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Divya Nair (aka Piya)

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Posted: 13 years ago

#241

Originally posted by: tellyme
Hi Piya,

Nice update...

yeh meera or yash ke story me hamare Maaneet cupid bane hain and then they themself start romancing...

yeh dono bhi na...

Is Meera and yash story going to be parallel to Maaneet... nahi aisa mat kerna... we want more maneet...

song sequence was nice...

luv

--Anu

Promise Anu Yash Meera ki wajah se maneet romance par farak nahi padega they r the leads and i will focus on them main Cvs ki tarah nahi karungi

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Divya Nair (aka Piya)

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Posted: 13 years ago

#242

Originally posted by: maanhar
Liked the way Maan spoke to Meera and love the plan they have for Yash and Meera. The dance was simply 😳

thanks dear i hope their plan works

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Divya Nair (aka Piya)

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Posted: 13 years ago

#243

Originally posted by: preethia
loved the update...
wow got the soln for yash-meera prob...

luv the way u tell the scene thro pics...i eagerly wait for the updates to c how u r using those pics to describe the scenes...

waiting for the next

thanks preeti loved ur comment

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Divya Nair (aka Piya)

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Posted: 13 years ago

#244

Originally posted by: -Nilam-
Excellent update...⭐️
loved their cute romantic moments...😉
eagerly waiting for the next update...
please update soon...

Thanks dear

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Divya Nair (aka Piya)

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Posted: 13 years ago

#245

Originally posted by: ritzy09
Wow Piya...DMG ko bhool gayi ho na tum...khair bit no complaints...ek to tumhara accident aur upar se aaj to bahut special day hai...itne saare awards mile hain...hum tumhaara mood mazak mein bhi kharab nahi kar sakte

Bahut acha update tha...Meera ki problem Geet solve kar hi degi...but uske baad baarish...rimjhim rimjhim...it was great...those pics made it look that I am actually seeing them in front of me...CVs to saari cheezen bhool gaye hain...they don't remember water always was important to Maaneet...FFs mein hi dil ki tamanna puri karni padhti hai...it was great...mujhe bahut zayda mazaa aaya...

waise abhi o sazaa bhi baaki hai...hai na

YesDi u r right Cvs bhool gaye hai maneet aur pani ka connection even i m desperately waiting for a rain sequence but i m sure aisa kuch hone nahi wala so main khud apni aur baaki sab ki tamanna puri kar rahi hoon

Di i promise next update would b of Dmg

love u

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Divya Nair (aka Piya)

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Posted: 13 years ago

#246

Originally posted by: swetha10
Awesome update...
awww maneet playing cupid for yash n meera...

luved maneet in rain n the song is amazing...

luved it..

continue soon

Thanks Shwetha i m glad that u enjoyed the rain sequence thank you

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Divya Nair (aka Piya)

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Posted: 13 years ago

#247

Originally posted by: luv_GurTi
Terrific update piya!!
Totally awesome
Loved d song n d pics wiv d little descriptions
I forgive for updating dmg late as this update was amazing!! Lolz
Thanks for the pm..

hey my darling friend sorry for not keeping in touch but right now i m a bit busy

thank you for forgiving me

i will update DMG tomorrow

love u loads and loads

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Divya Nair (aka Piya)

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Posted: 13 years ago

#248

Originally posted by: srirad
😳Lovely romantic update..👏
Maaneet Pictures and song selection perfect and superb👍🏼

Precap sound interesting..⭐️

Maaneet introducing meera to yash..What will be his reaction...❓

Continue soon..

Eagerly waiting for next😊

Thanks dear well regarding yash's reaction u will come to know in the next update

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Divya Nair (aka Piya)

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Posted: 13 years ago

#249

Thank you dear friends for ur love and support

I dedicate this update to my small sister Khushi. Finally she is a Goldie today

Here is the next part enjoy reading

love- Piya

PART 39

Geet's house

Geet: Aaj baarish mein bheegkar kitna maza aaya na?

Maan: Achha?

Geet: Kyun aapne enjoy nahi kiya?

Maan: Hmm... enjoy tho kiya par maza tho ab aayega

Geet: Ab? Kyun ab aisa kya honewala hai?

Maan: Tum itne jaldi bhool gayi Geet abhi yaad dilatha hoon tumhari saza tho abhi baaki hai

Geet: Maan aap bhina

Maan: Main bhi kya Geet achha kahi tum ye toh nahi keh rahi k tumhe meri baate samaj mein nahi aa rahi koi problem nahi main tumhe live demonstration detha hoon tumhari saza ka

Maan starts moving towards Geet

Geet was more than happy

But before they could do anything

Savitri: (from kitchen) Ye kaunsi saza ki baat ho rahi hai Maan?

Maan and Geet were totally surprised and embarrased to hear Savitri's voice

Savitri comes out

Savitri: Haan Maan zara main bhi toh jaanu

Maan: Aunty aap? Aap kab aayi?

