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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: Abhakaran

Really nice part tashu
Loved the coffice shop scenes
Continue soon

Jyoti

Originally posted by: Redrose21

Awesome part.
Glad that Armaan realized he is in love with Ridz.
What exactly happened in ridz's past?
Cont soon.
Thanks for the PM.

Originally posted by: anumeha_rajat

simply amazing n awsum part..

loved it..

so rahul tricked armi to sing a song..

n the song was perfect...i really love this song..

n AR finally coming together...

continue soon..

thnx for the pm...

Thank you so much everyone for commenting it means a lot to me! and yes Armaan in love with Ridzi!! and thanks for liking the song!! Let's see what she feels and if she can tell Armaan about her past! I will!!
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: -RabiaKSGKaJen-

greaaat parrtt. wohhhooo! armaan iss inn lovve withh riddhimmaa <3/ oyye hoyyyee rabba main tho mar gayya oyyeee <3 perfeccct sonnngg! wanntt riddhimaa to forgeett abouuhh her passtt ii knoww its haardd; but shee will nevaa finnd aa guy likee armaannn; just wana knoww does she lovvee him tooo. cann't waiit for next part. update sooon <3

Thank you so much Rabzie for commenting it means a lot to me! and yes Armaan in love with Ridzi!! and thanks for liking the song!! Same here even I want the same!! that's true!! Let's see what she feels! I will!!
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: ..Maitree..

Loved the chapter! Oho So Mr.Mallik realised he's in love <3 Loved how they're so close now...and Oho Rahul knows ;) Woaaahh O <3 I really hope Riddhima tells Armaan the truth :)

Anyways, Loved it JB <3 Love you tooo 🤗

-Maitree :)

Thank you so much Maitree<33 for ur sweet comment it means a lot to me! and yes Armaan in love with Ridzi!! Yes Rahul knows!! Let's see what she does! I will!! ILY2<3
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: ..SaM-DeSiRe..

Great part!! aww that was soo cute in the coffee shop but i feel so bad fr her..hope she can get over her past soon..what happened anyway?? and the party was good..i love that song!! great choice..i can just imagine Armaan singing while staring at her..aww.. eee he realized his feelings!! cnt wait for the confession!! n i hope she realizes it too!! thnx for the pm! continue soon!

Thank you so much Sam! Yeah the coffee shop part was sad!! thank you! yeah he did!! Let's see what she feels! I will!!
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: -KaJenAbhiya-

Hey JB! I know, I know. I am late here, but what can I do? School is killing me. Anyways. The part was awesome! Really loved it! OMG! So that's what the preview was about! I feel really bad for Riddhima. But I still wanna know what actually happened to her. OMG! Armaan has finally realized his love for Riddhima! Wowies! The song was beautiful! Loved it! Can't wait to read the next part! Please update soon and thanks for the PM. -Medzi-

Munni<33 Thank you so much! yes u are late but it's okay! I understand u have school! Yup that was what the preview was about!! You will find out in the next part!! Yes Armaan in love with Ridzi!! and thanks for liking the song!! Let's see what she feels! I will!!
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: Sanaa629

Heyyy..Just came across this fanfiction..Riddhima's past is just so saddening..!! Whoever the guy was deserves to to go die..!! He totally deserved it by the looks of it..And I'm saying that while knowing there are worse people in this world..!!

