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chapter-35


was a bright beautiful day, brightening the whole world. In one part where someone was boarding a flight to return to his land, in another part of the world we can see someone holding a business magazine, most probably reading an article about an emerging businessman, who at a very young age has brought laurels to his name. Yes, we are talking about the one and only Maan singh khurana...!!


In one of the top most business magazine, his accomplishments had been published which was right now admired by the person. Her big honey brown eyes were fixed at his dashing picture which was printed alongwith the article, sparkling with a mischievious glint seeing his masculine looks which was very different from what she has seen in their last meeting. He was a grown up man now, with a slight almost invisible stubble and an enticing persona. His deep hazels were still captivating though, enough to drown her like before...!!


Her plump lips curled into a smile making a cute dimple on her creamy glowing cheeks as she remembered their childhood. The most beautiful memories of her life. And now, he was returning. After a full six years. Though they talked during this interval, but that could hardly satisfy the need to be with each other. She still remembered their last conversation over phone. How like always she was complaining of his long absence while he was doing his part of manaofying her.


She chuckled at the very thought of the wittiest business man getting on his knees to melt a woman's heart. Well, it was not exactly that as his one sweet word was enough to melt her soul, let alone heart...!!


She has waited so long for him...she thought combing her silky long hair with her fingers...and now, these few hours seems like ages...!!


Come soon, maan...she kissed his picture...I am missing you loads...!!


GEET...came a loud call for the girl, who turned around spreading her voluminous, long, silky dark cloud like hair backwards...come down, see meera is here...rano shouted from the living room.


Now, we can see the gorgeous face of the girl. Yes, she is none other than our beloved geet. But...but...what do we see...??...she is wearing a very pretty yellow churidar with a beautiful chiffon duppatta. Yes, she is wearing an Indian outfit, which she switched to after her 12th for she knew her maan likes her in Indian clothes. She has very minimal make up on...just a light pink lip gloss and koel in her eyes adding to its beauty. She still has the diamond pendant gifted by maan around her neck. She is actually looking out of the world...as imagined by maan.


Coming mama...geet replied placing the magazine properly beneath her pillow after blowing a flying kiss to it. She then took to her heels and ran downstairs...!!


Geet, how many times do I have to tell you that you should not...


Run down the stairs...geet finished her mother's statement on hearing her say it millionth time...I am sorry mama, I forgot...she replied mischieviously and rushed past her to meera, who was standing behind rano with an amused expression on her face seeing geet's usual naughtiness...!!


Rano shook her head at her daughter's childishness even when she is 21+ now...when will this girl grow up...??...she murmered while geet giggled and hugged meera excitedly and wished her...


HAPPY DIWALI MEERA...!!


Meera reciprocated her hug and wished back with a smile...happy diwali to you too, geet...!!


Kitni der laga di aane mein...geet whinned and added...pata hai, main kabse wait kar rahi hoon...!!


Meera held her ears in a gesture of apology and said...I m really sorry, yaar, but you know na, my intership has just started and so, I got late in learning the work there...meera paused after her explanation and then added in whisper...vaise, were you really waiting for me r someone else, huh...??...she teased making geet's cheeks go red.


Meera...geet chided her warningly, but then couldn't stop the cute smile of her face. Meera laughed seeing the state of her friend and hugged her again.


Now, will you stop laughing...geet said parting and making a baby face...lets go, vicky has called me thrice and if we don't reach there within next 10 minutes, he'll surely eat my head...saying so geet grabbed meera's hand and ran towards the door shouting back...mama, we are going to meet vicky, byee...!!


Arey geet, ruk toh...rano beckoned her, but she had already rushed out.


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VICKY...!!...VICKY...geet banged vicky's room's door with full force ready to break it the very next second, if he delayed anymore in opening it.


Geet, kya kar rahi hai...??...meera tried to stop her...are you planning to break the door...??


But, geet being geet continued with her banging sessions till the time vicky opened the door...


What the hell, geet...??...vicky shouted fixing his t-shirt, but soon gulped the rest of his words seeing geet's glare...ah, I mean...you...you could have knocked a bit l...i...g...h...t...l...y...!!


Geet with a deadly glare pushed vicky aside and barged inside his room, ignoring his words completely...


Where the hell were you, huh...??...she said making herself comfortable in his room, pulling meera beside her


I was in the washr...he tried to reply, but was interrupted by geet, who was obviously not interested in hearing his explanation...I was knocking from so long...she complained instead.


