MG FF - FAIRY...TAIL???!! THREAD 5 - Page 31

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Posted: 13 years ago
loved the update...
well maan getting to know more shades of his shweetu...
cant wait until he listens to her play but will he be able to recognize her to b his shweetu...
all the bets for ur exams...
will wait for next update
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sweet update. all the best for ur xms
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jaldi update karna. immediately after ur exams over. i am very selfish na. ok. all the best for ur exams. do well in ur exams.
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this was so nice...i loved it...continue soon n thxxx for the pm n best of luck for ur exams...

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loved both the parts...

awesome...

maan again saw a new side of her...

continue soon...

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wonderfull updates dear i loved it !!!! plz continue soon and allthe best for ur test
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Posted: 13 years ago
omg i luv dis ff
finally im done reading alll da parts 😆
its awesomeee
cont sooon

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Posted: 13 years ago

SORRY😳😳!!!

Hey me here again I know its a long time but hopefully U haven't forgot me😳, as there are many reasons but now I won't waste anymore time on it as its a very long TALE...ooops TAIL...😆!!!!!!!!!!!
Her life seems to be doomed at that very moment the least she expected was to be snatched every happiness by destiny.She was shattered with this terrible tidings, herself was scattered all over into broken pieces.She could see no ray of hope she was cocooned into the deep darkness with all the doors shut on her never to open for her.All things that surround her seem dead n lifeless just like the truth that lay infront of her.her left was left to be pity on it her plight was something unbearable the world in which she was living so peacefully all these years was now seem to be snatched away, her smile was snatched away, her right to be happy was snatched away.Even the skies shed tears with her on her dolor!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
She was helpless she didn't knew what to do? who to call for help as there was no helping hand.She herself was in sorrow to see her plight but least she could do anything except questioning in accordance as to what had she done to bear so much something beyond her capacity.Just when she was strike with the thought to seek help from her savior who always help her in wiping her tears in lessening her pain in helping her to fight in to support her and make to be beside her.She tried reaching him but to her unlucky stars which too were not on her side, in her favor to bring down her pain which did nothing but just turned into a NIGHTMARE!!!!!!!!!!!
that someone said her to raise her hand ahead if she ever need a help she did she did exactly what was told but sadly no hand was present to hold hers in order to support her.

A dream which don't let him sleep peacefully, or a nightmare which does takes his breathe away.the reason behind it he just fail in understanding in all these years all he could do was just to forget about it in his real busy schedule.He did thought about it but his mind just had so limited invasions that it just couldn't get into anything.Then once again Mr.Charmer made his spectacular entry making heart throb.He was happy in his much n well settled nothing else he could ask for more,everything was all around him!!!!!!!!!!!
Just then a fellow inform him about tidings to which he least payed any attention he just felt that was just not worth it.As considering himself near to God knowing anything and everything so well he mistakenly quoted such things which he shouldn't have ever, he didn't knew anything further going to be happen completely neglecting his future he said with his trammelled thoughts that was made by his psychological result made by perception and learning from a particular surrounding least knowing anything into the depth!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Here she comes once again to the place she left long before with the memories which were very dear to her those were just preserved in the chest of her heart.Those were painful to and now she just graved them for never to come out and drag her back to that sweet world which don't exist now anymore.She tries faster to move but then was blocked by a moment, she was pulled back without even realizing it was a event from her past unknowingly she got attracted to it and when trying reaching it ,just blew into thin air.The more she try to forget the more they haunt it but she was transformed into a much stronger person now, she didn't failed and fought back with her own tears her own pain her own past!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
It was mizzling only outside but the season of her heart wasn't spring too.Her emotions was something she herself was not able to understand she wasn't happy nor sad but the state in between which was not so easy to understand and even accumulate.This was something she was living in for around so many years but was not able to overcome this harsh reality.Something so painful that just tear her apart into numerous tears.She was now far more stronger than anyone imaginations she barred every past event and just tried to flew away from them as far as she can to just grave them forever!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
She was just going on only with one thought to make herself deprived of all those thoughts forever.She was lost in the pool of those memories in which she was drowning more n more, she was all wet with the droplets that sky was crying over her pain, her grief making her completely soppy and doused.She was wrapped into her own world having a distinct sheet separating her from his surrounding.It was as dark as her life n she was lonely soul wandering in search of peace as lonely in her life as lonely by her heart no one for her to held her console her.She tried hard harder to walk away from her memories but persistently they ghosted her through our until she was forced to verbalize her feelings to leave her forever!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

