Shifting Sands Chapter 20 posted/pg 146

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Rakhi Sunil Kumar

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Posted: 14 years ago

#361

Originally posted by: drashsree100

Maan will not get this merger go w/o taking his share of cake ; I'm sure he too will have plans to get back to Geet Handa 😉
Party !!! 😳
Am looking forward to ; already hit the dance floor !

Nice update
Thanks for pm ...

Yes Maan's condition will be like patanga...he is attracted but his values will not let him submitas

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Rakhi Sunil Kumar

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Posted: 14 years ago

#362

Originally posted by: Water.
Maan fails in front of her again...the way he is pulled towards her...his jealousy...brings him off track once again...
Lets see what happens next...m waiting...for all of this to get over and the story to move forward..

He is doing all unknowingly...starting from buying her company.

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Rakhi Sunil Kumar

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Posted: 14 years ago

#363

Originally posted by: softly_spoken
awesome update
i think i am repeating myself over and over again but i really loved geet's character...

she is a care free girl but maan is an egoist... he has fallen for her, but his ego isnt letting him accept the fact...

loved it

continue soon

he will not realize it so soon...once he realizes...how he will react will be interesting

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abinash079

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Posted: 14 years ago

#364

when will u update the next part?

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Rakhi Sunil Kumar

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Posted: 14 years ago

#365

Originally posted by: abinash079
when will u update the next part?

tomorrow i will try to put.

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Sneha Bhattacharya

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Posted: 14 years ago

#366

Your storyline is going great...and the concept is really unusual. Liked the update. Do continue soon.

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Deepa

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Posted: 14 years ago

#367

part 6
whoa Maan is so mad and angry at Geet for fooling him...
cont soon dear...

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meravigiliso

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Posted: 14 years ago

#368

Smartest geet ever seen yar . She knows how to play her cards . great going .

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abinash079

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Posted: 14 years ago

#369

awesome update something is there which geet tries to hide from others maan has already fallen for her he cant see her in pain or in upset condition
very sad that no daily updates plz try to give as many update as possible
continue soon

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Craziest_MG

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Posted: 14 years ago

#370

Awesome part...

So there is a story behind her being like this...i hope m right...
Maan agreed...wow...

Jaiselmer...ahan...this will be fun...actually hope so...

Updt soon.
Thanks for the pm.