Anyways..Armaan and Rahul and Muskaan are like a breath of fresh air..!! Completley..!! And I have been feeling quite down myself of recent so there was this paragraph Rahul said that also applied indirectly to my situation..(change some words here and there) so that really helped too..!! :D
And finally Hayyyee!!! *Sighs* Rabba main toh mar gayya..!! I ADORE this song..!! And Saj Dhaj Ke too..:D But I oculd totally understand why Riddhima broke down after talking slightly about her family..because people she's grown up with..trusted..gave them her everything were the same people who turned their backs on her when she cried for help? Even IF she had been wrong..it was the family's responsibility to help her out of that mess and make her understand..not turn their backs like that..so I totally understand Riddhima...As for Armaan..bless him..he's already whipped..and it's been what..3 weeks?? LOL!! well..when it's love..it can take years and years..or it can take moments..But I'm glad she's letting Armaan reach out to her..In fact I love the way you show how she's constantly trying to overcome her pain, constantly moving forward..!! I feel like singing the song Crash and Burn by Savage Garden to her..!! LOL!! Or maybe Armaan should..!! It's a beautiful song and totally goes with this ff despite its age...!! :D Do listen to it if you haven't already..
Please do continue sooon..!! Your writing style is also amazing..you capture their emotions beautifully and portray them in the most realistic way to your audience..:) Kudos to you for that..
Love,
Sanaa

Thank you so much Sanaa for your comment it means a lot to me! I'm glad your liking the FF! Yeah Ridzi's husband was no prince charming!! Aww well I am glad you feel better!! I love the song too and Saj Dhaj !! I know I can't imagine that happening to someone in real life!! Lol yeah Armaan is in Love! Same it's hard to let someone into your life after what ridzi has gone thorough!! aww thank you so much I only try!! I will!!
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: kajen_hamesha

Part 3
aww its so cute how riddhima didn't sleep because of armaan <3 and seriously, riddhima wants batman to save her? loves making her go crazy 🤣🤣🤣 and LOL armaan is so cocky...he always assumes she's thinking about him 🤣 and then poor riddhima gets so embarassed, and i bet she thinks he's a mind reader because he always knows what she's thinking about 🤣 And what makes me laugh is that she calls him an ape in her head...she is so funny 🤣 at first i thought that riddhima was a dukhi aatma and that she never laughed and always thought about sad and depressing stuff...but being with armaan is changing her personality 😃 she's becoming a more lively person, rather than being depressed all day and its nice to see this change in her..and i'm happy that armaan was the person whose changed her 😃😃😃 poor riddhima...everywhere she goes, armaaan is always there...he's constantly haunting her thoughts and everyone is asking her about him 🤣
OMKAJEN riddhima is so hilarious...she was telling muski why she doesn't like armaan and then she started listing all his good qualities like how he's good at his job and has cool eyes 🤣 This chapter is so funny 🤣🤣🤣 But seriously, riddhima is developing feelings for armaan..it might not be love YET but she does like him a lot ❤️ and muski's telling riddhima that she'll be happy with armaan and riddhima only said that she likes him 🤣 i bet muski has already started planning for their wedding 🤣 i love muski because she gets so excited about things..but at the same time she is so understanding. i want a friend like her 🤣 and ROFL rahul is asking armaana the same questions..have muski and rahul planned this? or can they just read each others minds 🤣 But armaan is so funny...he's been talking about riddhima for the last 20 mins? The armaan whose a player and whose arrogant and cocky has been talking about the same girl for 20 mins 😲 EEKSSS i am so happy! He admitted that he likes herrr! i always knew he liked her <33333 I am so exciteddd 😃😃 and LOL rahul is like a 5 year old...he thinks he deserves a cookie for that 🤣
OMFG boring niece...i think i have to stop calling you boring from now because this FF is so funny 🤣 what i love the most about this FF is that you show us armaan and riddhima's thoughts...so we get see both of their POVs..and also their thoughts are funny 🤣 Omg I hope he's not planning on cheating on Muski with me?? This made me laugh so much 🤣 and rahul is such a kind and caring person. He has done so much for riddhima and i'm happy that he's there for her. Riddhima was all alone, but now its like she has a family...rahul and muskaan :) and obviously armaan too 😉 and LMAO riddhima keeps thinking that rahul wants to date her 🤣🤣 Poor rahul is trying to get armaan and riddhima together, and riddhima is doubting his intentions 🤣 Riddhima's diary entry was so sad. I wonder what her husband did to her...and if he was so horrible then why can't she let go of him? But i'm happy that she's finally decided to move on and live for herself 😃 This is the beginning of her new life...and i'm sure that she will find lots of happiness! I love this FF because there some sad moments which really make me think that can there actually be such mean people in this world, and is society so harsh towards widows? But there also so many funny moments which make me laugh...and you balance them both really well 👏👏 i'm sorry that i'm taking so long to comment...i'm just busy with school 😭