She was tired of running she has kept them locked in the chest of her heart but seemed that the chest has re opened only to hurt her further,But unfortunately there was no one to hear her.She was all alone once again to recollect her scattered parts.She withdrawn in her memories started narrating her pains to dead things around her.She knew there is no one to understand her, hold her, console her, wipe her, always as hopeless she was moving around as a worthless thing in this world she wanted someone to pour out her heart, she wanted to, the only thing she wanted too...This was something didn't went unnoticed by someone watching her rather in amusement.He shook himself of all thoughts and then tried his best to move her but then it wasn't late when he found himself too lost in her pain, when he heard that cantabile.Her gestures proved that she was seeking for someone, he was baffled with her appearance but still the anitcipation building in him was something he just can't ignore the curiosity was eating him up,She was by now sure to her demands as they were no one to answer her questions no one to give her solace.She found two captivating eyes watching her with delight, she felt strange but then she considered him even hallucination.He lost his senses at the moment he was taken into a different world he found her weird as he have never seen such a naive creature she was something he couldn't get words to even describe but something about her was like only visible to his eyes that hidden trauma, they were engrossed into the feel of being familiar but something even fought back this thought their strong present didn't let them wander in it but least they cared they were confounded she lost track of everything and just one thing came to her was to even ask that illusion even if that will help her but to her amazement he was all ready to console her restless soul which became more flabbergasted when it got broken rather than breaking infront of someone she felt easier to ran away she felt strangling watching her pity through them which was indeed painful.He just saw that lost creature just got captivated into the darkness leaving him all baffled with that strange features but more of with the story narrated by her visage!!!!!!!!!!!!
He just shrugged off all his thoughts but she somewhere was rapt into it no matter how much she deny but now more off memories those mirror were haunting her, but then later she too let it go as if now nothing makes different to her as soon she was made a little bit happy with the sound of her bearer as she showered her love.Soon she was normal with it but her life wasn't normal all it could give was just the pain.Her dream was no more all she had was burden of responsibilities with a lot of betrayal.In the conversation itself she was once again dragged towards the person whom she barely knew but something about him made her feel to have the bond of eternity.The other side wasn't different much as he too was showered with lots of care his thoughts kept wondering to that dark lonely place around her, he could feel him attracted towards it more of in a sad manner he was disturbed by a stranger hidden pain only visible to him!!!!!!!!!!!
They got ready for the next day but before that he quoted such words he should have never he least knew what fate had planned for him he would surely regret them that too sooner.His charm was expressed as id to think himself so All Mighty as the others are as inferiors.Her days starts with the bright rays to enlighten her life she prepares n then was shocked with the immense love of her mother the only person she rely on, she happy but still the pain is now a part of her life.The other side the nightmare has changed its visual but with the same scaring voice which still just drive him crazy to know the hidden truth behind it,the reason behind it,but he never payed a heed to it as once gain he had some important business to be finished off!!!!!!!!!!!!
It was a significant day in his life as to probate them.he just couldn't miss it and neither did he,as he entered with all his charisma attracting all others attentions towards himself with his beguilement, as he passed by soon the hearts throb through their tight cage making to break away, but that was short lived when they felt shuddery with his trammels.They were petrified with it but that was ended soon too.When another made her entry with the same charisma or say it with double dose.She too blew everyone off their feet not just with her visual aspect but also with her attitude!!!!!!!!!!!!
Just then he thought of finally confronting her as this was too much to be taken and he was shocked he was left flabbergasted.She too was amazed with the destiny to meet that stranger once again but now with a different appearance and approach.There was something different in that night which just passed he was boggled with it.He found meeting like two entirely different personalities, the one he met in night was simple something to which he could relate so easily her pain was something so easy to read her personality was something that touched his heart but the present one was a complete opposite he did felt disgusted with that dressing and that concealed eyes which blocked every thought of his to enter it and made him frustrated further as his what failed here was his sapience!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
They both were confound into their thoughts, to be precise their thoughts about each other, nothing was making sense they hardly knew how to break this moment filled with awkwardness.So when finally it got broken it didn't resulted into a much pleasant ones infact it was a more of dangerous one,she too didn't bothered much about it but once again stopped by him this time, for some serious least he knew about her.After just a heated seconds argument they were on their ways.She was surrounded by some dumbs to ask her about Charmer which to him was not less than a fool priced him more than he can be sold off and he too was about that stunner who stunned all by her beauty and attitude too!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
