Commenting those, who were having few complains and those who wanted to share some views related the part😳😊
Originally posted by: jannat4ever
Hey Maha
amazing part i loved the way talked about her feelings, fears...
but i did felt wrong when armaan totally blamed her...i mean how can he expect from her to forget everything and be normal wid him..no one can bear to see their lover in someone else arms.. he is toh her husband...i felt he is also wrong ya riddhima stretched the issue but still she was right...she has all the reasons to be angry...this patch up will surely make their relation more strong...but i m missing the NASHA charm here yar...i don't knw why but somewhere i felt armaan tries to be all smarty pants and big one in front of her...like only he knows everything...but still you described riddhima's point of view so well...
part was fantastic and awesome..and the sad scene when both were crying awww i felt so bad for them...hope to see love scenes of AR in next part...and a great celebration of their anniversary and riddhima's birthdaythanks for the pm
continue super soon
lots of love
jannat
Hey Jannat😃
Well, i Felt Riddhima was actually running away from the truth – from last two weeks, she was not confronting and neither was she letting armaan speak. While on other hand, as i mentioned, Armaan was after her all the time, trying to make her understand that he wasn't really at fault. I know you are right, none wife can bear – it when she sees her husband with another woman, but here the problem was Armaan never thought that it would be Sanjana! He thought the girl below him was Riddhima, but she wasn't... and over top he was drunk too, he could be justified by all these reasons – IF Riddhima had given him chance to explain, IF Riddhima had given it a thought that 'may be Armaan is Not at faults'. These are my thoughts – i respect your words too
And i am sorry that my FF don't have that Nasha type of charm... that was a really different story, and this is a little family story, with family plus husband and wife complications... i will try to make this FF better, i guess i am losing my touch. And LoL – Armaan tries to bring everything to normal which at times by mistake it gets complicated, i will try to make this better – to make you happy.
Thanks for commenting
Originally posted by: Ayesha87
Wow Maha yaar awesome part,great song...gosh yaar u r amazingly talented & just leave us spell bonded each time...i salute & appreciate ur fantastic work,from bottom of my heart
I luved da way ridz confessed her feelings...hats off to her,she proved it to armaan that for her he means the world...it was so sad how things reached such a point that armaan questioned her luv & weather his decision to marry ridz was right or not ...im so glad ridz spoke her heart & made armaan realize how wrong he was to question her luv,now im sure he will never get such thoughts in his mind ever again:)
Abt da anniversary part..i feel that ridz not only to be blamed & not only she should feel guilty of her mistake...if armaan said he luvs alot & everything related to her means alot,then he should of remembered their anniversay no matter how much he feels that its all ridz mistake,if he had reasons to justify why he forgot it,then i feel that ridz reasons are also justified ...they both were stressed,so why should only rdiz feels sorry for mistake they both did?...but im proud of armaan at least he did feel guilty abt forgetting their anniversary & knew somewhere he was at fault too,though he may not of said to ridz,but at least he knows it for himself, i would like if he told ridz the same he felt abt forgetting anniversary, maybe it will help her feel less sad abt it all
OMG yaar how sweetly did u write their cute moments...loved it alot...brought smile on my face...armaan is soo naughty..i luv this armaan,especially the way he teases his ridz
Armaan inner feelings were expressed beautifully as well...i mean finally he was content & knows the extent of trust & love ridz has for only & only him...
Abt their anniversary celebration...i want both of them to make up for it & I know they both will,even though ridz feels its only her mistake & though she said sorry as well,i want armaan to make up for it as well & im glad he realizes that as well...looking forward to their celebrations...wow ridz bday will also be celebrated,awesome...surely for this i want armaan to make it best bday for ridz ever,she deserves it for sure & for all that they both have gone through,they need to shower each other with loads of love & make each one feel special
Thanks once again...take care
Hey😃,
Loved your comment😃,
I agree, Armaan had forgotten about the Anniversary, but the reason behind it was him trying to mano Riddhima – all the time while she was busy either tuanting him or running away from him... i agree that Armaan should share his view that he had forgotten about it at last moment, though he remembered it correctly and had saved an alarm in his mobile too – but he couldn't check it at right time. Though the 'Birthday of Riddhima is on the same day on the wedding' so i hadn't mentioned about birthday in this part as i wanted it in Next Part...