Yeah right...vicky muttered under his breath thinking...if thats what you call knocking, I wonder what you refer hammering...!!


Geet knitted her brow at his murmuring and asked...now, are you waiting for an invitation...??


Uh, no...vicky rushed to her side...so whats the plan...??


I want to make this diwali rocking as after so long everyone is here on this festival and moreover...geet suddenly stopped swallowing the upcoming words not wanting to embarras herself in front of his friends, but the long ears of vicky and meera didn't miss the sudden pause.


Grinning at each other knowingly, vicky and meera sitting on either side of geet, raised their brows questioningly. Geet tried to act innocent and shrugged her shoulders.


Hmm...so my dear doll is waiting for my bhai, huh...??...vicky teased her nudging with his elbow.


He saw the reddish hue on her face and chuckled...my god, you still feel for him so badly...!!


Geet shot a glare to vicky and retorted...what do you mean by still feel, huh...??...I love him and you know that...she replied with a cute pout.


Yeah, yeah...I know...vicky shook his head and asked...so, what do you wanna plan for him...??


I don't know, but just want to make this diwali special...geet replied honestly...music department is yours while meera and I would handle the decoration...she added.


Cool...!!...I will inform my band for the party...vicky said casually


Ok...geet then turned to meera...when is nt and pari arriving...??


Pari said they will reach by mid afternoon...meera replied.


Perfect, then lets start with the preparation...geet said getting up in a jiffy and went down with meera and vicky



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Aaj toh meri girlfriend bohot pyari lag rahi hai...a very calm and happy raj commented seeing geet desending the stairs. Geet smiled brightly at his comment and thanked him.


So guys all done for the party...he asked the trio.


Yes dad, we have planned it. Everything will be perfect...vicky replied.


Hmm, good...raj said and then turned to meera...so, meera how is your internship going...??


Meera gave a sweet smile and replied softly...its going fine, uncle...!!


Thats great...raj exclaimed and added...I am really proud that you qualified for internship in AIIMS, its a very prestigeous institution...!!


Meera beamed with happiness at his comment. After her own father, meera has started regarding raj as a father figure for his love and support in all these years. Geet and vicky too felt happy for their friend getting appreciation for her hardwork.


Karti kaise nahi, after all meri beti itni smart jo hai...naina said coming out from the kitchen. Naina loved meera just like geet due to her kind and soft nature.


Of course aunty, after all meera is my friend...geet said giving meera a side hug.


Haan bhai, tune hi toh iska exam diya tha...vicky taunted geet, but soon regretted it big time seeing the fiery expressions on her face and changed his sentence...ahem...ahem...I mean, you helped her so much...he said giving an uneasy smile.


Anyways, naina...raj called to gain her attention and said after she looked at him...maan has boarded his flight. I hope he'll reach before the time of puja...!!


Geet's heart jumped at the mention of his name and her eyes instantly spanned up at them...


Oh...!!...thats a great news...naina exclaimed happily. She would finally get to see her son after so long...I'll make all his favourite dishes...she said feeling sentimental...pata nahi, itne saalon mein kitna kamjor ho gaya hoga...!!


Raj rolled his eyes at his wife getting all senti and said...naina, its not that you haven't seen him in between, have you...??


Aap toh mat hi boliye...naina retorted to her hubby...I visited him last about six months before...she pouted.


Ok your highness...raj bowed before her dramatically...do as you please...!!


Uh, boyfriend...geet beckoned him...I think we should also get going...she said meekly.


Alright...raj smiled at her and they left to their respective work.


After they exited the premises of KM, naina came out of the kitchen with some snacks and frowned not finding the girls...


Raj, where are geet and meera...??...she asked looking around


What...??...but why didn't you stopped them...??...she said looking at the plates in her hands


Oh naina, the kids have lots of work to do and they are also handling the diwali party tonight. So they were in a hurry...he replied non-chalantly


Hmm...she said and sat down beside raj...


Raj, waqt kitni jaldi beet gaya na...??...she said staring at their family photo...It seems as if it all happened just yesterday. Maan went abroad, dev followed his suit and went to London for his MBA, vicky became the lead singer of the most renouned band of India, geet and meera cracked engineering and medical with great scores...saare bachche bade ho gaya aur dekhiye na geet aur meera...they have grown up to become such beautiful girls. I wish that as soon as maan returns, I'll get him married to geet. But...


