RACE, THE CHASE BEGINS(RP FIC)Updated 21.08.12 - Page 4

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Posted: 14 years ago
#31
nice update 👏
first meeting aur wo bhi aisi... kya baat hai😆😉 jab dono ek dusre se introduce honge tab kya hoga 😆😕 prithvi to jaanta hai kaya ko lekin kaya ka kya hoga wo to bhagwan jaane😆😆
continue soon😊
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Posted: 14 years ago
#32
hi madhu
the update was amazing!!!!
there first meeting was hilariuos!!!!...wow what a scene!!!!!
awesome, so DCP ka roll ronit play kar arah hai!!!!
really eager to know what happen next
plz cont soon, as u promise
love
esha
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Posted: 14 years ago
#33
Rocking meeting
Dono ne hi ek dusre ko hila diya. Prithvi is shockedt by the allegations which Kaya makes and then how she ignores him in the lift.
But Prithvi is no less usne bhi toh karara jawab diya. Kaya whi had not expected such a reply was absolutely shocked.
please continue soon
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Posted: 14 years ago
#34
Dhasu part tha bilkul...
dono ki pehli mulakat...mera matlab hai k dono ki pehli mukka-laat kafi achhi thi...ha ha ha
Kaaya ne toh sayad yeh xpect hi nahi ki hogi ke raj use iss tarah se jawab bhi de sakta hai...
maza aa gaya...
abhi tak toh gud girl bann kar jaldi jaldi update karr hi rahi ho...aage bhi karna...
cont soon dear...
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Posted: 14 years ago
#35

Idhar Pritvi DCP ke cabin main knock karta hai.

Pritvi- May I come in Sir???

DCP- arre, aao Pritvi.

Pritvi DCP ko salute karta hai.DCP Pathak( played by Ronit Bose Roy) usse bethne ka ishara karte hai.

DCP- so kaise ho Pritvi????i hope tumne quarter main settle ho gaaye ho???koi problem nahin??

Pritvi- no sir,koi problem nahin hai, I am settled, & I am fine sir.By the way Sir itna bhi kya serious case hai, jo itni jaldi mujhe yaha report karne ke liye kaha gaya????

DCP- Pritvi it's a very imp case.Iss case ke saath shayad hamara desh ki security juda hua hai.

Pritvi ab aapna casual mode se bahar aata hai, aur DCP sir ke baato par poori tarah se concentrate karta hai.Pritvi ke iss expression change ko DCP Pathak notice karte hai, DCP Pritvi ko le kar poori tarah se confident the,jab case ki Incharge kise kiye jaaye, iss baat ko le kar meeting chal rahi thi, tab DCP ne iss case ka Incharge ke liye Pritvi ka name suggest kiya, Pritvi jab se CBI join kiya hai, tab se woh usse jante hai, infact Pritvi ki capability ko le kar bhi woh poori tarah se confident hai, saath hi uske dedication se bhi woh impressed hai.Pritvi bhi DCP Pathak ko aapni mentor ki tarah manta hai.

DCP- Pritvi tum Navin Singh Aluwalia ko jante ho????

Pritvi- Sir, main unhe personally nahin janta,unke bare main newspaper main padha hai.Aajkal to newspaper ho yaa news channel crime news se hi bhada pada hai.Aur jab CBI ko criticize karna ho, tab to saare newspaper aur news channel specially interested ho jaate hai.

Pritvi aajkal Newspaper aur news channel ho se kaafi irritated hai.Navin Singh ki maut ke baad CBI ko itna criticize kiya gaya ki as an CBI Officer Pritvi bohut hi gussa hai.Har Channel main kaha gaya agar CBI aapne Officer ke liye security nahin provide kar saka aur uski murder mystery ko nahin suljha paaya, to kya hoga???

DCP Pritvi ko ek file deta hai.

DCP- case file, isme case ki details, saath hi tumhare saath kaam karnewale Officers ki details.

Pritvi file leta hai, par ekdum last page open karta hai.DCP acchi tarah se Pritvi ki iss adat ko jante hai.

DCP- so Pritvi tumhara habit change nahin hua????abhi bhi last page pehle dekhte ho????

Pritvi- of course Sir, pehle main aapni team ko dekhta hoon, agar team accha hua, to case kitni bhi muskil kyun naa ho, usse successfully handle kiya jaa sakta hai.

DCP- don't worry Pritvi, team bohut hi chota hai,but jaise maine tumhe personally iss case ka Investigating Officer select kiya hai, thik waise hi in sab ko maine hi select kiya hai.