And you will see Armaan making it up while they celebrate their forgotten anniversary and Riddhima's forgetten birthday too.
Thanks for commenting, Tc😳
Originally posted by: arooshee
The way riddhima said it all to armaan was amazing
I really liked the part when riddhima was asking armaan
do u believe me phir puchoge ki I love u
and armaan's answer in monosylaables and ridz's gestures were awsome
the way she was sucking his every tear was beautiful
god she loves him so much
but one question why armaan didnt mentioned once about her birthday
when he was blaming her
if I am not wrong its on their wedding day right??
I really felt bad and hated armaan for that
he also forgot yaar
then why only blaming her??
and she also forgot her birthday and he also didnt remember
armaan kaunsa use birthday wish kiya
armaan toh kar sakta tha when I was reading the part at the start
i was really hating him ok
he toh love her so much so how come he forgot her birthday???
dont tell me stress mein tha woh to ridz bhi thi
but I really liked how u sketched ridz character and her way of expressing
surely a masterpiece I read it twice that part
armaan shud not dare to question her again
Yes you are right the birthday and wedding is on the same day, you wonn't hate him in next part he had already planned her birthday and anniversary thing – that the whole physco drama of Sanjana and him manofying his wife had kept him so busy that he had actually kept it all set...
LOL u are really angry at poor Armaan, but don't worry all your gussa will lighten up once you read the next part. I respect your thoughts, but i just differ them at some extent. Riddhima had no stress, she was just pulling the matter and streching it out – when her friends tried to explain she remained adadment to remain angry, a day or 2 of her being angry would have been justified but she pulled it all for 2 weeks, any man would get pissed off or might get angry – but here Armaan was trying to be patient with her, and listen to all her tuantrums and all... so he had to question her because she had every time took him from granted... and he had always been second in her life – so he needed to question and clear his head out and understand what really he meant too her, because all the time she remained quite and hardly few a times had mentioned that she loved him.
I will try my best to make my next part worthy enough for your liking,😃😳
Thanks for commenting😃
Originally posted by: nidha1983
hmm gud one why so much fight i dnt understand i mean i know it hurts when u forget any anniversary may be its its 1year or 1month but why to blame her only i dnt agree here i know its dnt make any difference but how he is going to react if he see Ridhima with sum-one else it hurts badly he can't blame her its the situation which is wrong what i think i m not saying everyone think like this... Anyway sorry i dnt mean to be rude but he need to understand her situation too and also he know how her family treat her so her insecurities going to effect her every-time.
Maha what i m going to say dnt mind plz plz if i hurt u i m sorry but i Miss Maha Style which don't let me forget ur FF & update for that i check ur thread daily. But i Miss that in this FF i mean in starting its ur style i dnt know bas i Miss ur style...
Hey Di,
Thanks for commenting,
I respect your views di, but as far as i have potrayed Armaan's character, i would just say, Armaan would have been angry but he wouldn't have mistrusted Riddhima, he would have understood the situation – might have taken some amount of time, but he wouldn't even raise a finger at Riddhima telling her off: that she was getting close to a guy at purpose, he wouldn't question her dignity at that time, he might be hurt but would never blame Riddhima – if she would have been drunk on bed with a guy, but surely he would have felt hurt, bad and sad.
No Di you are not rude, anyone over here can say anything. I respect every word. And i am sorry di, that you miss my touch in this FF... i don't know what to say, i guess many are really not happy with the shape of this FF – that is why i wanted to wind up... this FF... i will try to figure out what to do next and i will Try my best to come to your expectations...
Thank you Nidha Di for commenting.