He was lost in her until the chain was broken by someone who pleaded to save her but his deadly mind already being desicive decided to set the scores.At the other end she was knowing well about her surroundings geting a deeper information to know all the things well the more she was knowing the more she felt disgust something she was now hating to the core.Just then she was struck with the same sight she hated most but still she tried to be calm at most she could, she tried dealing it with more composely.This was something she couldn't bear watching a creature same as her being slave to some other this plight just filled her with hatred.She tried explaining when they least they idiots knew what they getting themselves into it wasn't late when she thrust him so harder to knock some sense into it.It did reminded of past events she thanked but still it could only give her pain and fuel the already burning sensations.She was already at the edge of fury and they just pushed her she warned admonish them and forced to be obedient to her with her killer looks and deadly words.They didn't had any much option than to obey her.This was something didn't went unnoticed by someone, someone who was already thinking about her guts but this was something he least expected, although he knew, he believed what she did wasn't wrong but still this is not something a usual one can do he felt more curious to know her more, more of to confront her in his style to read this closed book!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
She already had enough in a day but there was some more adventures left to be enjoyed,as she was leaving she was encircled with those good-for-nothing dumbs (I just loved this name for boys perfect bole tou)Just then he appeared infront of her,as he exclaimed his meeting with hers which she soon fired back not to be pleasing at all.He was trying his best to trick her but then she wasn't less than him in anything she didn't hesitated in insulting him at all, which did made him groan.They were into a cold war hitting each other with random things no win n no loss it was just them tricking each other proving their dominance in their ability ti use brains and attitude too.When in short span of time she insulted once again oo that was just to much to be beared by his so called ego, he simmer down himself, n let it go he didn't found so much to give it a damn but then they were back to that clash between them when they just talk about that place dear to him and she protested against it.In the midst of this they were dragged to their childhood side fighting over as some kids.(I just loved tha U fight between them).Others watched them in fuddle they couldn't consume this anymore when one of them tried stopping it but it wasn't easy he hollered to get their attention which he gained.He brought their senses back in jiffy and make them understand not to tarnish their reputations and advised to set the scores in much better and a bit mature way!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
His brain already started wandering and found its way just then he exclaimed his way which wasn't pleasant for her at all.She was dragged to her bitter past which just end up in tearing her.Something she tries so harder just to rid of them which just brings that harsh reality of someone to never value her some disastrous moments no matter how much she try to forget and move on she is back to square one.She tried her best to avoid by lying and back out.She was in no mood to quarrel anymore her vigor seems to leave her side this was something didn't went unnoticed by all of them,somewhere they felt they went overboard but Mr.Charmer can't do anything wrong attitude filled with pride he made sure nothing wrong and put up a win face but inside he himself was aware the reason was different than what she said but least he payed any importance!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
She tried running the neosis was to curse her fate all she could was just to questions about what happened n why only to her what she did to deserve such painful torments for whole her life.Her restless soul just couldn't find solace she remain awake as her eyes were as hard as her heart has become, with the her bruised life.At the other side he was busy in his regular life when his mind in wandering reached over her, the whole day what all she did just amused him but got disturbed with that burning sensation in her mirror provoked him to deprive her off it,he felt perplexed about him as to what she was the one second she took to transform herself into some other person.He was going all insane thinking about her!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
The day started yet again with his usual sets but this time he missed something just as close to breathe, he thought with all his power but the least he could guess was the most irritating he found in her, soon the reality struck and he startled.He was soon back into the memories of their cute fight his curve was visible with even his acknowledgment, which made others feeling weird.With the conversation he did verbalize his hidden secret behind the curve but soon he rejected too.Although he himself was confused over it but still didn't wanted to express it to anyone!!!!!!!!!!!
At the other end God wasn't that cruel that not to provide her with any of his support.He did blessed her with a Fairy God Mother who could help her in taking over her griefs and could also encourage her to move forward, she felt worried and didn't waited to confront her.

