MG[FF]Maan Proposes Geet Disposes[Thread1/Note149]

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Saba

@Eccentric.Being

Dazzler

Posted: 14 years ago

#81

Hey Jazz,

So happy that u are writing one more story.

Prologue was beautifully depicted.

Story has many characters but it become real fun at time when writer can manage many at the same time dwelling the different & same issues.

Please PM me when u continue.

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Posted: 14 years ago

#82

OMG this is fantastic !!!! I love it already... 👏👏👏

damn you weren't joking when you said that the families in this fic are huge 😆 but that just make the fic even more likable... ⭐️

what can i say i'm sucker for a bit of family drama and when you add a touch of romance to that (in the form Maaneet no less) than that's just even better... 👍🏼

and the fact that this is set in the 1980's and that Maan is an army man ...grrr 😍

this is just amazingly brilliant Jazzy ⭐️

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fawzia jahan

@katerpillar

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Posted: 14 years ago

#83

wow...so many characters...dis ff surely is crowded...😆...best of luck...👍🏼...waiting 4 ur update...😊

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NidhaA

@NidhaA

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+ 3

Posted: 14 years ago

#84

What must I say

I am confused...

As of now I just wish you will continue soon Jazz...

Thanks for the PM😊

PS: I love the title

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Sphinx

@Sphinx

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Posted: 14 years ago

#85

hi read the cs ... sounds interesting

kindly pm me when u update😊

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LuvScooby

@LuvScooby

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Posted: 14 years ago

#86

Wow Jazzy...what a wonderful start. Loved the prologue mainly b/c description of "Geet," it really showed that there is beauty in simplicity.

Size of the family is very interesting😃

Continue soon

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mchopra

@mchopra

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+ 3

Posted: 14 years ago

#87

Oh i didnt know new rules..waise cute one and hello did u post ch 1

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Dristi/twin/MK/D/dumbo/Drizzy

@DrashtiDhamiNo1

Dazzler

Posted: 14 years ago

#88

awesome story

looking forward to part one

cont soon please..!! :)

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-pixie-

@-pixie-

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Posted: 14 years ago

#89

I am a little upset- there is no bubble? Happy? Nanu?😆

You show me one family where there isnt one member atleast who is named that and I will show you a fraud punjabi!

I am so loving this already...cant wait for the next parts😃

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jazzerette

@jazzerette

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+ 4

Posted: 14 years ago

#90

Originally posted by: serenelove
Hey Jazz,
So happy that u are writing one more story.
Prologue was beautifully depicted.
Story has many characters but it become real fun at time when writer can manage many at the same time dwelling the different & same issues.
Please PM me when u continue.