FF: Beetein Lamhe Prt 7 pg104 2/25/13 - Page 69

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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: janu_2006

gr8 part..

cont.sooon
thanks for pm dear..

thanks hun!! and you're welcome on the PM 😃

JAZ

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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: NoorFatima

🤣 [=)) 🤣 ..

i was would've laafed out loud if i wasnt sitting outside my room in front of other peeps.. the delivery part was just hilarious.. 🤣 .. of all the ff's describing aan being nervous during the delivery, this wass the funniest 🤣 .. and teji was in a worse cndition 🤣 .. loved the update.. :)

Noor

tauba...you never read my ff's in front of people or where people are present...they will make you laugh or cry or both 😆...i remember the comments from all my sad OS's...people crying at the office or at the library...and everyone else watching them 😆😆..

JAZ

Edited by jnawaz - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: Koolsmile

Loved the chapter Jazz 😃
Labour scene was amaxing 😆
Both the brothers forgot the main person while leaving for the hosp themselves 🤣
Loved each bot of the chapter 👏
They got married 😳
Wondering for the future
Wat has happened
Waiting 😊

thanks hun!! glad you enjoyed the update!! 😃...aur what can i say about the Khurana brothers...not very good under domestic pressure 😕...like most men...its hilarious watching men when women are having babies...its too funny!! 😆

JAZ


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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: swetha10

Awesome update...

awww maan n teji were funny..
luved it..
continue soon

thanks hun!! glad you enjoyed it!! and the boys were super funny..werent they!! 😆

JAZ

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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: khwaishfan

hi thanks 4 da pm n fab update! Past - Teji gets Maan to confess n den Maaneet engaged! Pammi has a baby boy! All happy! Geet der 4 her sister! Maan n Teji r hilarious! Maaneet married! n Present - Maan alone! Geet left him...Maan shattered! Y > still a suspense lol! updat soon! Wonderfully written

thanks hun!! so good to see you here!! 😃...Teji and Pammi make an interesting team...making Maan really sweat thinking Geet might get married to someone else!! 😆😆...and yes...the present is totally different from the past...so..wait and watch 😉

JAZ

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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: -ZsterMG-