She tried understanding her state of difficulty so that she could resolve it.
{Part 32 written brilliantlySomething Ij ust won't like to comment to tarnish its beauty. I was completely flattered with such advices and more of it that how beautifully U have written n amazed too that at such tender age U understood these technicalities of Life hats off to my sweety deary cuddly kiddo }
She poured her experience on her to alleviate.The way she eased her every nerve with her suffice she was now feeling much better than before, she was now once laden with optimism towards every thing.She felt now a little lighter as her heart was now freed from all those haunted memories which never let her live life happily and peacefully too.She walked away with much delight to start it all over again.Before leaving she couldn't go without pouring some gratitude on her.Soon after that she left to find some solace something she could actually relate just then she came across her passion!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
She saw it was a lonely place just as her without a delay she got into it.As she tried drifting her mind from that painful creature but God wasn't wishing the same as to her fortune he was near her.he too tried early as he could see the sky was beclouded.As to just hurry his ears caught something strange he moved to the way sound occured making him curious he felt different to find someone her that too at this time and with the gender just added spice to it.She was just lost into without realizing any one near her just then she was blocked in her way with a familiar voice she stopped.He too was just into it and without hesitating he just blocked her way with his thoughts.He was completely unaware of the fact who it could be?n then when it got revealed they were stunned but then their face was all covered with glower!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
They started a conversation but as being mirror image the words which came out wasn't different but then they made knew noted about each other of their well being.He asked her and she asked too but with due respect it wasn't she wanted to give but all so seem so natural to come out her mouth.Just then he too focused on something that wasn't pleasant n the fact that she lied about it was piercing him.He wanted to know he asked her in a bit attitude but she wasn't less she didn't found her self accountable to any of his accusations.But this time she couldn't tolerate this attitude of hers, n this atrocious of his was also visible to her which did amazed her but still she shrugged off with another lie which did blew his head but the answer was necessity!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
He was once again insulted least he could do was just to answer as she always had a positive point with her gender.He answered her back with the fact he didn't had such words in his dictionary called debacle.Just then she made him understand her norms n he exclaimed her bumptious and she proclaimed not hubris but amour propre...he was never bothered or met someone like that which made him just more amazed,it eventually made him even have a look to him if he missed something which didn't made her miss her beat.Just then he monish her to beware of not mess with him that might just split her up but she said that wasn't she learned.He challenged her to make her right and she accepted delightfully for the neosis so that they get to know what break her pride or his arrogance!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Everything was set like everyone around the trees, the air, the clouds, the sky, the earth everyone seems ready to see the clash of titans.Even them they were already to hit it off.They started to play it was him who got the chance first an continued he couldn't resist his majestic nature he thought it was just a one man show least he knew her capabilities he thought he just got his victory but soon he felt thrashed and then realized he really discouraged her guts, which is to be actually adore.They both appreciated each other even half-heartedly, but they couldn't ignore the fact none was less,just then even clouds added extra spice to it to make it more thrill.Some things were restricting them from playing further they just took it off!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Their barriers were now taken off which they thought could be a reason of their defeat.But least he knew this would turn into a biggest distraction.He just couldn't had enough to admire the beauty standing infront of him.He was somewhere deprived of his senses, least he could think any other thing around him.Those features were so delighting his senses that he could stand all his life there to adore her.Her pulchritude was just driving him insane beyond the limits.He was just able to resist her comeliness, she being such a mantrap that it became almost impossible to even nictate as a magnetic force just glued his eyes on her.Her charisma, her spiff all just bewitched him and the beguilement of hers left no chance to enamor and trance him.Without caring anything he almost lost himself in her resplendence and exclaimed that she was aphrodisiac!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
