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TheLeo_M

@TheLeo_M

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Posted: 13 years ago

#371

lovely update...😊
their past is so beautiful...then what happened due to which they fall apart😲

waiting for the next update...😳

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Auroni

@Auroni.92

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+ 4

Posted: 13 years ago

#372

Beautiful update...
The first part ws way too cute...The teasing, nupur talking with varun part ws beautifully written...
And seems problm is making its way now...
Cont soon...

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np18

@np18

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Posted: 13 years ago

#373

hi my like button isnrt working - its going on superbly thumbs up payal- my smileys not working eithr

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manjeet

@love.mayurarti

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Posted: 13 years ago

#374

Lovely update

Loved the nupur was taking care of varun n making that faces n voices..So sweet

Sorry...There is prob in liking the part

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Aysha Saxena

@aysha_mayur

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Posted: 13 years ago

#375

Pallu the update was extremely cute😳...I just loved the lovely convo between Mayank-Nupur and their child...😳😆

I wished to see such kind of scenes in MJHT also but nevermind...you just described it perfectly 😳

'who wouldn't smile looking at Mayank'...so true...😃😆

Well Nupur right now is very very affectionate towards her child that she forgot her career too...but I think here lies the main point...It was becoz of her resonance between her career and child only that they drifted apart...I assume...🤔

and the last part was a bit confusing...What did Mayank try to say and project..🤔

In all it was lovely part

Update soon Palzzz😳

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ESHITA GHOSH

@Eshita_Sweety

Explorer

Posted: 13 years ago

#376

It was an amazing update Pallu...But what went wrong between them..dint get that :( Eagerly waiting for ur next update...Hope u update it asap..want to know what really hapened..
Thanks.

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drmaha

@drmaha

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Posted: 13 years ago

#377

beautiful dear...

but things went wrong... :(

very well written dear...:)

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Divya

@MyInspirationz

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Posted: 13 years ago

#378

Pally.. my LIKE isn't working... but i loved this part... especially the time that MN and varun spent together.. reminded me of my times... Beautifully written Pally 😊 😊

Loved this line the most.. 'who wouldn't smile looking at Mayank'.😃😃😃😃😃😃

Edited by .Divya. - 13 years ago

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Sania

@dynamic_doll

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+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#379

nice update Payal!

continue soon

nd thanx for the pm 😊

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Shafy_Kaira_MN

@Shafy_Kaira_MN

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Posted: 13 years ago

#380

Originally posted by: SamiraARTiMAYUR
Totally Amazing part hun Varun verry cute
loved how he told everythng about his dad

it's like he's making beace between his parents without unknowledge

brillinat update

thanks for the pm

please update next part...