Savirti: Bus kuch der pehle

Geet hugs her

Geet: Mom I was missing u

Savitri: Aisa lagta tho nahi

Geet: Aap aisa kyun keh rahe ho?

Savitri: Maan ne meri lado raani ka itna khayal rakha hai k usse mujhe miss karne ki koi zarurat hi nahi

Geet cheeks turned red

Maan: Aunty wo...

Savitri: Maan tum dono ki dil ki baat main uss din se jaanti thi jab tum dono ko ye ehsaas bhi nahi tha k tum dono ek duje ko chahthe ho

Both were smiling

Savitri: Chalo ab milkar khana khathe hai

Maan: Aunty main baadmein aata hoon

Savitri: Kyun ab se mere haath ka bana hua khana nahi khaoge kya?

Maan: Aap aisa kyun keh rahe ho?

Savitri: Ghar aane k baad jab maine kitchen mein jaakar dekha tab toh sia hi laga k tum dono ne khana banathe banathe zarur kuch shararat ki hai haina?

Geet: Ab bus bhi kijina?

Savitri: Achha baba pehle tum apne unko kaho k humhare saath khana khaye warna main tum dono ko yuhi pareshan karti rahungi

Geet: Ji suniye...😳😳😳😳😳

Maan and Savitri were shocked to hear this from Geet

Maan: Geet ek baar phir kehna

Savitri could not stop laughing

Geet: Ji maine kaha suniye toh 😳😳😳

Maan: Main toh tumhari baate sunene k liye humesha taiyaar rehtha hoon Geet

Geet: Sacchi

Maan: Muchhi

Both were once again lost in each other

Savitri: Huh huh...

Maan and Geet come back to reality

Maan & Geet: Wo actually

Savitri: Bus bus bus aap logo humhe kuch safai dene ki zarurat nahi hai hum bus yahi dua karenge k aap dono ki jodi salamat rahe

Savitri: Chaliye Khana khathe hai

All three of them go inside and have their Dinner

After some time

Maan :Aunty ab mujhe chalna chaiye

Savitri: Thik hai bete

he takes her blessings

Savitri: Jete rahiye

Maan: Bye Geet

Savitri :Waise Maan aap kisi saza k baare mein baat kar rahe the aapne bataya nahi k wo kya saza hai?

Geet: Haan Maan mumma ko bhi bataiye na uss saza k baare mein

Maan: Geet...

Maan: Aunty wo tho main uhi keh raha tha

Geet: Achha uhi?

Maan: Aunty main ab chaltha hoon

Saying so he leaves

He goes and sits in his car and types a message

Geet recieves the message

MESSAGE: "Geet Saza tho tumhe milegi aur aaj ki shararat k liye uss saza k saath saath main interest bhi wasool karunga... saza k liye taiyaar rehna jaan woh bhi sood k saath"

Geet was blushing continously

Savitri: Kya hua Geet tum sharma kyun rahi ho Maan tho chala gaya?

In reply she just hugged her mom

Savitri was very happy

Khurana Mansion

Maan: Main Geet ko humesha khush rakhunga chahe kuch bhi ho jaaye main bahut hi jald usse ek surprise dunga aur main jaanta hoon mere surprise ko dekhkar wo kafi khush ho jaayegi

PRECAP 1:

Maan & Geet romance

PRECAP 2:

Maneet introduce Meera to Yash

OK I KNOW IT WAS A SMALL UPDATE I M REALLY SORRY NEXT TIME I WILL GIVE A BIG UPDATE WHICH WILL B FULL OF MANEET ROMANCE AND OFFCOURSE YASH N MEERA STORY WILL ALSO MOVE AHEAD

@ Anu I promise dear Yash Meera ki wajah se Maneet ki love story mein kuch farak nahi aayega. Maneet leads hai aur main CVS ki tarah bevakoofi nahi karungi. U will get lota n lots of maneet moments

PLS PRESS THE LIKE BUTTON N DO COMMENT

Love- Piya

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Edited by piya- - 13 years ago

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Bloomysunday

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Posted: 13 years ago

#250

THat was so cute ...awesome work...

Since the first time I met you,
I couldn't seem to forget you.
And lately I seem to find,
That you're always on my mind.
I feel so happy around you,
And I thank God that I found you.
At first I thought of you as a really good friend,
But I realized that my feelings there didn't end.

I was so afraid to tell you,
Cos I didnt know what youd do.
Then I heard that you felt the same way,
And those words were so easy to say.

Oh, when I see you smile,
It makes my life worth while.
And since the very start,
You have been in my heart.
When my lifes skies are dark and gray,
You chase all those storm clouds away.

I've never felt this way before,
And honestly that is for sure.
I'm so glad that we did meet,
For now my life is complete.
You're what they meant,
By heaven sent...tc😊

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