Pritvi ka aankh ek naam par aa kar aatak jaata hai."Inspector Kaya Sehgal".

Pritvi(in mind)- kahin yeh liftwaali to nahin hai????main to soch raha tha jiske under kaam karti hai,uska to halat bigad deti hogi, but ab mujhe aisa kyun lag raha hai yeh musibat mere hi gale padhnewali hai,mera 6 th sense, nahin nahin, not only 6th sense, 7th,8th ,9th sab sense keh rahi hai keh wohi same ladki hai.God save me.sirf galti se takra jaane par line marne ka allegation laga diya??koi agar line mare tab kya karegi???main uss ladki ko le kar itna kyun soch rahi hoon???Pritvi, lets concentrate on case.

DCP aur Pritvi case discuss karne lagte hai.

Idhar Kaya ACP Dutta ke Office se DCP ke Office pauchti hai.Aur cabin ke door par knock karti hai.

Kaya- May I come in Sir???

That's it, Pritvi voice ko sunte hi turant identify kar leta hai.Pritvi bina peeche mudhe hi bol sakta hai yeh same ladki hai, "Kaya".

DCP- yes, come in Inspector.

Kaya andar aati hai,aur DCP ko salute karti hai. par chair main betha insaan dekh kar phir se uska gussa satve aasman par hota hai.Bohut muskil se usne aapne aapko shant kiya tha.

DCP- Inspector yeh hai ACP Pritviraj Rathod, aur Pritvi yeh hai Inspector Kaya Sehgal, tumhare saath kaam karegi.tum file main naam to dekh hi chuke ho?

Pritvi ko tab bohut hassi aa raha tha, Kaya ki facial expression dekh ke.

Pritvi- yes sir, maine inka naam dekha hai file hai( phir Kaya ke taraf dekh kar ek bada sa smile de kar aapna haath aage karta hai) hello Inspector, nice to meet u.

Kaya ko Pritvi ka smile dekh kar aur bhi zyada gussa ho jaati hai, yeh ladka ACP hai, aur aaj se Kaya uske under kaam karegi, yeh jaan kar Kaya shocked thi,usse Pritvi ko dekh kar laga tha woh bhi uske tarah Ins. Hai.But Kaya controlled herself,woh Pritvi se haath milata hai, nice to meet u too sir.

Pritvi Kaya ke taraf dekh raha tha,straight face.ek formal smile bhi nahin diya.Infact DCP sir ko greet karte waqt bhi koi formal smile nahin tha.

Pritvi(in mind)- yeh ladki hasti nahin hai kya????kaise rehti hai bina hasse???beautiful hai, agar thoda sa smile karegi to aur bhi zyada khoobsurat lagegi.Aur hasna sehat ke liye accha hai.

DCP- okay, Pritvi, ab iss case pe kaam karna shuru kar do, all the best,aur haa iss case ko le kar job hi decisions tum loge bohut soch samaj kar loge, coz iss case ka importance tum samaj sakte ho.

Pritvi- ofcourse Sir,& thank u sir.

DCP- Kaya Pritvi ko new office main le jao, wohi tumhare baaki team members bhi hai.

Kaya- yes sir.

Yeh keh kar Pritvi aur Kaya dono DCP ko salute karte hai,aur DCP ke office se chale jaate hai.

Kaya jaldi jaldi chal rahi hai, pritvi uske peeche peeche aa raha hai.Kaya Pritvi se koi baat nahin kiya hai ab tak.Pritvi ne ek sorry expect kiya tha,but Kaya jis attitude ke saath chal rahi thi,Pritvi sorry ka expectation chod chuka hai.Pritvi chup to reh nahin sakta, saath hi uska nature, masti, mazak ke bina jee nahin sakta hai.

Pritvi- excuse me Kaya mam, main to kabse aapko follow kar raha hoon, ab saath saath chal sakta hoon plz, kyunki mujhe dar lag raha hai aap jis speed se chal rahi hai, kahin main iss H.Q main kho naa jaun???

Kaya- Hum yaha par Professional reason se ek saath hai, to aap mujhe Ins Sehgal kehiye,I don't like it, ki koi mujhe mere naam se bulaye.Aur aap senior hai,so yeh aapko shoba nahin deta ki aap constantly aapne junior officer ko tana mare, mock kare,agar aapko lage ki aapke junior aapko izzat kare, to pehle aapko unke saath tamiz se pesh aana chayiye.Mujhe to kabhi kabhi kuch logo ko dekh kar aisa lagta hai sirf ACP ban jane se manners nahin aa jaata.main aapko mean nahin kar raha hoon "ACP sir".

