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Hello Samira ! First of all congratz for the new thread. 👏
I just read ur fanfic in one go ! It was mindblowing. Here are my views :
Let me start with ur tareef : Ur an amazing, very talented , brillant writter ! Ur writing style is really very pleasant, aesy to read and captivating ! Concerning ur style, I must say one thing which is particularly well done: Geets thoughts, it's so " down to earth ", i mean if i was at her place ( I would have loved too ☺️... Oh god ur fasting remenber zubi, take this : 😵 ) i would have done same things, the way "ur geet" thinks and reacts, anyone of us would have done the same in the same situation., and this really good !
Now comming to the concept : I LOVE IT, the violence, blood ahhh LOVE IT 😈 Actually this exactly the type of fanfic i was lookin for, the hero being an arrogant, cold, heartless murderer... Let me tell u, u r not alone in this state, i am with you 😈, n according to the number of fans u have, i think we should start a group therapy...( before our own M.Right come n sees us in this sate...😆 )
Finally concerning the last updt: OMG !!! I was dead 🤣 🤣🤣 Geet comparing man to a gay awww 🤣... and she imagined him dancing in a item nom OMG, where do u find ur ideas girl u r crazy ! and last sentence, really unexpected OMG here her life is in big fat troubles and all she can think is rent ! OMG
Anyway Loved ur fanfic, keep up the brilliant work, me waiting for the next updt, n plz add to ur pm list
With Lots of Love 😊
Zubi
I just read ur fanfic in one go ! It was mindblowing. Here are my views :
Let me start with ur tareef : Ur an amazing, very talented , brillant writter ! Ur writing style is really very pleasant, aesy to read and captivating ! Concerning ur style, I must say one thing which is particularly well done: Geets thoughts, it's so " down to earth ", i mean if i was at her place ( I would have loved too ☺️... Oh god ur fasting remenber zubi, take this : 😵 ) i would have done same things, the way "ur geet" thinks and reacts, anyone of us would have done the same in the same situation., and this really good !
Now comming to the concept : I LOVE IT, the violence, blood ahhh LOVE IT 😈 Actually this exactly the type of fanfic i was lookin for, the hero being an arrogant, cold, heartless murderer... Let me tell u, u r not alone in this state, i am with you 😈, n according to the number of fans u have, i think we should start a group therapy...( before our own M.Right come n sees us in this sate...😆 )
Finally concerning the last updt: OMG !!! I was dead 🤣 🤣🤣 Geet comparing man to a gay awww 🤣... and she imagined him dancing in a item nom OMG, where do u find ur ideas girl u r crazy ! and last sentence, really unexpected OMG here her life is in big fat troubles and all she can think is rent ! OMG
Anyway Loved ur fanfic, keep up the brilliant work, me waiting for the next updt, n plz add to ur pm list
With Lots of Love 😊
Zubi
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