Originally posted by: kajen_hamesha

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awww poor ammy..he has to sing 🤣🤣🤣 i would be so embarassed..i would never do it 🤣🤣 and LMAO rahul is such a nautanki! he didn't get a cold, i bet this is just another plan of his to get armaan and riddhima together 🤣 no, but how would armaan singing to muskaan make armaan and riddhima get together? 😕😕 maybe rahul really has a cold 🤣🤣 LOL armaan decided to sing as soon as he heard that riddhima wanted him to sing 🤣 he loves her 🤣🤣 and rahul is so clever...he finds ways to get what he wants 🤣🤣 and riddhima's thoughts are so funny 🤣 she thinks he's hot 😉😉😉 i love seeing this side of her personality..she has a childishness in her but it seems like she's hidden it! 😭😭😭 and hahaaa she's been thinking about armaan all week? that is so cute...armaan is really affecting her 😃😃 i just want her to fall in love with him already, but i understand its gonna take a while because she's a widow and she might think that he'll never love her because of that! 😭😭😭 But i'm sure he'll understand! and what does BG stand for? i can't rememeber if you've told us or not😕 but i'm guessing it means something like blushing girl because she always blushes when she's with armaan 🤣🤣🤣
and i love that songgg ❤️ and its cute how armaan is so eager to find out more about riddhimaaa 🤣 and poor riddhima...its so sad 😭😭 riddhima should just tell armaan. But i understand that it must be really hard for her to open up to people! and awww poor armaan...he's so concerned and worried about riddhima! and he cares about her so much that he's called her so many times. 😃😃 AND EEKSSS he's finally realised he loves her. OMKAJEN ARMAAN LOVES RIDDHIMA...ARMAAAN MALLIKKK LOVES RIDDHIMAAA...I AM SO HAPPYYY 🤣 and armaan was singing fot her? he is just too cute! EEKS armaan is the cutest, sweetest and most adorable guy ever. I thought that he would keep asking riddhima why she ran out of the coffee shop, but instead he just gave her a hug and understood that she would tell him when she was ready. I love his character in this FF ❤️❤️❤️ and awww...riddhima seems content and happy :) its like she's complete when armaans there! they are seriously made for each other. they just need to realise it <33 First never again will you tell your wife that she looks fat after throwing her a party and that to for her birthday! LMAO this made me laugh so much 🤣🤣🤣 rahul and muski are so funnyyy 🤣🤣 why would rahul say that to muski on her birthday? if i was muski i would've killed him by now🤣🤣 and NOOO i don't want armaan to tell riddhima he loves her..because i'm scared that riddhima won't accept him and then she'll get scared about her pasttt. please armaan...don't tell her! UPDATE SOON :)


Okay first of all these are the longest comments that I have ever seen! 🤣 it took so long to read!! my eyes hurt! Pagal Auntie u really are pagal! this is the first time I have ever seen this"🤣" being used so much!! BUT I love it!!🤣 Okay now about your comments!! Thank you sooo much!!!!!!! I don't know what to say!! but you made my day!! I would comment on everything but I'm too tired!!🤣 so I will just end off by saying that I will update soon and that I love your massive long comments!🤣
Edited by -RougeDreams- - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
Thank You All Once Again!! Your sweet comments are
really encouraging so thank you for that!! 😳
on a lesser note...

🤔 Who wants an update Today or is Tomorrow better??
but keep in mind it will only be half of part 5 because it's long or
do you want to read the whole part rather then half??😕
the more comments the better so please tell me!😳
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Posted: 13 years ago
I want an update today even if it is only half a part :)
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Posted: 13 years ago
^as u wish pagal auntie!! Update Today =)

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