But what, naina...??...raj asked urging her to speak further


But only if the both the kids consider the other for it...she replied sighing.


Raj enveloped naina in a side hug lovingly and replied with a smirk...I hope they will, after all who can resist my gorgeous girl friend and handsome son...!!






Naina laughed at her husband's words,but knew how true those jokingly said words were...!!


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It was already evening and preparations were almost complete. After offering puja and lightening their own house with candles and diyas, rano and geet came to KM for the diwali puja. Geet already had arranger for the decorations with the help of meera and was waiting for her other friends eagerly. She knew maan's flight won't land before the puja timing at KM and so wanted to make everything perfect before his arrival. Soon the party started and in few hours puja was to be conducted.


She was dressed in a beautiful deep marron lehnga contrasting with her glowing creamy skin with heavy work on the neck line of the choli giving it a rich look. There were few string holding the choli in place while the long skirt flowed down flawlessly fitting to her curves. She was looking absolutely etheral and breath takingly beautiful. Every heads in the crowd of guest turned to look at her getting attracted by her impeccable beauty.


Meera wore a baby pink coloured churidar while vicky wore his usual jeans t-shirt even after lots of pestering from his mom to wear an indian outfit for the puja.


Wow geet, you are looking so lovely dear...naina said kissing geet's forehead with love and then turned to meera...oh my god...!!...I guess the girls have decided to grab all the attention of the party...she commented making meera blush.


Just then nt and pari entered alongwith yash and rushed towards geet and meera...


Hi guys, happy diwali...pari screamed and hugged geet excitedly and then hugged meera. Yash and nt too greeted them in a similar fashion.


Oh my god...!!...finally you all are here...geet said taking a sigh of relief and pulled them to help in the arrangements.


Yash went to vicky and they shared their usual hug and wished each other before getting involve into the arrangements.


What happened geet...??...nt asked finding geet continuously looking towards the entrace...whom are you waiting for...??


Woh, sam di informed me that she'll be here very soon. But she hasn't come yet...she replied with an annoyed expression at sam being late.


Don't worry yaar...pari said this time...she'll be arriving any moment. After all she is the owner of the leading fashion boutique...pari said with a dreamy look imagining the various designer wear of sam's boutique.


I don't understand, how come sam di landed uptaking fashion designing as a career option...geet said with a baffled look.


Just like you took architecture instead of your favourite computers...vicky said butting in and getting another glare from geet.


Oh, in that case I guess, she should have taken CA as aditya...nt said with a mischievious smile looking at geet.


You really think there is something between them...??...pari asked with an unsure look.


Trust me on that one...nt said winking.


Whats going on guys...??...suddenly they heard a familiar voice from behind and turned to find sam standing there looking as usual very classy and beautiful.


Sam di...geet got super happy and hugged her tightly.


Hey sweety, easy okay...sam said parting and patted her head lovingly


Wow sam di, you are looking so marvelous...she said getting excited like a kid. Sam smiled at her excitement and replied...you are looking no less, dear...and then leaned closer and whispered...maan ki toh chutti ho jayegi...!!


Geet blushed profusely at her comment and said shyly...


What di, you too...??...and made a cute puppy face.


Please continue your whispering session later as mom is calling everyone for puja...vicky interrupted them.


Everyone moved towards the hall where a small yet beautiful temple was made for the puja. But geet's eyes incessantly moved towards the door waiting to see the one face, she was dying to see from six long years.



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Here maan's flight landed on Indira gandhi international airport and he came out after the completion of required procedures. As he step on the ground outside the airport, a weird sense of sereness and satisfaction filled his heart. He felt rejuvinated inhaling the air of his land.


It really feels good to be back home...he thought with a small smile on his face. A driver rushed to him and greeted taking his luggage. But soon as he came in view of some media persons who were there for some other work, they moved towards him to get few words alongwith his photograph. But they couldn't even get a glimpse of him due to the high security around him which escorted him to the car.


The car whoozed past the media persons, who kept lamenting at their bad luck of not getting an interview with the one of most high profiled businessman.


But maan's mind was occupied with much more important and amusing thoughts. A smile automatically brightened her face at the thought of his mishty. He just can'twait to see her surprised and delighted face on seeing him. She must be expecting a lot this time, but he was in a mood to tease and will certainly take full advantage and enjoy her reaction.