Oh nonononononono!!! =( kya hua??? 😲 teri sandal toot gayi kya? 🤣

Everything was going all hunky dory and I was laughing my behind off and smiling like a retard and then the last line =( tell me you werent smiling like a fool in front of other people...vaise...i think i've made you cry in front of people 😆
Don't even tell me that their egos or let me say ... Geet's 'dream' got in their way .. this reminds me of your other FF where Maaneet can never be one and it's all because of their values differing which led them to separate .. ugh .. please Jaz *sings* don't break my heaaart 😆 LMAO I sound like an idiot .. =p umm...Geet ka kaunsa dream...thats another story...remember...where Geet's a doctor and thats why she left him 😉...i didnt cross stories...lol...just teasing 😉...but aage aage dekho hota hai kya...although i'll be honest...there is a dream that may cause trouble 😉
I really don't know what bomb you have ticking away .. waiting for it to explode on us and crushing our hearts into smithereens and making us all depressed emos begging for you to get Maaneet to reunite ... aare yaar... chill maar...jaisa bhi bomb ho...lol...dont worry about it until it explodes...you cant predict it...so why fikar 😉...and lmfao! "depressed emos" 🤣
*dramatic enough ;)?* lol ... yes...totally enough...but your dramatics...haye...*jaz nazar uttaring* 😳
Whatever you have in store I'm sure it'll be one heck of a strong reason and one that we'd surely debate over for a loong time .. the reason this time isnt really one thats debatable...but...well...you'll see what i mean when it comes out 😉
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Coming to this update though ... what a lovely one at that! I literally ROFL'ed when Teji was grilling Maan unknowing to Maan himself ... I actually got a bit scared ... especially when Teji mention that Dev would suit Geet and all .. in my head I'm like "IM GONNA KILL JAZ!!!" LOL! Yea I occassionally send threats to you in my head while I read... =D i loved how before this point the comment had nothing to do with the current update...i just realized it now that you mentioned it!! 😆...tauba...aapni Jaz pe itna bhi bharosa nahin...chi!! why would i bring in Dev...chi chi chi... i dont care what happens...you can rest assured that i will NEVER hook up Geet with Dev...no matter what...i'd rather kill her or something 😳...but haan...if its anyone else...then...you never know! 😛
Maan's rising anger and his "I LOVE GEET DAMMNIT!" niiice ;) Loved his confession ... awesome right!!! 😃😃...he couldnt take it any more...usse qubool toh karna hi tha!! 😳
But the best part was the fact that Geet knew and wanted to confirm it ..AWWW my question has been answered.. she loved him all along .. here I go again .. awww <3 LOL! how could she not love him all along...i mean..he's MSK after all...speaking of MSK...i was watching the episode where they are in Amritsar and Maan comes back as MSK and Teji calls the police on him...and he announces that he is infact...Maan Singh Khurana...😲 still gives me goose bumps!!! 😃
Anyways the entire confrontation setup was uber cute! Loved the way it unfolded and how they were all in on it ... everyone but Maan...poor guy didnt have a chance to save himself at all 😛
So atleast no real dhamakas in this update regarding that .. *phew* oh no...no major dhamakas...not just yet 😉
Maaneet's relationship fixed.. engagement done .. engagement...aab jaldi shaadi bhi hojayegi 😃
Coming to the next best part ... the delivery of Gaurav.. BUAHAHAHA Jaz you never fail to make me laugh with your hilarious conception of scenes regarding hospitals, baby deliveries, etc.. this one was no less... Maan and Teji .. oh gosh I would so love to see that played out on screen .. HILARIOUS! Teji being unconscious .. poor fella but I laughed so hard reading that part... haha Geet to the rescue indeed!! 😎 side note...i love the name Gaurav...just something about it 😃...baby deliveries are hilarious...men turn into such horrible, useless people when women delivery...😆...ive seen many of my bhabis deliver...and my bhaias...oh gosh...they are a sight worth watching 🤣 although to their support...neither of them lost consciousness 😆
But aww Geet chose the name .. and the cutest bit was when Maan dreamt of having kids with Geet one day ... my heart <3 this man is truly in love .. or should I say was truly in love with Geet 😭 How could this dream end so abruptly... whyyy 🥺 hey hey hey...kissne kaha ke Maan abhi bhi...present mein...Geet se utna hi pyaar nahin karta...😉..maybe she's the one that fell out of love and not him...after all...she is the one that left 😉...im just saying 😆
Jaz.. rehem khaana hum per .. ok ... lol .. uff...kya nautanki hai...just wait for it 😛
I am really excited yet majorly nervous about what toofan is about to enter Maan and Geet's life... I mean they got married too! Everything moved at jet speed .. and seems like in a short span of time they will part ways... looking forward to that! toofan aane mein abhi thodi dehr hai...but...toofan aa toh raha hai 😛...thing are moving fast...but thats cuz we have to establish the background before all hell breaks loose...know what i mean 😆
Wonderful update Jaz ... =) the story keeps getting interesting by the udpate! thanks Zster!! love you!!! you're comments are always amazing!!! LOVE YOU LOVE YOU LOVE YOU LOVE YOU!!!! 🤗
Z

Edited by jnawaz - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: Kkadss

Hai!!!! M still lost

why lost yaar...bol...how can i fix it 😳

JAZ

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Posted: 12 years ago
@jnawaz: Nyc story!!!!😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
When is the next update yar😭
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: girlz-rule

@jnawaz: Nyc story!!!!😊

thanks! 😃

Originally posted by: ajenn

When is the next update yar😭

give me like 20 minutes...i'll post the teaser...then update either Monday or Tuesday 😳

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