end hona chahyiye.So finish this one and then start it again with a fresh look like you said and ofcourse your idea is very nice 👏 .It's a request dear 😊.

Haan jaldi jaldi post karo nehi to mein upset ho jaungi.
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Posted: 19 years ago

Originally posted by: diya7000

Shirl tum iss ff ko jaldi se khatam coz yeh ff is aaise pt. pe aagaya hai ke is ka ek nice end hona chahyiye.So finish this one and then start it again with a fresh look like you said and ofcourse your idea is very nice 👏 .It's a request dear 😊.

Haan jaldi jaldi post karo nehi to mein upset ho jaungi.

ok..then..i will finish this ff as soon as possible...😃..then rite it again..with a more fresher and more romantic parts and scenes...😉

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Posted: 19 years ago
ok ppl..updating 2day's episode wednesday's episode 110 😃
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Posted: 19 years ago
Episode 110

(Tuhina comes in in the house: after her trip)

tuhina: mum, dad, hy everyone..i'm back!!!
parvati: tuhina..how r u?
tuhina: absolutely fine...how r u?
parvati: totally fine...
tuhina: howz everyone else?
shilpa: they r all fine too...beta...u r back...and about time...
om: we got good news for you...actually two bits of good news...
tuhina: whats that?
parvati: first, kavya and pammi are getting married...
tuhina(shocked): what??!!
shilpa: the wedding is in about 3 days...
tuhina: and kavya agreed?
om: yeah..he did...besides..he needs a life partner..to accompany him throughout life...
tuhina: and whats the second part of the good news?
parvati: your marriage...the guy is from the raheja family..
tuhina: really??
parvati: of course...can you get a better guy than piyush?
tuhina(surprised): piyush?
om: yeah...he's the one....who you are getting married to...we wanted to surprise you...
tuhina(shocked): what??!! but without...asking me??!!!
(leaves in anger upstairs..)

(next scene: sush comes around with poonam..to tell rahul about her feelings to him)

poonam: now..go...i have accompanied you here..
sush: plz..come further with me...
poonam: uff...now dont tell me..that on yur wedding night...i should come with you as well...
sush: if necesssary...ok then..
poonam: chup!! now go..
sush: fine...

(sush goes upto rahul's room)

sush: hi rahul..
rahul: hi sush...wassup?
sush: oh..nothing much...erm..rahul i needed to talk to you..
rahul: yeah..sure..sit down...
sush(sits down): erm...i dont know how to say this..
rahul: where's poonam?
sush: she's downstairs...erm..rahul?
rahul: yeah...?
sush: i never ever said this to a guy before...erm...i..i love you...rahul...
rahul: what?
sush: i lovr you more than my own life...rahul...and i cant live without you...
rahul: erm..sush...luk..u may luv me..but...i...dont love you..
sush: what??
rahul: i'm sorry...but..there is someone else...
sush(heartbroken): so..u r rejecting me?
rahul: i have to...

(sush runs down to poonam..in tears...komolika just witnessed everything that happened..and makes a evil grin)

sush(in tears): poonam....poonam...he...rahul...didnt...
poonam: what happened? sush..tell me...what happened..?
sush: he rejected me..poonam..he doesnt luv me...he...
(hugs her..)
poonam: he rejected you?
sush: yeah....he doesnt luv me...
(sush runs out of the house..poonam feels angry for what rahul has done)

(next scene: ansh confronts kavya)

ansh: so..how is the wedding preparations going?
kavya: its quite a habit...for you..isnt it?
ansh: meaning?
kavya: i mean that...by destroying other people's lives..and then rubbing salt in their wounds..has become a habit for you...hasnt it?
ansh: fortuantely..it has...but i quite like it..when i torture you...
kavya: and i will enjoy it..when i expose you...
ansh: oh..kavya...that will never happen...
kavya: it will happen..you will be exposed...shirley will divorce you...and then i will marry her...
ansh(angry): NEVER!!!
kavya: true luv always wins...ansh...you kno that...and so do i..
ansh: as long as i live...u and shirley can never be together...
kavya: then dont live any longer...(leaves)
ansh: you are getting more couragoeus day by day..Kavya Agarwal...lets see how much courage..you have left after 3 days...(grins)

(Next scene: Diya meets up with Karan outisde the nearby temple)

diya: hi karan...
karan: hi there...
diya: so..erm...are the arrangments ready...for tonight?
karan: yep..everything is ready...luk..
(diya luks..and sees that everything is ready)
diya: are you sure?
karan: about what?
diya: about us...and..about our future...that this all will work...?
diya: trust me...and it will..ok?
diya: ok...lets do it..

(both step in the temple: first..karan and Diya garland each other..then...both take the pheras....and then karan fills her hairline with sindoor..and then gives her the mangulsutra...)

priest: u r now..husband and wife...
karan: thank you...
(otuside the temple)

diya: i'm...i'm...really..really happy!!!
karan: so..am i...
(both hug eahc other..tightly..)
karan: come on..lets go..home...shall we?
diya: yeah..ok...

(back at R & G house..veena is excited on having karan coming home...as she will discuss his marrige with mohini 🤢 )

veena: when...will this boy come home? uff...when will he come home?
vasu: relax...veena...he will..come home..take a chill pill..darling...
(sujal is tensed..as he knows what karan is upto)

tashu: are you ok?
sujal: huh? what...?
tashu: i said..are you ok?
sujal: me..? erm..yeah...yeah...i am alright....

(karan comes up..with the garland in his hand)

veena: oh....finally..karan is here...karan...where were you?
(diya later then comes up with him..with her sindoor..and mangulsutra..the family is at first confused...but then are shocked...as they realsie the truth)

cg: karan...what...is this?
karan: i'm legally married...dad..to her...my wife...Diya Sinha...

(everyone is shocked...mohini gets jealous 😡 )

Precap: Sujal confronts Swayam about his criminal record, meanwhile Mohini plans to separate Karan~Diya, and something devastating happens to Sush, affecting Poonam, and Kavya's engagement to Pammi takes place.

Howz dat, ppl?
Shirley thumbnail
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Posted: 19 years ago
Also, anyone else up for the idea i made earlier on? 😊 😉
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Posted: 19 years ago
Wow what a entryyyy 👏.I guessed that you'll bring mohini 🤢 in between us after marriage.Ab woh kya karegi yeh dekna hai.Par jyada kuch na kare plsss 😭.
Again update soon.

BTW how was the mehandi rasam?you enjoyed??
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Posted: 19 years ago
by now i dont think i need to say how it was......would be like repeating myself.......but like to repeat myself again and again for u and ur fan fic dear......you see i cant help myself......it was really nice....and superbly written 👏 👏

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