At the other side someone was fuming with this kind of behavior being lost into something that too at this moment when they are at the verge of war.He was not very already pleased with him but this was something she just couldn't take it anymore and confronted him n caught him red handed for drooling over her openly...atleast this is what he thought but unknown of her being naive that how oblivious she was to these thing.Just then he was brought from his lala land and forced him to regret over such thoughts,it wasn't when they once again got catch up into their battle!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
They both were trying their best to defeat the other at once it seem soon the result shall be out but none of them was ready to give up,he leaded her which just burned her and then she made it equal by switching off the button of his senses.Her touch just made him loose everything even in that chilling place he felt flames cocooning him.Just then her another claim brought him back to senses when she just claimed to defeat him.Debacle was something he couldn't tolerate and he came to his own avatar,as this time he didn't let her charm affect him all he wanted was to just stop!!!!!!!!!!!!!
He was succeeded in his scheme by just distracting her with the lift.Soon she accused him with the allegation of a deception for profit to himself.Her antics didn't do much just made a curve on his face,he just answered as it was not him who was accountable for the act and that was fair enough,which blowed her up and she started with her pedagogy.He felt so bewildered there he could stand all his life to absorb all that in himself.He was once again lost caring nothing at all but the moment was short lived as they were distracted by someone just when reality struck them,he made up with it but then she was no where to stop something kept bothering her moreover that curve on his face which just instigate her further and the other side he didn't had the moxie to stop her and then cause catastrophe!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Finally when it ended he announced the result which eventually made her happy but as if he could read it he made sure she doesn't get any and excused with to get it along next time along with pronouncing a pleasant name for her which so didn't went unnoticed by her.She kept hollering once again with the accusations n he just flew n got lost as a fog.They both took their path all ready for the furor awaited them.That didn't took much of their senses all he could think infact analyze about was her since the time he met her everything was just strange about her what seen was first was never seen again he was completely lost in her avatar which was different at every particular time.He couldn't help but just to smile.Other way wasn't different nor the same she too kept thinking but more oftenly to his stares which still made her curious!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
She was soon distracted by her angel, and almost shared everything when was once again she was dragged back to her ruthless past wondering if it ever stop haunting her she couldn't do much but juts lying her.She once again just went back to the thoughts and let it go for her mom.She was now trying her best to just shrug it off without anyone acknowledgement.Her mother was a bit satisfies she knew nothing could go wrong between them least did she knew there broken relation wondering even if he considered it a relation.She was hurt to betray her but no other option she had but then she just took a leave and kept wondering about so many things all the possibilities!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Counting on the future prospect n then eventually she recalled her life lived long back incidents which led her this way.The day which was not less than one of the beautiful day of her life turned into such a nightmare she never even thought about it.She was filled with enthusiasm to back to the place, filled with ardor to meet her cobber, filled with elan to be once again at the same place withe same place, least she new her life with furvidness will be changed forever.The news was atrocious taking every bit of happiness from her life but still even that darkness she knew a ray of hope which she always clung onto in her distress.She knew only path to run through but even that betrayed her, her thinking senses were switched off she couldn't just make it out anything, only thing was that he dunned n crucified her even at this state at this stage, at this phase when she need no one except him.The chafe conquered her,vexation filled within, being aplomb at the moment wasn't in her hand.That day she broke everything not that piece of plastic but her relation with him, her bond with him, her links with him, her FRIENDSHIP with him!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
