Kaliren (Maaneet ff) updated on pg69/ 3may

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LuvScooby

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Posted: 13 years ago

#341

From last update and this update, we pretty much understand Maan and his family dynamics. But, Geet still remains an enigma...what pain is she carrying that Maan read in her eyes. I'm guessing next update will reveal more about Handas, can't wait for it.

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Anu

@anuandavi

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Posted: 13 years ago

#342

Sabse pehle, WELCOME BACK. Missed u. Detail me comments later in the day.

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-Elfin-

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Posted: 13 years ago

#343

"Simplicity is the ultimate sophistication" ~~ Leonardo da Vinci 😊

This is the only thought that came to my mind after reading the update. 😳

The Khurana family is a circus.Period. It needs a "Geet special" immediately.😈

Now coming to Maan-kid interaction, I freaked out after reading the "nose" comment. I can so imagine his face after hearing that brilliant logic. I am waiting for the day he gets back at Geet for teaching the kids such lessons.😆

I loved Maaneet scene, no OTT "aap, tum, yahan kaise and blah."

So Maan Khurana is falling for her and fast. Given the narration of the story, its gonna be Maan falling in love first rather accepting his feelings first, and then "Mision : Make Geet Handa confess" begins.😎

Next part thora jaldi update karna meri amma.

Lubb you.🤗

Edited by -Manashi- - 13 years ago

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Soapoperasrfun

@Soapoperasrfun

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Posted: 13 years ago

#344

Yeh bache bhi na... 🤣

The way they spoke to Maan was unmatchable. Very very cute.

I cannot wait to hear about Geet's past. I share Maan;s confusion about her and feel his restlessness and compulsion to know more about her. Cannot wait for you to clear my anxiousness.

This story is shaping out very well, just like your other one. Simply brilliant.