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-pixie-

@-pixie-

Rocker

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Posted: 14 years ago

#391

^^I dont know anyone who doesnt have shades of gray...So to me Maan and Geet actually seem closer to normal people than the "show" Maan and Geet!

on a philosophical note, I think, as human beings, our capacity to hurt is directly proportional to our capacity to love...and those that we love the most are the ones who bear the brunt of our ability to inflict hurt as well!

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-memorable-

@-memorable-

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Posted: 14 years ago

#392

what is vikram gonna do now????????? 🤔

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Sur_10

@Sur_10

Voyager

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Posted: 14 years ago

#393

Hello

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"Crazy bitch," he growled and made the phone call; the one that would dampen Maan's grand plans.

"What happens when you achieve what you wanted?" Geet asked. Maan looked at her helplessly not wanting to answer and hurt her. Geet chuckled mirthlessly.

"Congratulations Maan, today you proved that you truly are a Khurana." She said and turned to walk away.

"Geet..." Maan started.

"You truly are your father's son," Geet said without turning around and walked away towards crowed.

This was rather unexpected. Geet is one smart woman to react that way. And KIKI??? Vaidehi is such a classy name and she calls herself KIKI? I would have truly believed Maan's judgement of Kiki's intelligence had she preferred to use her own name.

I liked that Maan took responsibility for his actions and didn't go into"kismat ne mujhe ye karne pe majboor kiya" bullshit.

Coming to our business plot, its awesome!! Maan is smart, no doubt. But I would love to see him prove it to Vikram. After all, I need a very smart antagonist so that I can truly appreciate the antagonist.(another weird thought)

Nice UD. Keep up the good work!!!

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fri42911

@fri42911

Dazzler

Posted: 14 years ago

#394

awesome update!!

but no MG moments!!!

please continue soon.

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febinyusuff

@febinyusuff

Inactive

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Posted: 14 years ago

#395

Sookie.. it really hurts dear.. May be Geet can mask the pain really well.. but my eyes welled reading Maan telling Geet about their relationship.. I don't think now Geet won't even take initiatiuve from her end... I still don't know why Maan is holding back in confessing.. ..

Please continue sooon...

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-pixie-

@-pixie-

Rocker

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Posted: 14 years ago

#396

and please dont tell me Simi Aunty was the inspiration for Kiki? her Kiki impersonations are already giving me nightmares!

Edited by -pixie- - 14 years ago

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Posted: 14 years ago

#397

fantastic update Sookie ⭐️

although i'm finding it hard to understand how Maan expects to go home to Geet one day when his off shagging others for whatever motives 😆 but i can't deny that i'm liking this grey shade in him, it makes the interaction between Maaneet more interesting...

and I'm eager to see what Vikram is planning to throw Maan off...

and i'm really liking Mitalie ⭐️ she's brilliant 😈😆

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Posted: 14 years ago

#398

Originally posted by: -pixie-
and please done tell me Simi Aunty was the inspiration for Kiki? her Kiki impersonations are giving me nightmares!

It took me ages to figure out who is Simi aunty. And then the advert came and I was like 'Oh' 😆

I can be very slow at times.

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imshveta

@imshveta

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Posted: 14 years ago

#399

You know towards the end I could feel a similar ache in my heart ofcourse many degrees less than what Geet must be feeling.
I felt like kicking him where it hurts the most. and I think Geet rightly pointed out that he was a true Khurana.

I don't know why the story is moving towards wherever it is you are making it but I don't think it is going to be too pleasant.
Let's see what the future holds for them.

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Shveta