.Originally posted by: Ayesha87
Im here again maha...sorry yaar im commenting so much on ur ff...but i can not help it...you are just too good
I know maybe what im gone say, i may sound like an idiot ...but i really wanted it
Actually u know how ridz realized her mistake & was questioning her own mistakes & realized that she needs to change & make everything better for them for relationship to work...i somewhere also want armaan to feel like this...i mean a relationship is formed by 2 people...& both good & bad moments are result of both...maybe one more then the other...but i just feel that ridz took the whole blame...maybe in some future twist i want ridz to change armaan's view on something & make him question himself if he is doing right or not...we have seen ridz do this many times with herself...would luv to read armaan's feelings as well, though i know he is more mature & perfect compared to ridz...but he also makes mistakes...u know one thing i absolutely luv abt AR is that when both make mistake they realize it, regret it & say sorry to each other ...but surely this time things went overboard...armaan was harsh on ridz, but glad that made her speak her heart out in front of him, but somewhere deep down she must be feeling guilty for every single thing that went wrong in their relationship
Also one more thing.. if armaan had forgotten her bday i want to him to apologize from his heart to ridz, the same way ridz did for the anniversary, though it was both at fault,as they both forgot it, but she still took all the blame, im sure he understands wht stress ridz was under, poor thing forgot her own bday as well, just shows how much she was going through & wanted armaan to be with her & understand the unspoken ...would luv to hear armaan speak his heart out, after accepting a mistake maybe not this time but maybe little later in the ff
Thanks for always entertaining us with such awesome work
& sorry yaar if ever we go overboard with our comments & write or express more then we should & unknowingly make u feel bad in anyway...forgive us crazy fans
LOL Ayesha, second comment on same part - no no i don't mind, you can keep on commenting as much as u want.
I agree Armaan need to realize few things too, but in Sanjana's problem, Armaan wasn't really at faults... i feel. And even then he was putting up with Riddhima, listening to her, letting her throw her anger at him from last two weeks. He was doing his best to save this relation and wanted an end to fight only if Riddhima had stopped throwing tantrums. Though Armaan remembered her birthday and anniversary too that is why the alarm was fixed in his mobile he had done some preparation too... but due Sanjana's psycho – he also forgot, and here he was at mistakes, though in next you will see Armaan making up for his mistake too
And i guess, mostly in their relation, Riddhima had been given an upper hand, Armaan had always been after her, at times cooling her down or at times cheering her up... Armaan had always looked after her happiness, and it time Riddhima look after him too... yes i agree both made mistakes too, but Armaan had always forgiven her by the end of the day while Riddhima had from start either stop talking to him – or punished him, or kept on taunting him while everyone knows Armaan wasn't actually Betraying her... but he had always faced Riddhima's rudeness!
And yea, Armaan would speak his heart in next part, and actually make up for his mistake in next part only, as i mentioned above.
Thanks for commenting again,
No it is okay, you can express and comment whatever you want, i guess i am really not putting my best in parts... i will try to make coming part better so that you and others don't find any further mistakes😊..
Thanks for commenting.😳😃
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Originally posted by: Ankita.M
The update was brilliant Maha. I respect the fact that Riddhima owed up for what wrong she had done. I believe forgetting dates may not be such a huge mistake, but being insecure, not believing your love and not trusting each other is what effects the relation a lot. Riddhima had to get mature and this discussion and talk between them will make her realize that love, concern and expressing the same has to be from both the sides. If Armaan has to make her feel secure, Riddhima needs to do the same as well. If Armaan has forgotten her birthday LOL, he better make up for it as well. But I hope from here onwards, their relation just gets stronger, poor things have already gone through a lot.
Lovely update Maha, well written and amazing.
Thanks for commenting,
Rite, IF Armaan has forgetten her birthday, but what if he had not ? he remembered both the things, due to the whole drama he forgot for a time being, or else he had something else planned… which he would surely execute now, and make Riddhima feel better and make up for his mistake. Surely in next part you would see. And I happy, that you liked Armaan being upright and spoke directly to Riddhima this time, finally have someone with a mutual thoughts like me, I know disucssion and talking was really imp. Now, in between thses two…. At least Riddhima spoke!! She must be hurt but from now on atleast she won't ignore Armaan or atleast speak out to him… rather than throwing tantrums…
Lovely comment, thank you :P
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