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Posted: 14 years ago
REs

Shikzz... nautanki.. meannn... demented.. whacko...

you dont show ur face... ever.. and then come and res the first place...

Updated...

Jazzu... the first part brought tears to my eyes... loved the way you have portrayed father-daughter relationship. Even though each of his daughter is different in characteristics and nature... the love of a father for his daughter(s) is immense and insurmountable.

Reminded me of my days in my maayka... and how, even today, my Dad puts me to sleep, tucks me in when ever I am home (I can not think of my parents home in any other way but my own). Loved it babes.. eagerly waiting to read more.
Edited by kesha2412 - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
Jazz that was downright beautiful.
I loved the parent bonding. Mohinder's pride and joy seems to be the theme of the story and very well based it is. I liked how Sameera is the shoulder to lean on, while Geet is the essence - all in all - for a man of the 80s to have a family of girls mostly - it was extremely endearing.

loved it Jazz
muuah!
Edited by mechantefille - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
Amazing part..!!
loved the first part..!!
so sam is the eldest...while geet is the apple of her father's eyes..!! meera was cute here...sam n meera's fights were awesome..!!!
hmmm..interesting...
waiting for the rest of the story to unfold...!!!
do update soon..!!

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Posted: 14 years ago
Amaaazzziiinggg;D;D:D
Lovved it;D
Superb;D
CONTINUE SOON;D
thnks for the pm;D
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Posted: 14 years ago
well what to say,,i hv no words to describe this part,, ...its so beautiful n love d parents n generations interaction, mr mohinadarlal is very frank n close to his all daughters. he loves n pampers them to death. Its a fact that Fathers always hv a special bonding wid their daughters, n daughters love to call them - papa ki princess..just like me😳 ...

poor girl- lazy lizard🤣....i hv full sympathy wid her , not in case of lazy lizard but yes in case of pink pillow😆..me too hv a pink pillow🤣....my pinki,,,😳...but mujhe use chuppa k ralhna padta h😕..nahi to sis is always ready to break my pinky's bone😕😆
Edited by SlovHanda - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago

Wonderful update..❤️

luvd it..

cntnue soon..

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Posted: 14 years ago
Jazzyyy that was so brilliant ⭐️
and so very well written ⭐️
that i don't know what to say 😆
love the relationship between the Handa's !!!!!
and eager to read what you have in store for us 😃


Edited by Lip-a-Licious - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago

Hey Jazz,

Lovely start.

Introduction from Chaudhary Handa's POV was worth a shot.

Liked their simple life, teasing, caring & loving acts for each other.

Seems S-I-Ls are kind of disappointing.

Continue Real Soon.

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Punjabi is fine. No problem in understanding.

Edited by serenelove - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
That was awesome, Jazz! Beautiful! I loved it!
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Posted: 14 years ago
the concept seems interesting

always wanted to see how maaneet would romance in a periodic scene

thanks for pm

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