Pritvi ( in mind)- waah! Kaya, kitna beautifully tumne mujhe taunt kiya,"Miss Lady Hitler".

Pritvi(with a smile)- hmm, aapne abhi abhi mera jo class liya, iss lession ko main yaad rakhunga, sabah bhi aapne mujhe kuch sikhaya tha, aapse mujhe itni choti si time par kitna kuch sikha diya.aapse mujhe bohut kuch sikhne ko mil rahi hai,Aur Junior se bhi bohut kuch sikha jaa sakta hai.Yeh main aapko mock nahin kar raha hoon, yeh mera honest opinion hai.

Kaya- kisi ki opinion to main badal nahin sakti,mujhe aisa kyun lagta hai taunting main aapne Masters ki hai????

Pritvi- well Ins thanks for the compliment, par ek chota sa edit karunga, maine Masters to Maths main kiya hai, but haa taunting main meri Ph.d hai.

Kaya Pritvi ke upar pehle se gussa thi, lekin jab usse pata chala Pritvi ACP hai, to usne taunt kiya,Par Pritvi par to koi asar hi nahin hua,as usual usne aapna cool attitude maintain kiya.Ab Kaya ko lag raha tha Pritvi aisa jaan bhuj kar raha hai,coz Kaya agar gusse main kuch bole to woh Kaya ki image par ek dabba hoga.Aur kuch mannerless logo ke liye Kaya kyun aapna usool bhul jaaye?aise logo ka muh lagna hi nahin chayiye.

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Posted: 14 years ago
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well, thats all for today, i know small part, but still, enjoy the part.Next part bhi jaldi post karungi.& thanks for commenting.
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Posted: 14 years ago
#37

Too good!!!!Awesome!!!!

Prithvi is very sincere towards his work and knowing this DCP Pathak has given him such an important case!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊

Navin was the guy who was killed in the beginning right??🤔 🤔 🤔 🤔

Prithvi believes ke team accha huya toh case successfully solve ho hi jayega!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 👍🏼 👍🏼 👍🏼 👍🏼

Prithvi is shocked to see Kaya's name on his team and is sure it is the same Kaya!!!!😲 Shocked Shocked Shocked Shocked

Woh ab soch raha hai ke uska kya hoga!!!!!😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆

Kaya is shocked and annoyed to know that Prithvi is her senior and she will have to follow his orders!!!!Shocked Shocked Shocked Shocked Shocked

Prithvi feels like laughing seeing her face and seeing him smile made her more angry!!!!!😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😡 😡 😡 😡 😡

He wondered if she ever smiled and is thinking that she will look more beautiful when she smiles!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳

Prithvi is amused at Kaya's behaviour and she seems to be quite stiff with him while he is enjoying it!!!!!😛 😛 😛 😛 😊 😊 😊 😊

Kaya taunts Prithvi and Prithi calls her Lady Hitler in his mind!!!!!😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 🤣 🤣 🤣 🤣

Prithvi's taunts outsmarts Kaya everytime and she gets even more irritated seeing how calm he is!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆

I hope Prithvi is able to change Kaya for the better!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊


Edited by Shaina_b - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
#38
nice update madhu...plz continue soon...
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Posted: 14 years ago
#39
hi
the up is good
so DCP gave a imp case to prithvi to handle and no wonder in this case kaay will be his assisting officer
so kaya and prithvi met and as usuall starts fighting
plz cont soon and pm me
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Posted: 14 years ago
#40

Hey dear sorry for being late in reply. 😔 😔 😔
great start 👏
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Specially loved my Prithvi and Kaya jin k milne ka mujhe besabri se intejaar hai. 😉 😉 😉
Kaya jaise bhi hai mera Prithvi us ka nature apne hisab se badal lega mujhe bharosa hai. 😃 😳 😳
Jaldi hi ye mauka Kaya ko milega, vo admi Naveen hi tha na jis ko us black dress waale ne mara hai? Vaise mujhe sure hai ki vo Naveen hi tha.
Us aadmi ne koshish ki to thi ki vo mail sent na ho paaye par vo mail chala hi gaya. 😛 😛 😛
Great suspense thriller u created loved it.
👏 👏 👏

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