ll Heartbeat: An ArHi FF ll*part 5a page 40

First Previous

Page

Next Last

Frequent Posters

26javey

@26javey

Sparkler

+ 3

Posted: 14 years ago

#51

This is different and unique. Can't wait for you to continue

Quote

aakriti

@aakriti120

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 14 years ago

#52

hey thanks for the pm..interesting update..good to see arnav as the understanding one..and the precap is way exciting..cant wait to read the next part...👏

Quote

Looks like you are new here. Register for free, learn and contribute.

ayesha786xxx

@ayesha786xxx

Explorer

Posted: 14 years ago

#53

Hey great job can't wait to find out what Arnav finds I'm Khushi's diary and its nice to see that your characters are opposites from the show xX

Thanks for the pm please continuee and update soon xX

Quote

Chinu5

@Chinu5

Navigator

Posted: 14 years ago

#54

loved the update ...very interesting precap please update soon

Quote

Miya_Malik

@Miya_Malik

Explorer

Posted: 14 years ago

#55

OH! How could I miss this?! Late although, i'm here to eat your head with my silly comment 😆 To the fanfiction, great concept and very well presented! Khushi's parents seperate her from Arjun and marry her off to someone else just for money..URGHHH! Hate their mentality, but I forgive them because unknowingly they married her off to Mr. Right! :P Vaise I wonder what exactly Khushi's family had in mind when they decided to get her married off to ASR, like did they know Arnav was good for their daughter or they didn't care because they were going to get a hefty sum in return..😕 Chapter 2, I was secretly and desperately hoping for the husband to be our angry young man ASR, but I got better! The ASR here, is a complete gentleman! The minute she says 'please! i'm not ready for this' he backs off, conveying that he really respects Khushi and he won't do anything to hurt her (= LOVED that! So Arnav leaves Khushi to herself, and true to his words goes and sleeps in a seperate room 😳 It's going to take Khushi her everything to stop herself from falling for her adorable husband! I'm sure she will be well and truely over Arjun in no-time with Arnav around 😳 Eager to read the next chapter, when do you plan to update missy?!

PS: I dont normally write so much nonsense in my comment, it's just that I had to make up for missing chapter one. Sorry about that 😊
PPS: remember me?? I spammed on your one-shot thread and you were my partner in crime there! 😆

Quote

Lily2011

@Lily2011

Voyager

Posted: 14 years ago

#56

hmmmz nice.update soon. thnx 4 d pm.

Quote

..-Niru-..

@..-Niru-..

Voyager

Posted: 14 years ago

#57

ooo just cant wait 2 see wat he cums 2 no !!!
beautiful update
!!!

Quote

Mariaa.SG

@Mariaa.SG

Sparkler

+ 9

Posted: 14 years ago

#58

Beaautifuul Updaate jaanuu !!!

its amazingly writted 🤗 waaiting for the next updaate

do it soon !! Muuuah

Thaanks for the pm <3

Quote

jenshad

@jenshad

Stunner

+ 8

Posted: 14 years ago

#59

Pariii 🤗 Gunjan Don't Love Arnav But He Does :) That's SOOO Damn Interesting . 😳 & Who Forced Gunjan To Marry Arnav Just Because Of Money ?! Her Family ? 🤔 Anywayss I Liked How Arnav Slept With A Smile Across His Face Thinking About His Beautiful Wife, Khushi < 3 ! 😍