RACE, THE CHASE BEGINS(RP FIC)Updated 21.08.12

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Shaina_b

@Shaina_b

Trailblazer

+ 2

Posted: 14 years ago

#51

Too good!!!!Awesome!!!!!

Kaya even has a problem with the fact that there are less female members in the team!!!!

Prithvi is trying to read into her expressions!!!!!😛 😛 😛 😛 😊 😊 😊 😊

Prithvi meets his team and tries to have a friendly atmosphere in it!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊

Aditi has worked with Kaya previously and knows her mood changes well!!!!😛 😛 😛 😛 😊 😊 😊 😊

Aditi is happy and impressed to see Prithvi!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😊

Prithvi purposely Kaya ko ched raha hai which made Kaya boil with rage!!!!😡 😡 😡 😡 😡 😡

Aditi is amused and she handles Kaya's temper which made Prithvi smile!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊

Prithvi's charm and friendly nature works on everyone and they are impressed by him!!!!😉 😉 😉 😉 😊 😊 😊 😊

Prithvi briefs them about the details of the case and also tells them that it is top secret!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊

All of them are shocked to see that Navin's case is very complicated!!!!!😲 😲 😲 😲

The case is very serious and some big names are involved in it!!!!!🤔 🤔 🤔 🤔

Kaya is full of attitude and never seems to agree with Prithvi and told him to address her formally!!!!!😳 😳 😳 😳

Prithvi is worried about how he will handle her!!!!!😔 😔 😔 😔

He realised that all the other team members except Kaya will be able to get along well!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊

Everyone except Kaya is gushing about Prithvi!!!!😛 😛 😛 😛 😊 😊 😊 😊

Kaya puts Huda in his place!!!!! 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆

She makes it clear that she disagrees with Prithvi and instead wants a professional atmosphere in the team!!!!😒 😒 😒 😒

Prithvi realises that Kaya's attitude is offensive towards everyone and this troubles him!!!!!😔 😔 😔 😔

Edited by Shaina_b - 14 years ago

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KrishnaSourav

@KrishnaRukmini

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+ 10

Posted: 14 years ago

#52

awesome, brilliant part
loved it
precap is interesting
continue soon

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ria

@ronojoy_ria

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 14 years ago

#53

the up is good

so prithvi meet his felow officers and alos introduce himself

he is trying to create a friendly atmosphere amoung his team but this kaya she is really too proffessional

i think huda is right pyaar mein haayal sherni

anyways here also naveen is dead and behind this such big names are invloved

oh the case is really difficult lets se how acp prthivi and his team solve it

plz cont soon and pm me

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noaccount

@noaccount

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 14 years ago

#54

hi madhu...nice part!!!

prithvi is so friendly and kaya is full of attitude 😆😆😆

nice team

precap seems to be really interesting!!!!

plz do cont soo...ASAP

love u tons

esha

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Nisha

@dazzling_glory

Inactive

Posted: 14 years ago

#55

Nice part

Prithvi meets his new team and briefs them about the details of the case.All of them are shocked to see that Navin's case is very complicated. He realises that all the other team membersexcept Kaya will be able to get along well. But Kaya's attitude is offensive towards everyone, she is not willing to work as a team, and this troubles Prithvi

please continue soon

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Priya

@Sweet-Lioness

Inactive

+ 2

Posted: 14 years ago

#56

maza aa gaya...

toh hamara raj...apne juniors se kafi achhe se mil leta hai...infact wo toh sab se kafio frndly bhi hai...

par Kaya...kya hoga iss ladki ka...itne achhe atmoshp me bhi wo aise reaction de rahi thi jaise border pe khadi ho...ha ha ha...

Huda ka comment sahi tha...

Jiss ki first part me death hui thi...woh Naveen hai...!!! bichare ko hum sab apni apni fics me zinda rakhte hi nahi...ha ha ha...

ab maza aayega...in dono ki ek sath kaam karte hue dekh...

lekin yeh case kafi mushkil lagg raha hai...dekhte hain...Raj n Kaaya...kaise solve karte haina...

cont soon.

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-serenity-

@-serenity-

Voyager

Posted: 14 years ago

#57

Nice part

dekthe hain how these guys solve the mystery of the case

plz continue soon

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Vertika Srivastava

@Vartika07

Stunner

+ 3

Posted: 14 years ago

#58

Aie le maine jaise hi maine update pe comment kiya vaise hi tune fir se update kar diya. 😕 😕 😕
Mai ye sochne lagi ki lo ab fir se comment karoon jaldi se to is baar maine socha ki aaram se do theen din baad comment karoongi aur ab vo hi kar rahi hoon.😉 😉 😉
Uff ye Kaya bhi na kitne jyada tuff hai? 😡 😡 😡. Ab is ko team me kam female members hone se bhi problem hai. 😆 😆 😆
Mujhe to yahi surprising lag raha tha ki kaise us ne itni der tak Prith ki baat hi sun li,😆 😆 😆 agar matter serious nahi hota to shayad vo ye bhi nahi karti.
🤣 🤣 🤣
Aditi ko us k gusse ko samhalna pada us ko aur yahan sab k sab kaafi impress hain aur sab se jyada to is baat se ki itne kam age me vo ACP ban gaya hai.😊 😊 😊
Kaya ne apni baat keh di aur Prith ne apni ki kaisa atmosphere chahiye us ko team me par Kaya kahan agree karne waali thi is baat se bhale hi baaki sab agree ho. 🤔 🤔 🤔
Bechara Prith is baat se pareshaan hai ki us ka nature to sab k liye dry hai aise kaise kaam chalega tab.😔 😔 😔
Case kaafi serious hai aur accha kiya is baar ARC ko bhi villan bana diya. 😆 😆 😆
Great part dear 👏 👏 👏
update soon

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shreya

@XoxowpdXoxo

Dazzler

Posted: 14 years ago

#59

hey😊

update was nice😊 raj sabko ek friendly team banana chahta hai aur hai bhi uska friendly nature sabko ek bar me hi friend bana liya👏😊 lekin ye kaya ko dekhkar to aisa lag raha hai ki wo kabhi sudharne wAali nahi hai😆😆 humesha raj ke hi peeche padi rehti hai

and now waitng for the chase to continue soon😉😉

shreya😊