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Posted: 13 years ago
awesome update
loved it
so maan next mission is to know geet 😊😊😊😊😊
continue soon
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Posted: 13 years ago
Superb part...
Loved it...

Geet is still a mystery...
But Maan ko maafi mil gayi...yippie...
Lol

Updt soon.
Thanks for the pm.
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Posted: 13 years ago
part 20...
maan kya hamko bhi pata karna hai what is hidden in geets heart
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Posted: 13 years ago
Part 20:

Maan's POV:

Since that night

One day on a lonely night
The stars shined and the moon smiled
You descended down the earth like an Angel
Your beauty sparkled like the pearls on the ocean bed
Your laughter created ripples on the silent sea
Your unconscious tug at my heart compelled me
To get pulled towards you..

Since that night
All I can think of is you
All I can dream of is you
You are all I can see in front of me
You are all I can feel beside me

My world has turned upside down
My days are spent restlessly thinking about you
And my nights are spent sleeplessly dreaming about you
Everywhere I go, everywhere I turn
All I see is you, you and you.

An invisible thread pulls me towards you
And makes me question this lure towards you
Is it attraction or love?
I am not sure what is it that I feel towards you, but
All I want is to get to know you better
All I want is to hear you talk
All I want is to hear you laugh
All I want is to spend all my moments with you
And All I want is you, you and you!

I want to be close to you
I want to understand you
So please give me a chance, just one more time
I beg for your forgiveness from the ground
I want to make everything better
While I soothe you in my arms
My heart is restless
Not knowing what you feel
Oh! dear Angel from the heaven..
Please give me a chance, just once chance
Because All I want is you, you and you
Since that night...

'This is not one of my best works Rakhi, but I wanted to write something from Maan's POV on ur FF for the longest time...and today I just could not stop myself...Lord! m so emotional rite now...😭





Edited by Water. - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
lovely update
at last geet forgave maan
and maan also thought very correct that how can he judge her without knowing anything about her now maan is ver clear about his feelings.
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: adorableyosh



Self respect? what kind of self respect make you sleeps with men to get what you want? what is she proud of? If she is self respecting that she should have leaded her life with pride and dignity. I will not call this is a self respect.

What is this Geet doing, not even thinking out her child... if she feels bad for whatever Maan said to her then why she cannot think about Yash. What if someone says same thing to Yash about her mother what impact will have on Yash. did she think about that. clearly not. Please do not say that physical needs has to be more important than woman's motherhood. I just do not like Geet's character in this FF.

Now I care a dam about her POV no matter how much bitter your past is but if you are self respecting than you will not be sleeping around with men. Geet of GHSP is much more stronger and self respecting than Geet of this FF. Geet of GHSP was from male dominated family and betrayed by man and under graduated but still she did not loose her pride and dignity and fought with world for her pride, right to get justice.


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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: Water.

Part 20:


Maan's POV:

Since that night

One day on a lonely night
The stars shined and the moon smiled
You descended down the earth like an Angel
Your beauty sparkled like the pearls on the ocean bed
Your laughter created ripples on the silent sea
Your unconscious tug at my heart compelled me
To get pulled towards you..

Since that night
All I can think of is you
All I can dream of is you
You are all I can see in front of me
You are all I can feel beside me

My world has turned upside down
My days are spent restlessly thinking about you
And my nights are spent sleeplessly dreaming about you
Everywhere I go, everywhere I turn
All I see is you, you and you.

An invisible thread pulls me towards you
And makes me question this lure towards you
Is it attraction or love?
I am not sure what is it that I feel towards you, but
All I want is to get to know you better
All I want is to hear you talk
All I want is to hear you laugh
All I want is to spend all my moments with you
And All I want is you, you and you!

I want to be close to you
I want to understand you
So please give me a chance, just one more time
I beg for your forgiveness from the ground
I want to make everything better
While I soothe you in my arms
My heart is restless
Not knowing what you feel
Oh! dear Angel from the heaven..
Please give me a chance, just once chance
Because All I want is you, you and you
Since that night...

'This is not one of my best works Rakhi, but I wanted to write something from Maan's POV on ur FF for the longest time...and today I just could not stop myself...Lord! m so emotional rite now...😭

Rachana...I have seen some of your peoms...and this is so good...you have expressed his pov so well...starting frpom how and why he got attracted...his kashish...
Thanks dear...it gives me high boost...when you all get so much involved with story...
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: Water.

Part 20:


Maan's POV:

Since that night

One day on a lonely night
The stars shined and the moon smiled
You descended down the earth like an Angel
Your beauty sparkled like the pearls on the ocean bed
Your laughter created ripples on the silent sea
Your unconscious tug at my heart compelled me
To get pulled towards you..

Since that night
All I can think of is you
All I can dream of is you
You are all I can see in front of me
You are all I can feel beside me

My world has turned upside down
My days are spent restlessly thinking about you
And my nights are spent sleeplessly dreaming about you
Everywhere I go, everywhere I turn
All I see is you, you and you.

An invisible thread pulls me towards you
And makes me question this lure towards you
Is it attraction or love?
I am not sure what is it that I feel towards you, but
All I want is to get to know you better
All I want is to hear you talk
All I want is to hear you laugh
All I want is to spend all my moments with you
And All I want is you, you and you!

I want to be close to you
I want to understand you
So please give me a chance, just one more time
I beg for your forgiveness from the ground
I want to make everything better
While I soothe you in my arms
My heart is restless
Not knowing what you feel
Oh! dear Angel from the heaven..
Please give me a chance, just once chance
Because All I want is you, you and you
Since that night...

'This is not one of my best works Rakhi, but I wanted to write something from Maan's POV on ur FF for the longest time...and today I just could not stop myself...Lord! m so emotional rite now...😭







Yaar u have a real talent...so beautiful...
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Posted: 13 years ago


Hey GB...today's update...mind blowing...

Maan is on the way to get his love...now he has no ill feelings towards her...and wants to know about her...


but if he is in front of me I will ask--- what if u don't know anything about her past...let past be past and if u love her make a path for future...if u love her u should believe that she is not wrong then it doesn't matter whether she was married or she has child out of wedlock...accept her as she is today in front of u...

GB I am not gonna ask u whether there are any more jhatkaas in ur bag or not...if u come to know we are relaxed now then u will plan one...😉😆

thanx for pm




Edited by tushti-kiran - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: tushti-kiran



Hey GB...today's update...mind blowing...

Maan is on the way to get his love...now he has no ill feelings towards her...and wants to know about her...

but if he is in front of me I will ask--- what if u don't know anything about her past...let past be past and if u love her make a path for future...if u love her u should believe that she is not wrong then it doesn't matter whether she was married or she has child out of wedlock...accept her as she is today in front of u...

GB I am not gonna ask u whether there are any more jhatkaas in ur bag or not...if u come to know we are relaxed now then u will plan one...😉😆

thanx for pm



surely some more because the questions which you have he has to answer them before her gets to her...and I will only allow him to come near to her onces he submits unconditionally.

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