Shifting Sands Chapter 20 posted/pg 146

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Water

@Water.

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Posted: 14 years ago

#351

Maan fails in front of her again...the way he is pulled towards her...his jealousy...brings him off track once again...

Lets see what happens next...m waiting...for all of this to get over and the story to move forward..

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sai

@KaSh-Maneet-Fan

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Posted: 14 years ago

#352

hiii

awesome update

loved it

loved maaneet

they both share da same ego

cant wait 4 more

con son

thanks 4 da pm

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@simi91

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Posted: 14 years ago

#353

amazing update

love it

cont soon

thank yu so much

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maaneetsangel

@maaneetsangel

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Posted: 14 years ago

#354

awesome ... superb ...

thnx 4 d pm ...

continue soon ...

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mystique_girl

@mystique_girl

Voyager

Posted: 14 years ago

#355

I was just thinking that Maan has made a smart move when I see him losing his senses again...I think this always happens with the right person - you end up thinking only about being closer and let go of everything else...

While I still feel Geet is very different, I really admire you for your brand new characterisation of Geet. While I frequently come across stories where Maan is a playboy, I dont remember reading one where Geet is such as portrayed here..and to be very honest I was looking forward to exactly this😃

Loving the new story already, it has a lot more suspense to it😊

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jazzerette

@jazzerette

Dazzler

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Posted: 14 years ago

#356

@part 5 and 6...Smart Geet...even though it was under-handed!

As for Maan...its easy to condemn...and even easier to loose control. Being right is the hard part.

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Rakhi Sunil Kumar

@goldenball

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Posted: 14 years ago

#357

Originally posted by: jazzerette
@part 5 and 6...Smart Geet...even though it was under-handed!

As for Maan...its easy to condemn...and even easier to loose control. Being right is the hard part.

Yes...being right and ethical...he will never be able to play games like her...😛

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Rakhi Sunil Kumar

@goldenball

Voyager

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Posted: 14 years ago

#358

Originally posted by: mystique_girl
I was just thinking that Maan has made a smart move when I see him losing his senses again...I think this always happens with the right person - you end up thinking only about being closer and let go of everything else...

While I still feel Geet is very different, I really admire you for your brand new characterisation of Geet. While I frequently come across stories where Maan is a playboy, I dont remember reading one where Geet is such as portrayed here..and to be very honest I was looking forward to exactly this😃

Loving the new story already, it has a lot more suspense to it😊

Geet character is different...we always associate Geet as sweet...loving...jhali...but this aspects actually exist in all women whatever way they live the life...

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Rakhi Sunil Kumar

@goldenball

Voyager

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Posted: 14 years ago

#359

Originally posted by: zahra15
nice update...maan feels that he has been fooled...but then he has to admit...geet is very shrewd...continue soon n thnxxx...

Maan will be ethical and Geet shrewd...still they will submit to love...that's interesting

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Rakhi Sunil Kumar

@goldenball

Voyager

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Posted: 14 years ago

#360

Originally posted by: tushti-kiran
Maan is slowly getting into the sweet trap named Geet Handa...he is angry but his anger is working as a catalyst and drawing him towards her...this is normal human tendency how much we hate someone we keep on thinking about same person that much...Maan's ego is such that he doesn't think before action when he is jealous.

thanx for pm GB and update fast...ur updates create too much curiosity in my mind

Yes..opposite attract...She is what he couldn't be because of his family background.