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@divyamala

I'll try but but I promise to write a lot of maaneet in future...

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missed ur comment on this part yaar...I really wait for them...

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Part 7

On their way to returning home after completing admission procedure and visiting gurudwara Pratham got a call from Gauri asking them to come at xyz mall. After they reached the mall.

Gauri: Geet beta buy many new clothes for yourself. You have join college from tomorrow na?

GEET: But mom! I...

Gauri interrupted her...

Gauri: Pls beta for my happiness. Apni ma se kuch lene mein to kabhi koi beti nhin jhijhakti. Do you call me mom just for the sake of it?

GEET: Nhin mom aisi koi baat nhin hai main to bas...khair let it be lets shop hard?

They laughed and went for shopping...

By the time the three of them reached home Annie left for a sleepover at her friends house. Geet kept the shopping bags in her room and went straight to the kitchen. She was very excited about her new college and very thankful towards each member of khurana mansion and wanted to give treat to everyone. She prepared everyones favourite dishes.

GEET: Thank you kehne jaungi to wo dusht danav mujhpe chillane lagenge "i didn't do anything for you, i hate you (imitating Maan)" but I have to thank him whatever the reason was I'm here because of him and I know he can't deny my hand-cooked food. So this is the best way to thank him. Thank you Babaji for your awsome idea.

Pratham got to know about Maan's tour from Adi. He informed Gauri and dadima but thinking that Maan must have told Geet no one informed her.

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Here Maan landed and went straight to the site.

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DINNER TABLE

Geet was serving everyone...

Dadima: Bete ap baithye we will help ourselves.

GEET: Its ok dadima I don't feel like eating.

Dadima: Arey no way beta you should not skip your dinner. Sit and eat.

GEET: Pls dadima i'll have dinner after sometime. Pls...(with her puppy dog face)

Dadima: Ok beta but kha zaroor lijiega.

GEET: Ji dadima!

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After finishing his work Maan came to his hotel room and ordered coffee and something to eat.

While sipping his coffee...

MAAN: Yuck!! These people call this coffee? Coffee banana to geet ko hi best aata hai. Actually not only coffee her cooking is also worth finger-licking. Oh God! I again started thinking about Geet but I used to praise her cooking(with a lot of pain) unknowingly but now I'm aware of everything and of course Geet doesn't deserve my praise but Maan Singh Khurana can't go against his own words. Ya but that doesn't mean you'll go on praising her Maan. Haan Maan you should ignore everything about her thats the way you'll be able to clear your head off her thoughts and attraction but how can I ignore her big hazel eyes which overflows with love and respect whenever they look at me, her cute nose under which there is even cuter beauty spot, her luscious lips which seems like feather oh I so wish to taste everytime I look at them, her milky smooth skin which...his trail of thoughts were broken by a knock at the door. He opened the door, it was housekeeper...

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Geet was feeling really sleepy by now but she was determined to wait for Maan today. When Gauri came to have some water she saw Geet sleeping with her head on the dining table.

Gauri: Geet! Geet!

GEET: Haan you came Maan?

Gauri: Beta its me mom not Maan. It'll be better if you'll sleep on your bed and dream there.

Geet's cheeks turned crimson with embarrasment.

GEET: Sorry mom...wo...I was waiting for Maan.

Gauri: Arey beta he didn't tell u? He has went to London. There was some problem with a project there. Aane do use achche se khabar leti hoon...sahabzade ko kaam ke aage kuch dikhta hi nhin hai.

GEET: Nhin mom he told me I only forgot.

Gauri: Beta I'm his mom I know him well to guess his actions but its feels really good to see the immense love you have for him. Beta you had your dinner or you are were waiting to have dinner with him?

GEET: Wo...

Gauri: No need to say I got your answer now eat your dinner.

GEET: Mom its too late now let it be.

Gauri: No way! Eat!

Pratham was calling Gauri.

Gauri: Aai! Beta pls have your dinner and then go to bed. Ok?

GEET: Ji!

After she went Geet cleared the table and went to her room she was very upset and disappointed with Maan's sudden departure.

GEET: Kya babaji yahan bhi unhen dekhne ke liye wait karna parega? Hoshiapur mein to I had to wait for weekends. Hope this wait won't be as long as that. Till then this picture can help me and its plus point is that it won't even shout at me.

She kept the picture close to her heart and dosed off.

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After housekeeper left...

