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Rida

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Posted: 13 years ago

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Vini gimmeee my comment! comment do do do🤬👎🏼

that is my haqqq right :(

DIVZZZ goddd so busy? you hardly come! seeing you after so so many days! missed you so so so very much :( god hows mba going? come more na :(

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Posted: 13 years ago

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yes rida, i hardly get time. anyways sab mujhe bhool bhi gaye honge.

mba is tough. my internal exams r there from 2nov. and im very tensed about it. not yet started studying also. i dont know how will i be able to do it.

also tom have to go to dentist. he is going to remove my one teeth. it is giving me pain

hi viri, how r u?

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Tahmina Aliya Begum

@-Aliya-

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Posted: 13 years ago

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So let me get this straight you have ended BTLOO and have posted a intro chapter of a sequel? Oh is it completely separate. i thought the dead husband Armaan in this new FF you are starting could be the husand Armaan of BTLOO hehe. Anyway i don't mind. its absolutely AWESOME so far. Your always looking to try something new with your writing which i admire. And so far its working so well done.

I love how when you write intimate scenes or even scenes where all there is is slight contact, it makes me hold my breath as if your characters are in this bubble that might burst if i do anything sudden 😆 i know its weird but thats the effect your writing has. it takes us into their world. Which perhaps isn't always a good thing to get carried away with fantasy because it pulls us away from reality but for the writer i guess its a compliment because you know you have your reader hooked if they can feel the words come to life which is something you do so well - whether effortlessly or with much effort that i do not know but you do it somehow and SO well.

I think your wide range of vocabulary plays a huge role in you creating magic with your words. The words are literally dripping with sensual romance and i wish i could have you lend over this special dictionary you have that has all the romantic words needed for a romance novel. I think reading your FFs will really help me improve the variety of vocab i use in my creative writing so thankya for that!

this new concept has drawn my attention. ofcourse. And even though i would never like bad guys in real life, they draw to me in romantics because their love for their lady weighs out some of their evil characteristics. if that makes sense. it makes them fascinating. It shouldn't be breaking news that i like my intense, mysterious roguish male characters especially when they show their soft side towards a woman. i still don't support evil men but in romantic stories they can be made alluring if handled well and so far i can see you doing that.

Karan Mallik. Ah so your using this eh? so does that make this new concept a KaSh FF since it is Karan Mallik and Shilpa Malhotra ;)

Okay this is starting to look too long and sound like its dragging on so i'ma stop even though i have so much more to say =) i hope this made up for the delay of the comment. just update soon Rida because i cannot have you make us wait any longer

Edited by -Aliya- - 13 years ago