Originally posted by: CIDMaaneetNaksh
whoopie!!!! intezaar ka phal meetha hota hai!!! me first!!!!! yay!!!! yay!!! yuppie!!!
now the Update-very good...how do you write so well Piya...mujhe bhi tips diya karo na... Maan ne kya maara Arjun ko...he deserves it...! baap re baap...aaj to Maan murder karne pe utaaru tha... Mishti ka Maan apni Mishti pe aankh kaise uthne de!!! and then last mein...he tries so hard to hide his feelings but keh bhi do yr...!!Saibo!!!! 😳😳😳 when are you Updating... tell me na!!!
O Shivu writing tips tho mujhe tumse leni chahiye yaar. Yes u r right maan tho aaj murder hi kar detha agar geet usse nahi rokthi tho regarding confession uske liye abhi bahut waqt hai
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