MAAN: Will you get over the attraction like this drooling over her each part and getting hard just by her thoughts? No Maan you can't lose yourself like this. Rano mom chose her over you. You hate her and will keep hating her forever. REMEMBER THAT!!

Reminding himself and feeling very exhausted with the physical work and the mental struggle he went through he crashed on the bed.

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MORNING

Geet woke up and got ready. She had her breakfast with everyone and left for the college. After reaching college she went straight to dean office to get her schedule and class slip.

She was getting inside her class in a hurry when she collided with something rather someone. She was going to hit the floor when a pair of strong arms held her. The person was completely lost looking at her. Geet was struggling to be freed off the strong arms when he didn't move with her lighter tries she pushed him a little harder. That push broke his trance and he helped her to stand straight.

Person: Sry and hi! I'm Jai.

GEET: Hi! Geet.

Jai: Never seen you around, new?

GEET: Yup its my first day here.

Jai: Oh so I got the priviledge of being the first person of the class to meet the gorgeous? Hmmm...then to we should be friends without wasting any time.

GEET: Thanks but sorry I don't make friends so easily.

She was moving away. Jai went after her...

Jai: Ok don't befriend me but meri gang se to mil lo...ye Sam aka Samrat, Benji, Gunjan, Mayank, Nupur, Uday and Dia.

They all smiled and said hi to Geet and she reciprocated their gesture.

Nupur(whispers in Jai's ear): Kya yaar phir se nai bandi tu kab chhodega ye sab?

Jai: Pls yaar Nupur aise mat bol ek tu hi to hai jo mujhe samajhti hai. Pls help na...

Nupur: Ok! Ok! Ab ye makhanbazi band kar. (a little louder) Geet come na sit with us.

GEET: Thanks.

They all attended the lectures and chatted. Geet thoroughly enjoyed her first day with them. She really found great friends in Gunjan and Nupur. Others were also really nice and fun to be with.

IN THE EVENING

Geet was non stop narrating every happening of the college to everyone at home.

(Abgina thinking: "bechari khurana family and lucky Maan bach gaya)

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Maan was at the site talking to the worker's representative when his eyes fell on a couple where the girl was exitedly blabbering. He was instantly reminded of Geet how her big round eyes sparkle and try to get out of its sockets when she talks excitedly.

MAAN(thinking): Oh I so want to see her adorable eyes and feel them under his lips.

Representative: Sir...sir...are you listening?

MAAN: Ya...ya Mr. Rick...

This is how his every moment was passing at London...with or without Geet he was sorrounded with her thoughts.

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At night Geet before going to sleep prayed...

GEET: Thank you so much babaji. You gave such a sweet and loving family. You gave me chance to complete my studies and led my entire first day smoothly and with a lot of fun. Pls babaji ab bas Maan ko jaldi se yahaan bhej do taras gai main unki ek jhalak ke liye. I really wanted him to be here. Good night babaji!

Several days passed this way Geet developed great bonds with all the gang members except Dia and Jai. She felt very uncomfortable with Jai due to his flirting and Dia was jealous of her because Jai was ignoring Dia since Geet joined the gang. It seemed that Geet's studies and family were keeping her occupied but her heart was craving for Maan's one look and the craving increased with each passing day.

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Maan was relishing on the taste of the addictive lips. It felt like heaven to feel her body under him. His hands were trying to touch each and every crevice of her body. She gasped with his touch and he started to taste her inner secrets. She was responding with the same passion. He was about to open the dori of her kurti...buzz!! He got up with the sound of his alarm panting in the bed alone. Having such dreams about Geet has become his routine by now. He was really scared to be back home with his attraction towards towards her increasing with each day.

MAAN(thinking): I can't stay here for long now but how will I control myself with Geet being in the same room with me? How?


Here is another update for u guys...do tell me how did you like it...

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Edited by crazydevil87 - 13 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
superb update plz cont soon
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Posted: 14 years ago
awesome
now maan woulldd be jealous grom jai would love it but dont let jai creat mu b/w maaneet
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Posted: 14 years ago
awesome, nice part

loved it
continue soon
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Posted: 14 years ago
oho!maan s jst lyk kid...
he s thinking rano mom chose her rather dan him..
nw ds new wntry jai vl increase the temper of maan...
waiting 4 dat..
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Posted: 14 years ago
Amazingly elaborated update, keep writing n rocking!!!

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