She regained her consciousness realizing that was left behind but still haunting in the sub-conscious state.She ran through across just to get back that confidence more of a realization that she didn't got any support, she composed herself with the bliss of this new life.Conquering all her pains with her firm attitude to be left alone was a big challenge for her.At the other side someone's memory was same as a nightmare to him too something he couldn't relate too but wanted too.For him it was familiar yet strange n weird he labelled never thought so deeply but just always payed no importance at all.He too made his mind to keep a safe distance with it to secure his much more precious sleep.Both determined but yet compelled with each other!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
The time went by further normally for both of them,she was now made head as she impressed all other much decent people.She was notable by everyone who loved her but some other more overly feared of her.Some were terrified, some were pleased filled with mixed sensations.At the other side he was curious to know that strange think keeping him awake from so long he failed in it mostly just didn't payed such a attention it required.He least bothered about her position but her being mattered now the most.She had become his favorite past time no matter what he would just love to see every avatars of hers be it anyway.He couldn't just get enough of her, but still maintaining his husk he kept admiring her secretly with the secret attempts!!!!!!!!!!!!
She was best in everything, n she didn't have to prove it just by moving around she could get the line straight itself.She wasn't rude but with dumbs she rather was but still helpful in every manner.She had her own rules n regulations.The boys could just quetch well she would just make them taste the mud.Everything was going normal once again until she came face to face to him.The scene just did nothing but rage ran through her veins, she controlled and let the poor soul leave, she did ordered everyone to keep a safe distance with these sweet n soft creatures but these rogues least could hear to her.Here she assumed every single think n just jumped to the conclusion.Without any further delay she got hold of that dork n accused him, she was amused at first but soon he calmed himself no mater how much he try his anger just vanish in thin air with just a sight of her.He questioned with his eyes well she answered with her blazing mouth.But he had his own ways to tackle her and he tried one by cocooning her in this warmth but unfortunately she didn't just payed any heed to it which was beyond his expectations.Without wasting any time n sparing him for free she barged once again for his attempt to which he laughed out.To her he wasn't infact he couldn't wonder that was the defect of his gender but still he wouldn't be spared.Moving further close he replied back clearing all her doubts but that wasn't going into her mind as that touch just shut all her senses in a jiffy.He was once again lost in her in her serene n divine beauty for which anyone could fall off so was she drift into some other land more of she wasn't pleased but her body didn't wanted to be deprive of that feeling.Both lost into each other when relaity struck them with a loud racket that drifted their mind towards it but not the postures. Just then it was a maniac who without realization even without any knowledge he completely took it all into a wrong thing.Her terror was so much that they could have accept it easily to just turn them down she would go beyond the limits.Being a naive it wasn't her forte to understand these low standard people but the charmer with the look itself got to knew what running through his mind.He tried dropping the awkward situation but then she was sweetu unaware of such things she couldn't let that person go who made a girl cry even though it wasn't his fault but still where she proved him that she herself was the biggest berk for sure a dolt!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

