The Disguised form of Love (ArSh OS)

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Pritha Das

@DarkerThanNight

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Posted: 14 years ago

#31

Beautiful OS..
Loved it..
Do write more OSs..
Thanx for the pm.. 😊

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RomanceChocolat

@RomanceChocolat

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Posted: 13 years ago

#32

OMG Its FREAKING PERFECT 👍🏼... gosh Laila I am so gonna beat u up for this... u didnt tell me about this OS😕😉...

will be back gtg now

luv
sahasra

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RomanceChocolat

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Posted: 13 years ago

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Originally posted by: RomanceChocolat
OMG Its FREAKING PERFECT 👍🏼... gosh Laila I am so gonna beat u up for this😉... u didnt tell me about this OS😕😉...

will be back gtg now

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am back😃

Oh god Its so beautiful like a fairy tale Laila...well U already know I love ur writing style but this is just fabulous👏👏👏... I can so feel the emotions and KASH right infornt of me playing those scenes.
The scene where they meet after one year its so brilliantly written.. The taunting and teasing of armaan and shilpa burning with anger and then their kiss and the moment is so intense.. loved it😳😉 just WOW WOW and WOW...
am very gald i found this brilliant piece😉

PS..and I WANT MORE OS FROM YOU😉

PS2 BY THE WAY AM STILL UPSET😉

luv
sahasra

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Laila.N

@Laila.N

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Posted: 13 years ago

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Originally posted by: RomanceChocolat

Awww so cute ! Thank you so mcuh Sahasra ! I'm really glad you liked it, I loved writing it :)

I'm so sorry I didn't tell you, I almost forgot I wrote this lol 😆

But I'm glad you found it and gave me your views 😉

Love youu,

Laila😳

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LaLi

@the_writer_21

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Posted: 13 years ago

#35

This was such a nice and beautiful OS! I really loved it! If you ever write anything else, please pm! I'm def adding you to my buddy list, if that's okay :)

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Tahmina Aliya Begum

@-Aliya-

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Posted: 13 years ago

#36

I realised I read this months ago and only now i found it again to comment. Realy sweet OS Laila! the last scene was the most adorable of all. i could picture it so easily that it just pushed the rate of cuteness of the image of them higher in my imagination hehe