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Posted: 13 years ago
👏WONDERFUL!!!!👏

awsum work dear, loved every bit of it... please let maan fall for her soon as now he doesnt have a reason to hate her...😭
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: soniya_maaneet

WONDERFUL!!!!
awsum work dear, loved every bit of it... please let maan fall for her soon as now he doesnt have a reason to hate her...


thank you very much dear...
The reason 4 maan's hatred is rano's death n not sameera's lies. Sameera's lies just increased his hatred but don't worry its a MANEET ff he has 2 fall 4 her...
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Posted: 13 years ago
i just came across ur FF and i must say its amazing
Cont soon
Luv
TC
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Posted: 13 years ago
hey hi...just came across ur ff nd i simply luved da whole concept of it :)
plzz add me 2 ur pm list nd hope u update soon
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Posted: 13 years ago
Omg that was so nice
maan taking all the matters in his own hands
n being protective for geet... It was so adorable
plz continue soon
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Posted: 13 years ago
Wonderful update
Yash and Meera played their role perfectly maan has now taken matters in his hand this was really good
o poor geet wanted to hear from maan that he cares for her but maan ne family ka naam le liya
maan babu kisse jhooth bol rahe ho jab geet ki dead body ki baat aayi tab toh pairo tale zameen pisal gayi thi
Loved the way maan covered geet inorder to protect her
waiting for the day when maan will fall for geet
update fast
love-Piya
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Posted: 13 years ago
Sry guys have some guests at home will take an hour or so...Sry...
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Posted: 13 years ago

u updating we waiting😍

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Posted: 13 years ago


(created by Piya)


Really sry to keep you waiting guys...Thank u sooo much for all the love and appreciation...it really motivates me...



Part 6

As sun's rays fell on Maan's face he frowned den suddenly turned back realising where he was.

MAAN(thinking): Thank god i woke up first if Geet would have seen me like this her expectations would have started flying high. Waise i should wake her up before that goon comes in. Geet! Geet!

GEET: Ji thaiji abhi aai...

Maan with a glare speaks angrily...

MAAN: Does my voice sounds like thaiji's to your ears?

Geet realises where she was and takes out her tongue in nervousness...

GEET(with puppy dog face): So...so...rr...y Maan...wo neend mein...sorry.

MAAN(thinking): Oh who could be angry after seeing this cute expression of her's?

MAAN: Its ok!

GEET(amazed, thinking): Arey...he left the chance to be angry on me...is he alright?

MAAN(thinking): How should i tell her about dupatta...its awkward...but i have to...

MAAN: Geet your...du...patta...its not proper...

Geet turned pink with embarrassment and instantly cuddled herself. After that both were too embarrassed to speak thus silence prevailed between them.

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By now Maan's plan was in full swing. The property transfer was cancelled and police kept a watch on all the four accused and their phones were also being tapped.

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Brij and Sameera went to court to check the progress of transfer and were informed that the magistrate is on leave for 2-3 days. Sameera called thayaji after getting the piece of news.

Sameera: Dad there will be long delay in transfer. The magistrate has gone on leave for 2-3 days.

Thayaji: God! Now what beta? We can't keep Maan with us for that long, its risky.

Sameera: You don't worry dad i'll handle him.

Thayaji: But how?

Sameera: I'll make him or Geet call their home and say that they are fine and will be staying here for more days.

Thayaji: I hope that works.

Sameera: Definitely dad.

Both Sameera and Brij left for godown to execute their new plan but they were unaware that police heard their conversation and a large police force started following them. As they reached godown police arrested the four of them and rescued Maan and Geet. Using the search warrent police also got hold of property papers and then arrested thayaji and thaiji too. Maan thanked everyone specially Adi. Geet was outside thanking Meera, Yash and Dev when Maan came to them. He also thanked the three of them and they left for Delhi.

ON THE WAY

MAAN: Geet I've all your property papers and since legally I'm your husband I've got the power of attorney automatically. As per uncle's will you will get everything when you turn 20. Is that ok or you want the power of attorney with someone else?

GEET: Of course no Maan. I want everything to be with you only. Maan...wo...I wanted to talk about thaiji and thayaji...

MAAN(with a glare): What about them??

GEET: Wo...don't you think they are too old to stay in jail?

MAAN(with rage in his eyes): Of course no! I want them to suffer every moment of their life ahead for treating you like shit and using your naiveness for their gain.

Geet was just looking in his eyes amazed with the care his eyes were portraying for her. She was not able to understand this man. On one hand he doesn't leave a single chance to torment her with his words and on the other hand he wants to punish the people who tormented her.

Maan was completely lost in her piercing gaze when Geet heard a honk and turned...

GEET(shouts): MAAAN!! Look ahead...

A truck was coming from the other direction but Maan reacted on time to save any accident.

MAAN(thinking): What happened to me? Was 'I' actually lost in "Geet's" eyes? How could you Maan u HATE her, don't you remember that? I have to stay away from this girl else she will drive me insane.

Their journey ahead was completely silent.

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By the time they reached home both of them were extremely tired. They met everyone, had their dinner and crashed on their bed and couch.

ON BREAKFAST TABLE

After having his breakfast Maan said bye to everyone and went to office.

Pratham: Geet beta! Are you ready to go?

GEET: Where papa?

Pratham: Are you forgot? I told you we will go for your admission after you return.

Geet's eyes sparkled with the mention of her admission.

GEET: Are haan papa main to bhool hi gai. I'll just be back with my documents.

She came and they left for the College.

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Maan was working in his cabin when Adi knocked.

MAAN: Come in.

Adi: Sir we are facing major problems in our xyz hotel project in London. Someone has to personally go and check.

Maan: This project is very important Adi I'll myself go and check everything. Book my ticket and give me the details.

Adi: Ok sir.

After Adi left...

MAAN(thinking): Hmmm...great...somebody has said very true that everything happens for good. Those problems will at least take a week to be sorted out so I'll stay away from Geet and get hold of the stupid attraction I feel for her.

Adi knocked again and Maan asked him to come in.

Adi: Sir your flight will depart at 5pm.

MAAN: Ok Adi! Thank you!

Adi leaves while Maan looks at his watch.

MAAN(thinking): Its already 12. I've to go and take my luggage too. I better get going.

After reaching home Maan packs his things and came downstairs. Annie was sitting and reading something...

Maan: Annie where is Geet?

Annie: Kyun bhai missing her na?

Maan felt very uncomfortable with Annie's question. He himself didn't know why he felt the urge to ask her about Geet's absence''''''

MAAN: I just wanted my coffee don't start assuming things.

Annie(silently laughing at her brother's plight): Chill Bhai!! I'll bring your coffee.

After having his coffee Maan asked Annie to inform everyone about his tour and left for the airport''''..

Heres d update guys!!!!!! I know its a little boring one but pls do like and comment and i promise the next will be a good one...Pls do comment guys I love reading them...

THANK YOU EVERYONE!!!!!!!!

Edited by crazydevil87 - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
are no dear.. D update wasnt boring at all.. Though ntg major happened bt it ws still cute n nyc.. :) chill & dnt wry so much... :)
thx 4 d pm.. :) n update soon... :)

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