Translucence - Finished.

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TeamMcSwarek

@TeamMcSwarek

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Posted: 13 years ago

#321

Niceee!
cont soon
thanks for the pm

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fri42911

@fri42911

Dazzler

Posted: 13 years ago

#322

superb part!!

loved this maan.

waiting for next part.

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Krishna

@Krishnaluv94

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Posted: 13 years ago

#323

Great update. Geet CSM definitely keep up with the Khurana's. This Geet is different from all the others, and I love her. Can't wait to their "date"

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-pixie-

@-pixie-

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 13 years ago

#324

Chapter 7: Love! Finally we got some affirmation on the fact that there might, just might be some Maaneet in the story. I love the complex relationship they share and their sparring. Its so much fun to read! Satya got it right in one- she really does know how to push his buttons...but then so does he!

Hiding in the hospital- ingenious!

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-Saibo-

@-Saibo-

Inactive

Posted: 13 years ago

#325

So like geet is loaded too... Wow. I love this storys characterization. Lmao geet with maithalee wayyy awesome! I mean it was real n u didn't have any say cheesy over the top lines, it was just a simple strIght to the point f**k you :P. Brilliant!

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Tabinda Areeb

@t_areeb

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#326

he is running business while relaxing in a hospital , really good

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kirti98

@kirti98

Navigator

Posted: 13 years ago

#327

Liked urn way of writing. Get well soon

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todayzstar

@todayzstar

Sparkler

+ 3

Posted: 13 years ago

#328

lovely update...❤️

luvd it..

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Deepa

@spvd

Trailblazer

+ 4

Posted: 13 years ago

#329

part 9
awesome...
wow Maan's reaction and the way he talked back to his slime siblings as cool as a cucumber was mind blowing...
wow Geet was too good...
the trio make a wonderful team and Maan and Geet an awesome couple...
am so loving this...
cont soon dear...