Series of FF's on Arnav & Khushi : updated pg 165

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Chickee

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Posted: 13 years ago

#381

Originally posted by: FebruaryFlower
Hey RC!!
Fab update hun.
I can't believe Shyam's dead. After all that!
The bedroom scene was very well written. It was subtle yet passionate.
Looking forward to the next part, as always!!
😊

Thanks 😳
I didn't know what to do with him ... so got rid of him!!!! 😉

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bikerider

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Posted: 13 years ago

#382

haila very well agree with you,
thanks for getting rid of shyam at least in here
i loved every bit of it 😈😆
in show i am not sure what i want as how much ever i loathe shyam
abbas is damn good actor 😔

Thanks for the update and pm.
loved the scene between arhi, very well written 😊

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smithasrk

@smithasrk

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Posted: 13 years ago

#383

😳

wow blushing 😆

well written update. thanks for the pm.

what have that shyam done now????

pls update soon...

love

Smitha

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Chinu5

@Chinu5

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Posted: 13 years ago

#384

That was very nice idea Shyam's accident and he is no more ..Excellent ..

very well written..

Thanks for the pm

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kiran255

@kiran255

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Posted: 13 years ago

#385

wooo crazy awesome

i love Arnav got crazy for khushi and

what a blow shaym ji ti ti phis

so cool

so wanted to know more :)

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subtlesapphire

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Posted: 13 years ago

#386

Hayeee😍 Jiya dhadak dhadak jiya dhadak dhadak jayee! romantic chick kaise khawab dikha dethee hooo? My heart is beating sooo fast, how he gave her the coat to cover her up! hayeee ufff, i cant stop smiling, how am i goona do my work now!? lol and shayem is dead! aaahh! woop woop! this is why i love you sooo much! wow! ab jaldi update karna please! i cant take the wait anymore! awww the way he couldnt resist kissing her! hayeee ☺️

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-RushTrip-

@-RushTrip-

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Posted: 13 years ago

#387

Babes...

so true...we as writers can make them do what we want 😛

i love the way you got rid of him totally!

bravo! bada mazaa aaya just to read that part.. now enough mileage to the guy

the rest is more important...

yaar tu bhi no suhaag raat and all..hmm par prelude toh achcha tha..

now lot of emotional scenes huh?

with how di will take..it and will you give us another person who could be soul mate for Di?

but fabulous!

Edited by -RushTrip- - 13 years ago

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Chickee

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Posted: 13 years ago

#388

Originally posted by: -RushTrip-
Babes...
so true...we as writers can make them do what we want 😛
i love the way you got rid of him totally!
bravo! bada mazaa aaya just to read that part.. now enough mileage to the guy
the rest is more important...
yaar tu bhi no suhaag raat and all..hmm par prelude toh achcha tha..
now lot of emotional scenes huh?
with how di will take..it and will you give us another person who could be soul mate for Di?
but fabulous!

Rush meri jaan, maine usko MAAR DAALA!!! 😉
Aur abhi maine Di ke liye kuch soocha hain... lets see...
So are we not getting updates from you coz of house guests?????
This weekend has been really lousy, with no promos or anything at all!!!!
Am I glad it's over, and Monday is here.
I hope we have a repentant Arnie tomorrow ... that will be the death of me!!!

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hapinezz13

@hapinezz13

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Posted: 13 years ago

#389

Oh wow...u killed Shyam...well done!!! Kinda of like this as the best way to deal with the pest but prro Anjali...hope she endures this well and hope she recieves some happiness in ur FF by meeting someone who loves her for her beautiful self!!

Ok now coming to Arnav n Khushi...brilliant as usual!!