ll Heartbeat: An ArHi FF ll*part 5a page 40

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..Anita..

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Posted: 13 years ago

#21

I like the concept

you have to continue. i am dying to read more

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@-Sanjana-

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Posted: 13 years ago

#22

Originally posted by: mari2095
really nice 👏 do continue...

Thanks a lot Mari! will definately continue and add u to my PM list! 🤗

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Posted: 13 years ago

#23

Originally posted by: rsk16
Hi Pari,
It was a lovely intro..loved how khushi is expressing herself.
keep going.plz do add me to your pm list.
raunika

Thanks a ton sweety! Will definately continue and add u to the PM list! luv ya loads!😛

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Posted: 13 years ago

#24

Originally posted by: SK1991
hei dear...great start...
update soon...👏

Aww! thanks a lot! Will update asap!😃

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Posted: 13 years ago

#25

Originally posted by: ..-Sanzz-..
Add Me To PM List Pllzz :) 😳

Awww! Will definately do so sweets!😳

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Posted: 13 years ago

#26

Originally posted by: ayesha786xxx
sounds great please continue soon can't wait to find out who her husband is hope its Arnav... Please update soon! XXx

Thanks a bunch hun! And please continue to read! Will update asap!😉

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Posted: 13 years ago

#27

Originally posted by: anita_21492
I like the concept
you have to continue. i am dying to read more

Aww! Thanks a ton Anita! Will continue today itself!! 🤗

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Posted: 13 years ago

#28

Nice! You write great, you managed to invoke interest with just that small part you written...

Will be waiting to read more...add me to your PM list 😳

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Posted: 13 years ago

#29

Originally posted by: the_rain

Nice! You write great, you managed to invoke interest with just that small part you written...

Will be waiting to read more...add me to your PM list 😳

Awww! thanks a lot sweetheart!😳 I'm honoured that you've written such a comment for me! Will definately add u!😃

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Jyo.

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Posted: 13 years ago

#30

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I had no other choice but to edit this! MAN YOU ARE SO GOOD! Ahhh! You have got to update this a.s.a.p!!! Me is super excited to read what happened in this FF! :D YAY! I love it already! :D *hyper mode* 😆

Edited by ..Jojo.. - 13 years ago