Core of My Existence#2(AR Story]Part 25 Page 132 - Page 95

Edited

So..Zarqaa reserved first..Chor..but I'm editing mine before hers..Hah!! Being the lazy bum she is, I win here..though she probably doesn't even care..😆

Firstly, I just love how cheesy both, AR are..!!

"You didn't take care of my Armaan.." lolxx..!! I always just crack up when this sort of line comes up. but then again, though Armaan was the lover boy, Riddhima always struck me as the cheesy one between the two, with her 'love you till eternity' dialogues. But it's kinda sweet reading them. Just makes me go.."awww.." even though I could never picture myself saying something like that. I'm too.. I guess practical for things like that. If I was Riddhima, I'd probably just berate him and give him my choiciest gaaliyan, telling him, "Why didn't you take care of yourself you complete prat? I asked you to, but nooo, Armaan Mallik take care of himself? Hah, that's when the earth stops orbiting around the sun, that's when the sun rises on the west instead of the east.!!" And yeah, there'd be a lot more until I'll be drained of words and expressions..lolxx..but you might have noticed.. a lot of me comes out in my Riddhimas in LOOC and Who Knew..Who Knew a lot more actually.. but yeah..!!😆

And I know as readers we are all veeerrryy impatient when it comes to the next step in the fanfiction. Like before AR were married, we were waiting for them to get tied together, though they still did live together.. then they got married and we were waiting to see how their relationship would progress, and you chose to show her getting treated. Then we wanted to get done and over with the treatment bit so we could see what's next. but honestly, I like the slow pace you're taking things at. It's sort of like life isn't it? When you want to fast forward things and events, they seem to crawl by, and when you want to slow everything down, it seems as thoguh someone is actually pressing the forward button of your life!! And really, its great how you've chosen to only put the specific bits and pieces of their progress, like her pains, showing her treatment, her first step, showing how successful she is. Btw, you must have done quite a bit of research on all this, so kudos to you for that.. 😊

Armaan's support throughout everything is just phenomenal. I just can't help but keep falling in love with him over and over again! You truly show how Armaan is Riddhima's pillar, the one she can lean on, the one she can cry on, the one to stop her for falling, ever again in her life! And even though he sometimes hates seeing her through all that physical pain, I'm sure some part of him wants to take her away from that center and dote on her to such an extent, she forgets all that pain was ever a part of her, he still keeps strong, and looks to the future, knowing it'll be a trillion times brighter when they've overcome this whole situation. As a reader, it sort of gives everyone something inside them that keeps saying, see, never give up. Keep trying and one day, you'll succeed. And if not, die trying. Because you can never have it otherwise. I dunnow if you get what i'm saying..I have this thing of going into random tangents and then fogetting the trail and ending it there..😆

So now, Rahul and Muskaan. I really don't have much to say about them, because I think their pace, their hesitation, their awkwardness and their love for each other at a time like this is just right. nothing too much, nothing too little. And i just want to wait and see how their relationship blossoms once more.

So..here's my much delayed comment. Hope it was worth the wait..😃

Love,

Sanaa

PS - update SOOONNN!!😃

I saw you post on my posts so i came to check what it was :P😆

😆 why lazy or busy ? 😛

YAYY :D you liked it <3 thanks a ton 😃