If It Had Been Like This...(MG ff) Thread 1

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kkiddoo

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Posted: 13 years ago

#731

Originally posted by: mayapari

ll eat ur head if yu don update soon😛
bach ke rehna😆

ohh babaji me scared and hiding from u 😆

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Reshu

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Posted: 13 years ago

#732

Originally posted by: payalpari
ohh babaji me scared and hiding from u 😆

update dene ke baad go n hide...

fir next update ke waqt samne aajaana😆

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kkiddoo

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Posted: 13 years ago

#733

Originally posted by: mayapari
are aur kitni der?????????

5 mins dear 😊

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Reshu

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Posted: 13 years ago

#734

Originally posted by: payalpari
5 mins dear 😊

5 mins more

waiting

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kkiddoo

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Posted: 13 years ago

#735

part 11

Dadima: I want to know when u guys want to get married?

maan is shocked to hear what dadima said 'marriage' they haven't thought about it yet as the word marriage echoes in his ears he turns to look at geet and saw her face which has various emotions showing on it at first its happy then all of a sudden it changes pale he wonders what is going on in her mind ...

maan : what happen to geet first she was happy then why she turned pale...?

Here geet is happy at first then guilt took over her happiness as she is feeling that she is cheating dadima by hiding the biggest truth of her life from her and maan's family so she runs from their without saying a word with a layer of tears in her eyes feeling guilty for cheating dadima and hiding the truth of her pregnancy and her dreadful past not able to bear the guilt she just goes from their not able to face dadima leaving maan and dadima behind her looking at her retreating figure running to wards outhouse...

dadima : lagta hai sarmagayi (she said smiling)

but maan who saw her face and her eyes while running from their and had notice the layers of tears in her eyes got that some thing is wrong and gets worried for her as to what happened to her and he thought to go after her ...as he was about to go ...

dadima : arey app kahan jaa rahai hai maan tell me what u guys think abo...

but maan's cuts her not letting her complete her talk and says ...

maan : dadima we will talk about it later ...ok ?

maan says looking at her ...when dadima says...

dadima : but ...

but maan seeing that she will argue again about the marriage didn't let her complete her sentence and cuts her again saying ...

maan : dadima i have some work i will c u later ..hmmm ...

when she again tries to say something ...

dadima : maan h...

but was cut again by maan ..

maan : plz dadima

dadima sighs and nodes her head at maan ...

As maan goes from their and moves towards the out house ...

dadima sees maan's retreating figure and thinks in her mind ...

dadima : try as much as u want maan u can't escape from marriage now ... now i will see to it that i get u both tied together soon !

thinks dadima smirking thinking it to be maan's other trick to escape from marriage talks ...

and goes from their ...

Here in the outhouse geet is standing near the window and thinking about what dadima said and is having tears in her eyes feeling guilty for cheating dadima and fearing her reaction when she comes to know about her dreadful past and present pregnancy which will effect their future too thinking what if dadima thinks wrong of her and break this engagement she just shudders with the thought itself...

when she feels a hand on her shoulder turning around she sees maan standing their looking at her with worry and concern written all over his face for her and she just hugs him tight as tears rolled out of her hazel eyes ...

maan is shocked and confused as to why is she crying and hugs her back wanting to protect her from every evil... and thinks confused as to why is she crying when a sudden thought stuck him and he thinks ...

maan ( thinking ) : is she thinking about her past as dadima said about marriage thinking this (he remembers the day they had attended the wedding in hoshiarpur and the way geet has cried on his shoulder remembering her family and her past )or is she crying remembering the betrayal she got in her first marriage.

precap : maaneet moments ☺️

next part : PART 12

Thanks so much guys for waiting and supporting me luv u all so much 🤗 guys ...sorry for the mistake guys ...plz do comment and press like guys...it really means a lot to me ..will be eagerly waiting for u r comments 😍silent readers plz like and comment it motivates me a lot to write more will be waiting for u r response guys 😍thanks a lot to my dear friend arpita who helped me a lot in this update luv u a lot dear 🤗

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Edited by kkiddoo - 13 years ago

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Reshu

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Posted: 13 years ago

#736

loved it...

uffo geet nothing ll happen until maan is with her...

dadi s such a sweet hrt!!!!!!

she ll not think bad bout geet...

she knows bot her...

geet is sooo pure...

n now she s guilty...

uffo maan sambhalo apni mishty ko...

miss.hoshyarpur sabb kuch dill par leleti hain...

itna choto sa update...

payal me gonna kill yu...

pehle itna hot teaser de kar hume tarsaya...

abb precap de kar...

hume tease karke chain nahi mila kya??????

very bad...

ekkk baar haath lag ja then yu are so🤢

jaldi se next update dedo warna

yu know!!!!!!!!!!!!!!😆😆

loved the update drlng...

luv ya😳

Edited by mayapari - 13 years ago

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kkiddoo

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Posted: 13 years ago

#737

Originally posted by: mayapari

5 mins more
waiting

posted dear 😉

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Reshu

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Posted: 13 years ago

#738

Originally posted by: payalpari
posted dear 😉

commented!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

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kkiddoo

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Posted: 13 years ago

#739

Originally posted by: mayapari
loved it...
uffo geet nothing ll happen until maan is with her...
dadi s such a sweet hrt!!!!!!
she ll not think bad bout geet...
she knows bot her...
geet is sooo pure...
n now she s guilty...
uffo maan sambhalo apni mishty ko...
miss.hoshyarpur sabb kuch dill par leleti hain...
itna choto sa update...
payal me gonna kill yu...
pehle itna hot teaser de kar hume tarsaya...
abb precap de kar...
hume tease karke chain nahi mila kya??????
very bad...
ekkk baar haath lag ja then yu are so🤢
jaldi se next update dedo warna
yu know!!!!!!!!!!!!!!😆😆
loved the update drlng...
luv ya😳

thanks a lot for u r lovely comment dear loved it next update will be soon dear till then me hiding wanna save myself from u 😊😆