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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: sunu123

res...i will right this part...wait for sometime

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part 1
pia is in bathroom...taking shower...then she remember thatb its her first night after her marriage...so she hav to do something...then she come out of her bathroomwearing abhay's bathrob...n then she call someone n tell to get red roses,candle etc etc(i dont know what else is required😆😆😆)...asap n she cut phone n smile...after ten minute door bell ring n she went down to open the door...some mens enter the room n she tell them to way to her bedroom...n she follow's them...she remain outside the bedroom n they went inside the bedrroom to decorate the bedroom...after sometime they come out of her bedroom n then she paid them n they went...then she enter the room at surprise to she her room decorated with roses n candle around...then she think that"i will make u want me mr abhay raichand"n she smiles n move toward her wordrobe n open a drawer n her gaze shifts to the sexy lingerie's that misha help her to pick while they were shopping n she told her "poor abhay will go crazy seeing u in their" she touches the silk fabric n then thinks of abhay n blush n went to the bathroom to change in lingerie...meanwhile abhay enter the mansion n he is also smiling n thinking abt his first night after marriage n thinks" i m soo lucky to have such a angle like pia in my life" n he is also on cloud nine...in bathroom pia change in lingerie n check herself in the mirror n think"today u will not able to resist me abhay" n she blush n step out of the bathroom...at sometime abhay enter the room n look around n smile then his gaze shift to pia n he look at her...he can't take his eye off her...pia also looks in abhay deep blue eyes n she notice love n soo much passion in his eye for her...pia also look at him with all her love...n they lost in each others eyes...then abhay step forward while holding his gaze fixed to her...

😛then abhay could'nt wait longer and grabs and pulls pia to himself
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Posted: 14 years ago
part 2 :
abhay step toward her...he feels like that his dead heart is beating like crazy...n he stop...gap betw then is less then 3cm...they r still looking at each other with passion n lust...then abhay wrap his hand around her waist n pull her close to him...so that their chest pressd firmly agt each other...then abhay kiss her forehead n tell her that she is looking smoking hot n that he will be not able to resist her tonight...then he cup her face n kiss her eyelid n pia closed her eye n then abhay move toward her cheek n kiss her both cheek n rub his nose to her nose...she then parted her lips waiting in anticipation...abhay notice that how much she is craving for kiss...then without wasting time he move away a strand of hair then he leans n take her parted lips into his n start kissing her slowly n softly...then the passion took over him n start kissing her passionatly as teasing n sucking her lips...his hand slides from her fece down to her neck to her shoulder n arms strocking n carresing her very gently she moans in pleasure n then again he gets hold of her waist n pulls her up closer as they kiss each other with more passion now, their hanh strocking n touching each other...then he leaves her lips n goes down seeking her chin n then neck as he tease her with his lips n teeththen his hands shifts to her shoulder impatiently n then his hand hold the starps of her night gown rolling them n sliding them from her shoulder down to her arms n her hand were trembling as they were trying impatiently tounbutton his shirt,both were breathless n both hed this urgent yearning for each other...after some time abhay lift her in his arms n place her on the bed n he moves on top of her...then his removes his shirt n tossed it to floor...then he freed pia from lingerie n tossed it on the floor...then he start to kiss her passionatly n they get lost in the ecstacy of their passionate need for each other...
i did my job...thxn qusim
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Posted: 14 years ago
awsm sunita...smokng hot...m stl☺️...where wr u hiding dear??????...i thnk u shd strt writng an ff or os...u r surely a firecrackr...😆lv ya loadzzz...😉
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: purple_shadoz

awsm sunita...smokng hot...m stl☺️...where wr u hiding dear??????...i thnk u shd strt writng an ff or os...u r surely a firecrackr...😆lv ya loadzzz...😉

thxn dear for ur wonderful comment...no dear i m not that expext in writig...actually i got this idea from abhiya ff ...n also from hema di(total romantic)...luv u loadzzz🤗
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Posted: 14 years ago
😉😉😉😉😉DOING GR88 JOB...AB KOI AAGE TOH LIKHO...
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: winxricha

😉😉😉😉😉DOING GR88 JOB...AB KOI AAGE TOH LIKHO...

hey richa u cont further...i think qusim is offline...dont go directly for baccha so soon...add some mixed masala...start from nxt morning...right now i m busy...i will join later in evening...till then u cont further
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Posted: 14 years ago
Piya tightly hold abhay's back...and then slowly she open the button of his shirt while abhay staring at her like crazy ..Piya throw the shirt of Abhay on the ground and kiss him on the chest.Abhay allow Piya to do so..
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: AbhiyaFan_Qusim

Piya tightly hold abhay's back...and then slowly she open the button of his shirt while abhay staring at her like crazy ..Piya throw the shirt of Abhay on the ground and kiss him on the chest.Abhay allow Piya to do so..

this scene is over yaar...cant write further in detail its agt the forum's rules...u cont with nxt morning scene...
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Posted: 14 years ago
Its early morning Piya gets up and is covered with sheet with abhay is sleeping with no clothes on..Piya kiss him on the chest and hug him.Abhay gets up and kiss her too..Piya says: Soon we will have a baby!
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: AbhiyaFan_Qusim

Its early morning Piya gets up and is covered with sheet with abhay is sleeping with no clothes on..Piya kiss him on the chest and hug him.Abhay gets up and kiss her too..Piya says: Soon we will have a baby!

abhay make series face...now pia become really worried...she ask abhay what happen...abhay tell no pia this cant be happen as we cant reproduce(abhay know that he is lieing to pia...but this right for her)pia is really sad...that she cannot complete abhay's wish...but she put fake smile on her face...abhay know that she is really upset...but abhay igonores this part...n to put smile back to her face he ask her abt honeymoon planing...she really excited abt this...n give big smile to pia...abhay thnx god that he succesful in distracting her...

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