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peeehu

@MRS.SSO

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#651

wohooo

yayayayayyaya

yipeee

rida updateed!

i m sooo happpyyy

extremely adorable part!!!!!!!!!!!!!

mmymymymym atul ws gr8

complete it sooonnn

i love uuu seriously i do! :P

btw dnt forget m in pm list if u write the PM part

BUT SURELY UP TO U!

i will admit dat i start i ws really upset of btloo endinggg bt u updating removes alll my complainz

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Rida

@FleetingWishes.

Sparkler

+ 5

Posted: 13 years ago

#652

ILY ALL TOO MUCH ASWELL <3 ;D

Angel you better gimmee my comment or i wont complete🤣

HAWWW charminglady i love you loads too <3 btween id to ask you where do you live🤣 LOL

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RITIKA

@ksg_ritika

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#653

omg awesum part ... loved it ... plzzz continue it soon ...

ritika

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ilovebtloo

@ilovebtloo

Explorer

Posted: 13 years ago

#654

I LOVE BTLOO <3

Thank you sooo much Woman!

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ilovebtloo

@ilovebtloo

Explorer

Posted: 13 years ago

#655

Ah-mazing part!!

Too cute for words!

And the second installment... I want more of that!!

Will comment properly later.

For now THANK YOU... Dil se :)

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Shivani Dhawan

@shivi17

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#656

Oh my god u updated yikes I just read this ff in one go and gosh women you are one amazing writer, I know u are ending this and I am nine kinds of late in finding this ff but but but can u add me to your pm list... I am just in love with this ff and cannot get it out of my mind 'dreamy face'
And even for one part or two, I would love to be related with this fantastic ff pls add me... Oh my god I am going gaga over this eeeks it's sooo freakingly amazing man

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sweetieangel

@sweetie_angel

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#657

Originally posted by: -Heart-Hacker-
ILY ALL TOO MUCH ASWELL <3 ;D
Angel you better gimmee my comment or i wont complete🤣
HAWWW charminglady i love you loads too <3 btween id to ask you where do you live🤣 LOL

i totally hate u baby fr doing this to me hmmph😡

update ke naam pe kya kya karvathi hai

okay so now coming tp the update

loved the family bonding

n do i need to say anything about Arsh

i mean u totally describe them out of the world

i soo hope u'll get them married n give us a wonderful n hot update of them😳

okay im gonna say only this much

nect ll edit this n post when u update completely

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aila

@-aaila-

Inactive

Posted: 13 years ago

#658

Awesome update!

cant wait for next part!

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.amigos.

@.amigos.

Inactive

+ 3

Posted: 13 years ago

#659

Look who is gracing her presence!

YO Hacker!

I Owed you a comment, i was commenting last time..and i had wrote a huge comment and IF actually messed it all and my comment was gone.

So am back again! So i was pondering that your master piece work wasnt the first one iv read.,i remember that VIOLENT Love was your very first Piece of wrk which i read..and OMG..I Swear i had no idea it was a girl like you who wrote this..when i read...I WAS LIKE Man...must be a married person who wrote this..and BANG!I Got the shock of my life..that Miss Hacker was the one who wrote this...hats off for making me feel immature :| you know better than me in some departments.

Now coming to BTLOO!

i have a fetish liking for agressive heroes JUST Like you[u already knw]

and i love how Armaan is such a ruthless guy but he has a weak spot when it comes to Shilpa...he wants her all for himself..and he means it any cost!

AMAZING Characterisation ;P

Shilpa..well... :D i love her..cute innocent and naive but whn it comes to Armaan...WOW She is a wild passionate girl!

BTLOO is so wonderful Rida.THERE Have been lots of moments you have taken my breath away!for examle...i love ArSh first encounter...OMG That rain scene was soo BREATHTAKING!The attraction could be felt while reading it...u were so good at portraying how the feelings were all strong and attraction was so powerful between them <3

Am not remember alll the scene altogether!but the kitchen scenes were all hawt and sexy ;)

how he pinned her to the wall and all of tht!

Another moment would be tht sexy hawt scene in the dressing room..smthing like tht...OMGGG..No wrds..but the explanation by you...tht was smthing..!HOT HOT HOTTT!

And i have to mention also that WOW...You have that thing to describe a KISS scene...you go deep and the outcome is just amazing...i was stunned seeing that you can describe a kiss scene in actually more than 12 lines...THIS IS EPIC MAN <3

This has to be your baby work, i have seen the improvement of your writing skills...but i also felt that you werent that bad as you said it was...am a fan of your writing...i can never write such beautiful words with lots of vocabs and adjectives...AM YOUR FAN & YOU ARE A PRO!

I LOVEEE You Hacker..am gonna read your latest update now ;)