-Picking Up The Pieces-ARFF|Last Part-PG:111

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Thank u Ashy for the banner ILY!!

-Intro-

I had stood motionless as I had watched his body which rested on a bed of wood be engulfed by the red and orange dancing flames. I had never imagined that my life would take such a drastic turn, that one moment would change the face of my life as I knew it. I had never imagined that I would go from being a married woman to the life of a widow in the blink of an eye. Why had god done this to me? What had I done to deserve a life of loneliness?? What had I done to wake up one morning and hear that my husband was dead?? What had I done to be stripped of my marital bliss?? What had I done to see my husband being burned in front of my eyes?? What had I done to deserve a life without happiness?? What had I done to deserve stares and comments from people who used to care about me?? What had I done to be abandoned by my family who no longer wanted to have anything to do with me?? What had I done to be left alone to fend for myself in society which only made a mockery out of my state?? What had I done to be blamed for my husband's death?? What had I done to get beaten black and blue everyday for no fault of my own?? What had I done to be called names like ***** and *****?? What was I going to do?? Was I ever going to have someone in my life again to love me or was I going to die alone?? Would I ever find happiness in my life again?? Would I ever find someone to hold me when I needed comfort??

Would I ever find someone who would hold my hand and support me when I felt alone?? Would I ever find someone who would bring back the smile on my face that no longer existed?? But the biggest question of all was' Would I find someone who would accept me despite my past and still love me for who I was?? No! said a small voice from inside. Why would anyone want to love me!! Why would someone want to hold my hand and support me!! Why would someone want to spend there whole life with me!! Why would someone want to bring back the smile on my face!! Why would someone want to accept me and my past and start a new chapter in their life with me!! What was so special about me?? What did I have that someone would want to hold me in their arms and say "I Love You" What was so special about me that someone would want to join their name with mine?? Why would someone want to even be around me I was nothing but a curse I had eaten up my husband and had been declared as a murderer in the eyes of society??? Why did I have to go through all of this??? Why did I have to be left with nothing but pain and disappointment?? Why was this happening to me?? I had never done anything to anyone; I had always tried to be a good daughter, sister, friend and wife to those around me. I had always been there for others when they needed someone in a time of need so why was I alone?? Didn't I deserve to have someone to help me pick up the pieces of my life that had been scattered everywhere??? So why me?? WHY!!!! WHY!!!! I screamed out loud hoping to hear a reply but as I looked around the room and saw it in darkness I knew the answer would never come. I covered my face with my hands as tears streamed there way down my face as the reality of my life hit me like a ton of bricks that I Riddhima Gupta was a widow. And this' was my life.
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Intro-Page 1

Part 1-Page7

Part 2-Page 12
Preview To Part 3-Page 17
Part 3-Page 22

Preview To Part 4+ Note-Page 28

Part 4-Page 33

Part 5 A-Page 39

Part 5 B-Page 46

Part 6-Page-52+Note-Page 53

Preview To Part 7-Page 59

Part 7-Page 63

Preview To Part 8-Page 68

Part 8-Page 73

Preview To Part 9-Page 79

Part 9-Page 81

Part 10-Page 87

Preview To Part 11-Page 91

Part 11-Page 93

Preview To Part 12-Page 97

Part 12-Page 100

Preview To Part 13-Page 104

Part 13-Page 107

Part 14+Note-Page 109

Part 15 Last Part-Page 111
Edited by -RougeDreams- - 13 years ago
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GO TO PAGE 28 =)

Edited by -RougeDreams- - 13 years ago
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Weee RES. This just made my night CONGRATULATIONS JB!!!!!!!!! Woot woot!!!! <333

EDIT:

Now how late am I?! Like seriously, it's a damn shame how I'm just commenting on your intro when you have two chapters up already -___- But, I blame it all on school! Anyway, I plan on giving you a long longgg comment when I'm done reading the two chapters. The intro was mind blowing! And it literally was, no lie!!! I'll read the chapters as soon as I get the time. Sorry is like an understatement her but sowwwy JB! I seriously am!! And even tho I didn't read the chapters yet, UPDATE SOON ;) lmaooo LOVE YOU!!!!!
Edited by Simmy003 - 13 years ago
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O-M-G Jalebi ! That was SO good.The concept is so unique and new .. I am so glued to it..I mean who wouldn't ? It's so intresting and top that your amazing writing skills.You potrayed Riddhima's pain so well..I seriously feel bad for her.Poor Girl has to bear so much with no fault of hers.I don't understand why widows are cursed I mean it isn't their fault their husband died..It's such a sensitive topic and I know you're gonna to full justice to it..Continue real soon..needless to say PM me :) I've "liked" the post :D

Edited by -Trish- - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
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amazing intro and concept...
really novel idea
do cont soon
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Wow sounds cool! Really wanna know what happens next. Continue soon. 😃
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Awsm intro buddy.
Totaly rocking start.
Plz add me in ur pm list.
T.c.
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Posted: 14 years ago
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superb intro
eager to know who was riddhima husband
dont 4get to pm me :D
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interesting concept
introduction was awesome
continue soon
add me to ur pm list

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