She left her as other thing meant more important than him and before his any clearance or explanation that lunatic was too dragged with her.Next day some more excitement held for her, as someone acquainted with the wrong doing did narrated the whole scenario, which just filled her garret with rage n fury.It was a disgrace to her gender, esp. to her authority she ran through across all and just got disgusted of the thought, the sinners kept following her with the hope might their extravaganza will be left but it was her the devil for him she assured will go through all by herself and then will let know what is fit n what is unfit!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
It wasn't enough that another sight just dejected her morality, non other than charmer doing the same forbidden sin she accused others atleast this is what she thought, as she was incognizant she just mistook it all wrong n just as a irrational she pounced over him n he completely unaware with it tried dissenting but her fury was at the different level more of at a danger level, before she could gain any knowledge of it they both landed into a another closeness moment, unknowingly n unwanted moment but still it was a delight for one n scary for the other.He saved her as much as he could from getting her hurt, held her closely to keep her secure it could be intentionally but all came so naturally, involuntarily.He opened his peepers and found a aesthetic sight, though gratifying but still a weird sound took his attention from a beautiful sight and just then realization hit him not only him but others too enjoying the heavenly sight present infront for their optics.He was sure by now that she will sabotage his image and will turn it into a notoriety.Just then she came to her senses back, to see her savior in a comatose state.An overwhelming feeling of anxiety overtook all her sense making her fright over the situation they slipped in the worry for him was all written all over her face.She recalled the whole event and then just tried to get his attention which she didn't got and terror took over her.She tried her best until she made her mind to whomp him,which was held itself in the air which did amused her but then she learned he was all fine which did made her feel better.She kept gaping at him still a lil relaxed but a part of her was still tensed!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
She was distracted when he verbalize his thoughts so that she could get over him and once again got her into a demon avatar, when she accused him for calling her a pyknik which he refused he didn't, and he proved to him that it was very thin line between what he said and what he meant.To which he protested as much as he could but then gave up and accepted to what she was saying for correct which just instigate her further, just then she made him retrieve that how he lifted her as a dummy.Their sweet moment was broken when they heard throng intonate, realizing the whole act was not only seen but thoroughly enjoyed.She prevised n asked them all to disperse before she looses all her control everyone did obeyed for the sake of their life.So did she he stood rooted with a grin as if awaiting the gratitude.To his fortune what he got from his pal was a admonish to beware of his future to which he least payed any heed!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Something that got his attention was just how his surroundings have changed or say it correctly how he has changed,everything around him was now seen with a different prospect or just say nothing was left to observe other than her.It was now only her who was left to be think about talk about wander about observe her stalk her irritate her everything was just with her.He never got bored nor he left doing all this infact a unknown pleasure he found in it,which was never known to him.A feeling filled him which was so familiar yet strange.Even in that act which hurts him but still what he curious about was her concern.Every aspect of hers just amazed him as if only visible to him he could see something in depth within her which was so very oblivious to others, he would be updated about her well- being shall keep a watch on her and would knew about her than any else who would be closer than him!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Everything was fine his day would remain incomplete if he don't get to see her glimpse which he surely missed today but fate was surely with him.He came to know about her being her late without any hesitance he walked towards her to find her being engrossed in her hectic work.Bu just looking at her face he knew she was not well she tried confronting her but she being adamant just asked to leave her all alone.He tried reasoning but she just shook to be left alone as always she was trained in to manage herself when she is left lonesome.She was now use to the fact no one is there but only her to manage all by herself,which undoubtedly made her rude.It was a hard day for her infact very hard it was the day when her beloved father was taken away.She felt helpless at that time but not now she would do anything to get them on their knees she will be as cruel as they were with her.In her verge of protesting n asking loneliness he found she was decrepit.He held her secured but her protest didn't gave up, he immediately took her to a safer place. Still worried he found aid for her nevertheless it did help.He was much more relaxed now when he saw her sleeping all peacefully until she scared the hell out of him.
{Part 28 written beautifully by my darling queen so won't impose my words on it well writing on other doesn't mean that she didn't wrote it beautifully too this only means to compliment her work n the effect on me}