Oh mishty...!!...he let out a deep sigh and glanced outside the window through the glass observing the changes in the city.


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The puja started and naina performed the rituals being the grehlakhmi(daughter in law) of khurana household. Maan's car halted at the door of KM and maan stepped out in full style. He was wearing stylish, classy black suit looking mind blowing. He could hear the puja mantras coming from within the hall and smiled. The whole mansion was glowing like a bride, decked with lights and diyas. Each and every corner was sparkling with a great zeal as if celebrating the return of the elder khurana son.


As he stepped inside the hall, a cool mesmerizing breeze brushed past geet's entire body sending a current of thrillness. She opened her eyes feeling his presence around her and her heart beat suddenly got accelerated.


Is he really here...??...she thought looking around,but couldn't see the entrance properly due to the crowd blocking her view. Maan looked at the guest gathered near the area around the stairs and guessed it to be the place where puja is going on. He looked around the hall and smiled seeing the renovated hall. Many things have changed he thought with a bemused expression.


He tried to peep through the crowd to find a familiar face and found his mother and father standing in the first row, performing the rituals. He craned his neck further to see others and found vicky alongwith sam and some unknown faces which though looked familiar. And finally his eyes fell on a girl with long beautiful hair with her back towards him and felt a tug in his heart like she is someone very dear to him. He tried to see her face but failed due to the crowd. Sighing,he moved forward,but suddenly light went out and he stopped in his tracks.


Oh god...!!...yeh kya hua...??...naina exclaimed with a worry.


Don't worry naina,I guess there is some problem with the fuse...raj said and then turned to vicky...vicky, go and ask someone to check the fuse...!!


Ji dad...vicky replied and moved towards the entrace with the help of a torch.


All of you, please stand at your own place till the light comes back...raj requested others.


After sometime when vicky didn't returned, raj groaned...


Uff...!!...don't know where this stupid boy has gone...!!...abhi tak light nahi aayi. I tell you this boy will never change...he said getting frustrated with vicky's carelessness.


Geet, who was standing beside raj, heard him and immediately interrupted him...its okay, uncle. I'll go and check...!!


Maan, who was also standing just some metres away, heard her and instantly looked in her direction murmuring...geet...!!



Geet moved towards the store house where the fuse was fixed. She took a candle from the table at the end of the door and a matchstick which she had kept it before going into the aarti. On the way, she lit the candle and moved through the corrider leading the way to the store house.


Throughout the way, she felt being watched and followed by someone, but still moved ahead ignoring the feeling. Reaching the store room, she looked aroundfor vicky,but he was no where in sight.


Hey babaji...she dramatically looked upas if talking to her babaji and cribbed...boyfriend is absolutely right. This vicky is such an idiot...!!...Now, where will I find that moron...she said making a baby face.


Suddenly some noise came from behind and geet turned in a jiffy. The window facing her was open and a wave cool breeze sailed through her flowing her hair in a synchronized way with the air waves. The mild light from the candle was making her look so heavenly that anyone would have mistaken her for a real angel descending straight from heaven. And that is what maan thought seeing her like that.




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me already running😆😆😆
ok guys thats it for today...n I know u all will be cursing me for stopping there,but I am a bit busy now...I may updt tomorrow again, but can't promise
I felt previous updt was a bit rushed so I gave a brief background of everyone. Much more is yet to come😉
so till then enjoy and plzz plzz comment😳😳😳
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Edited by shining_moon - 13 years ago
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is it part 34 or 35?

haila i missed 34th part...
update ur first page dear plz...
so this is 35th part...
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Originally posted by: spvd

is it part 34 or 35?

haila i missed 34th part...
update ur first page dear plz...
so this is 35th part...



have updated the index😛
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part 34
nice part...
missed this one...
so finally Maan is coming back...
cant wait for the meet...
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so finally maan is coming back...
waiting for their meeting😉
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Lovely update
waiting for their meeting
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part 35
awesome...
me too waiting for Maan to return and see his Mishty...
every single has become successful...
when is the next part?
cont ASAP...

edit
wow Maan is in the Mansion...
still yet to see his Mishty...
still gonna update that part?

edit
wow Maan is so mesmerized seeing Geet...😳
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awww...im jumping...finally you updated again...mwaaahs
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she has updated...see pages 115 and 123...
Edited by spvd - 13 years ago

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