Series of FF's on Arnav & Khushi : updated pg 165

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Sona

@sparikh

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#361

oh boy! K fainted @ Mandir...he didn't try to wake her up & took her home? what? who does that? what if something medically happened to her? I know ur story...

U wrote so beautifully the scene where he takes her jewelry off to make her comfortable!

Pls continue soon...

-Sona

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-RushTrip-

@-RushTrip-

Rocker

+ 4

Posted: 13 years ago

#362

OMG Chick!

that was out of this world...

i love the way you describe right down to the marble floors!

and the less i talk about the way he removed pieces of jewelry...Ah.! actually why should talk less

i felt it was breathtaking...

and goosebump inducing

and i wish so wish Khushi knew all this!!

please have a repeat performance or something even more smashing when she is conscious!!

pretty Please...

Now should i be calling you Supriya or do i stick to Chick the way now i think of you?

Edited by -RushTrip- - 13 years ago

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maria

@maria_awan

Inactive

Posted: 13 years ago

#363

Loved it dear add me to ur pm list

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anu008

@anu008

Beginner

Posted: 13 years ago

#364

love u'r ff to bits ! now cant wait to read the interactions between them post wedding.do update soon.

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hapinezz13

@hapinezz13

Sparkler

+ 5

Posted: 13 years ago

#365

I leoved the to and fro of the emotions...so true...you want to move forward but situations drag you back but your heart eads you where you belong.

I loved the last part where Arnav is happy that he made her his own and how he felt marrying Khushi was the right thing. The perfect homecoming from all his previous hurts has started.

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mirnalini

@mirnalini

Voyager

+ 4

Posted: 13 years ago

#366

Amazing!

Update soon!😃

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Chickee

@Chickee

Inactive

+ 4

Posted: 13 years ago

#367

Originally posted by: -RushTrip-
OMG Chick!

that was out of this world...

i love the way you describe right down to the marble floors!

and the less i talk about the way he removed pieces of jewelry...Ah.! actually why should talk less

i felt it was breathtaking...

and goosebump inducing

and i wish so wish Khushi knew all this!!

please have a repeat performance or something even more smashing when she is conscious!!

pretty Please...

Now should i be calling you Supriya or do i stick to Chick the way now i think of you?

guruji... aap khush huey toh humari koshish beekaar nahin hui...

ab jab hum dost hain, toh aap jo chaahe hume bula sakti haain 😉

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princess84

@princess84

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#368

awww arnav bought her ring...really cute part continue soon

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-RushTrip-

@-RushTrip-

Rocker

+ 4

Posted: 13 years ago

#369

Ah Chick
the name does stick

i donno..now i think of you as Chick... and a quirky one at that...

so yeah...Supriya..will be like i am calling you with all the formality

and Chick gives me the liberty to tease you...

you know what i mean na!!

lekin ek baat toh hai... teri line...sahi hai... and that is what i love about you..

you remind me of someone who loves to use these lines from the series and give it a new twist and relevance...

so i shall say... this

Mogambo khush hua!

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nyxx

@nyxx

Sparkler

+ 3

Posted: 13 years ago

#370

Wow! Just caught up with youre entire ff in one go! It was quite a task but seriously, i just couldnt stop myself from reading further. Right from Akash's-Payal's weddin to now Arnavs-Khushis...everything was perfectly narrated and just beautiful really!

Please do pm me youre next update! Thanksss!