She was disturbed and wanted the affection which surely she gained.She was in a much better state now,without any delay he obeyed what the nurse told her.As by passing some time with her he would surely now how dumb she herself is, forcefully he took her with him.As she was not known to his anger she being a lil wise she felt more convenient in to be shut.She was overwhelmed with the amount of care he was showering on her.More of she was amazed, with it but then she made him upset with the words she used completely unaware of what she spoke,she tried compensate but he was her teacher in all this for sure he didn't although he couldn't falling for her but this was something he didn't wanted to go off so easily and then once again she without thinking she affronted him.Which for sure took his temper to a danger level,he tried to be compose with her but no one can afford having her being around.But being her cute couldn't be ignored either nor could he deny it it was so much that he couldn't even resist and placed his smooth lips on her delicate skin, frozing her at the moment.This was something not in his hand an involuntary action, but this was familiar to her but least she knew and her concentration was broken.He as always leaded her to the path and she followed but still a part of her was not accepting and the other kept relating.This avatar of hers wasn't pleasant to his charmer,knowing her so well he could expect any kind of a allegation that too at any moment.He tries distracting her, n then himself burst out on a howler making her curious she too anticipated after gaping him.After insisting n threatening he finally opened his mouth but that jape of his was soon turn into a.He tried convincing her but she being inexorable, didn't infact asked him to leave her all alone he trying proving himself to be father she warned but he didn't payed any vigilance n then she demonstrated that what she say she is even capable to do that too,which just left in aghast.He was appalled with the way she approached the path of her peevishness.He questioned her but that was the way to irritate her further just then he composed himself as he felt he will loose her and seeing her in pain once again could not be tolerated by him.With his sheer concern he asked her to be advert to never do this ever not anything close to like this he almost begged which did melted her the hard snow was getting melted in her eyes fearing of being falling but this was something long lost concern for her she had never seen or felt in all those long dark years but still asked him to drop her after forgiving him for his act!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Now knowing her more deeply he tried not to attempt such thing as he knew the consequences will be faced by only him.But still he just can't let her be all alone that could be more disastrous he made sure in every way if she was secured.He was delighted of having such a nice time with her quite excited to know more about her but then that incident still took his breathe away all he could think about was only her.At the other side she was was calmed feeling much better n lighter too slept peacefully rejoicing her life for once again n getting in new people to be distraction from that dreadful past of her just coz of him!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Next morning too started with both as she was left flabbergasted with his move but still she didn't advert it into a wrong direction.In the process of talking he came across to know the love of her life which was not at all pleasing to him but then when he learned the actual truth he couldn't stop himself from riant.This was strange for someone else to notice such a change in charmer.Although he was not very strict but then laughing was also not his forte.It did amazed her and annoyed the pink dinky.She asked him to stop right there but his senses didn't allowed either but then her threats were enough not only to control him but also force him to apologize.which was another shock to the lady.As he couldn't take anymore she left, he too promised not to insult her love, but still he was curious to know more about her senses and her answered just switched on all the laughter sensation which he tried best to control completely aware of her madness he couldn't take a risk.But when it got impossible he thought of leaving it here but then he lived that moment and missed her not to be around him!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
As it was a off they all gathered and he had a much pleasant time with his amigos.They all sat for a little gathering one of his pal wanted to confess something which he did to narrate his love story which will be left incompleted just coz of that devil.In this process someone was completely lost not hearing even a word.The moment he sat there his thoughts got engrossed into a divine beauty.He least knew who it was but her acts just didn't let his mind to drift some other way.Nothing was special about her yet he felt she was different amongst the whole crowd.A weird anxiety filled him to know about her just then he was distracted from a heavenly sight then just excused himself n thought of loosing her forever he made his way towards her he was much delighted to still find her.He could stand still whole his life and enjoy that beauty of that moment as the feeling of knowing her unwantingly moved his steps towards her which just knock his socks off, he was dazed!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
My darling queen wrote it so beautifully taking so much of pain to her fingers as I know she don't like writing at all n for writing this for us only US so this is for her n only her 😳to her true spirit😆Love U my DQ😉!!!!!!!!!!
Thanks for all those pms and bearing the pain again
Loved every bit of it
God bless U
Keep writing
Love U
TC





Edited by muskaan_cute19 - 13 years ago
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lovely analysis dear
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Amazing analysis dear.👏

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