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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: Asyalover

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Originally posted by: spvd

part 10
nice part...
these 2 will never change...
hope Geet gets to know about this recorder...
poor Geet...
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so both sis do have some brain...nice...


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Geet's step sister wanted to embaress Geet that is why recorded her talks but I think that will help Maan to find Geet...Yes. Apparently their plans always backfire.

Pari is really a sweetheart...she loved Geet so much...try to help her always...She sure is!

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Chapter 11


Geet scud backward to avoid bumping into people who step with out seeing. Carefully balancing the tray of appetizer snacks in her hand as she went around the house and the guests stopped her to grab some if they want while enjoying the party. Geet cursed the girl who was too busy showing off her heels to a group of chicks that she didn't cared if any one was behind her or not.

Geer made a yuck face as she murmured, "Showing off heels, when she can't even handle them. Even if she want to show off at least show off something worth seeing that design is so out of this world."

Pari caught up to her and smiled as she heard her murmur, "I so agree; I have a better pair then her."

Geet laughed, "Wait, what are you doing here?" she asked when she realized that it was Pari in front of her at her step-family's party.

No, Geet was not invited to the party and even if she was she would have preferred to be somewhere else. Too bad, she was forced to stay in the party. Why? To work, serve food, attend guests. In short do all the behind the scenes all by herself.

"Duh' Oh, helping you of course, you didn't think I would live you here all by yourself to deal with craziness did you?" Pari said the obvious.

Pari took the tray from Geet's hand and whispered in her ear, "Go get ready; I will take care of the things over here."

Geet smiled, she was so glad Pari was there for her. She had been so busy with pre party work that she didn't have the chance to change before the guests started arriving. She was already embarrassed enough by the looks she got. She could hear loud and clear what their thoughts spoke.

She hurried away to her room, so that to come back that much faster. No ways, she was going to leave Pari alone. As for her fears she didn't wanted Naina to be harsh towards her friend.

***

"Dude lets go," Sufiyan said as he ran in Maan's door just to run back out in a jiff.

Maan stopped playing his guitar and looked towards the door confused, putting the instrument down he rushed out behind Sufiyan.

"Woa slow down, where are we going?" Maan asked stopping in the living room. In response to his question Sufiyan jerked him out as he grabbed the car keys.

Maan refused to sit in the car until he got a reply that was good enough for him to go with his pal.

Sufiyan asked irritated, "Oh come on, you will know when we get there, and why are you being so stubborn its not like I am going to take you in middle of nowhere and kill you."

Maan crossed his arms, hugging himself, "Who knows may be that is exactly your plan."

Sufiyan pulled the door to the passenger side open and pushed Maan in then himself rushed around to the driver side before Maan succeeded in getting out.

Sufiyan drove the car away as he smiled inside out. Maan looked at his friend, "Dude seriously what is up? You know I am in no mood for anything today."

Sufiyan grinned, "Not even in the mood to meet your Cinderella?" he looked at Maan whose expression changed instantly.

Maan looked at Sufiyan wanting to make sure of what he heard. Sufiyan winked and continued driving.

Maan asked, "But how? Where? Who?" He had questions filling up his brain. Most importantly, how does Sufiyan know who she is?

Sufiyan just continued driving refusing to answer any questions. Maan tried various antics to get the name out of him but nothing worked. In the end he just sat properly in his seat looked up front as he tried thinking of who can she be.

Finally the car stopped and Maan turned to either side to see where they were. When he saw the place he looked at Sufiyan with dagger eyes. This was the last place he wanted to be at. Naina's house! Definitely he was invited to the party and he had made it clear to his parents that there is no way in the world that he was going. Look at the fate that is where he ended.

"Okay, before you kill me," Sufiyan started in his defense. "You might want to reconsider you previous thought as this is where she is."

"How do you know?" Maan asked calmly.

Sufiyan unbuckled his seat belt and getting comfortable he said, "Well, I do know alright and we are here to make it for sure that it is her."

"Will you kill the suspense and tell the name already."

"Well-she-is-none-other-than-your-nameless-girl," Sufiyan stated in one breath.

"English please."

"Your name less girl," Sufiyan repeated the end portion.

Maan nodded and when it strike what his friend just said he asked, "What? No there is no way she can be her. I mean both of them are completely opposite. There is one, who danced so gracefully and talked with me so nicely even complimented me and than there is the other, who always back answers me, on the urge to strangle me down, I am most probably the guy who she hates to core. There is no way both of them could be the same person.

"Yes, no way," Maan confirmed more to himself.

Sufiyan sighed, "Maan, you don't even know the girl. The fact that she is different from the rest of the girls you have met does not make her abnormal or something. All the things you know about her is how she presented herself to you. You have no idea how she really is because you have not even spend a quality time with her. Face it, every time you bump into her you are too busy showing off your stardom that you don't notice that this girl does not care about the outer looks but is the kind who is more interested in the people who would much rather be down to earth."

Maan looked at Sufiyan as if he was not his friend but a complete different person.

"What?" Sufiyan said, "You know I am right, I know that deep inside you know that and you are not the person I have known you since childhood and you have changed a lot over the course of years. But who knows may be she came in your life to make you meet the real you. The Maan Singh Khurana, who is hidden behind all the bright lights"

"Okay enough," Maan said, "No need for a meet-your-soul speech, just tell me how come you know that it is her? Did she tell that to ya?"

"No," Sufiyan answered, "Well yes, in a way."

Maan waited patiently for him to continue.

"Remember, the other night when she told me that I tried to impress her best friend with that cheesy pick up line?"

Maan nodded when he remember the portion from the conversation. He was surprised that he even remembered that part when all along all he thought about was how she reacts to him and his talks.

Sufiyan continued, "Well, there is only one person whom I used that cheesy line on, the girl whom I spent my prom night with which means that girl is her best friend and that is the same girl who ran away with your Cinderella."

Maan glanced at Sufiyan as everything was still working in his brain. "Okay, so what is your girl's name?"

"Don't know," Sufiyan stated, "I never got chance to ask her that, we were too busy talking about all the nothingness in this world and I also don't know how she looks because believe it or not it was a Masquerade Ball."

Maan gave a sorry look to his friend.

Sufiyan cheered up, "But not to worry, because we know how your nameless girl looks and any girl who is with her that looks like her best friend than that's the beautiful face uncovered by the white mask."

Maan looked at Sufiyan and smiled slightly, how he loved him. He always looked at the bright side of the situations and if there is no bright side then he will make sure to find a way that will lead to even brighter side.

"Okay let's go," Sufiyan announced, "Remember I am not 'sure' sure. So, if I come out wrong, spare me."

Maan chuckled and got out of the car. He was not sure if he wished that Sufiyan turns out right or wrong. After all if he is right, then it's the end of the chase because he already knows that 'she' does not like him already.

Sufiyan came over to his side and placed a hand on his left shoulder, "We may never know until she knows the real you. Just like you don't know her she does not know you much either."

Funny how he always read his mind, as if he was a psychic'he was glad to have him. Along with Maan's friendliness, he has faced all the other kinds of torments but he was still by his side today. What good did Maan do to get a friend like him?

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Next Part : Chapter 12

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Happy Mother's Day!

Edited by *mystic.moon* - 11 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
part 11
nice part...
so Maan has recognized his girl?
cont soon...
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Posted: 12 years ago
happy mother's day to u too...wow sufiyan is so clever he guessed it so ryt...cont soon

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