FF: Beetein Lamhe Prt 7 pg104 2/25/13 - Page 67

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Posted: 12 years ago

🤣 [=)) 🤣 ..

i was would've laafed out loud if i wasnt sitting outside my room in front of other peeps.. the delivery part was just hilarious.. 🤣 .. of all the ff's describing aan being nervous during the delivery, this wass the funniest 🤣 .. and teji was in a worse cndition 🤣 .. loved the update.. :)

Noor

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Posted: 12 years ago
Loved the chapter Jazz 😃
Labour scene was amaxing 😆
Both the brothers forgot the main person while leaving for the hosp themselves 🤣
Loved each bot of the chapter 👏
They got married 😳
Wondering for the future
Wat has happened
Waiting 😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
Awesome update...
awww maan n teji were funny..
luved it..
continue soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
hi thanks 4 da pm n fab update! Past - Teji gets Maan to confess n den Maaneet engaged! Pammi has a baby boy! All happy! Geet der 4 her sister! Maan n Teji r hilarious! Maaneet married! n Present - Maan alone! Geet left him...Maan shattered! Y > still a suspense lol! updat soon! Wonderfully written
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Posted: 12 years ago
Oh nonononononono!!! =(
Everything was going all hunky dory and I was laughing my behind off and smiling like a retard and then the last line =(
Don't even tell me that their egos or let me say ... Geet's 'dream' got in their way .. this reminds me of your other FF where Maaneet can never be one and it's all because of their values differing which led them to separate .. ugh .. please Jaz *sings* don't break my heaaart 😆 LMAO I sound like an idiot .. =p
I really don't know what bomb you have ticking away .. waiting for it to explode on us and crushing our hearts into smithereens and making us all depressed emos begging for you to get Maaneet to reunite ...
*dramatic enough ;)?* lol ...
Whatever you have in store I'm sure it'll be one heck of a strong reason and one that we'd surely debate over for a loong time ..
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Coming to this update though ... what a lovely one at that! I literally ROFL'ed when Teji was grilling Maan unknowing to Maan himself ... I actually got a bit scared ... especially when Teji mention that Dev would suit Geet and all .. in my head I'm like "IM GONNA KILL JAZ!!!" LOL! Yea I occassionally send threats to you in my head while I read... =D
Maan's rising anger and his "I LOVE GEET DAMMNIT!" niiice ;) Loved his confession ...
But the best part was the fact that Geet knew and wanted to confirm it ..AWWW my question has been answered.. she loved him all along .. here I go again .. awww <3 LOL!
Anyways the entire confrontation setup was uber cute! Loved the way it unfolded and how they were all in on it ...
So atleast no real dhamakas in this update regarding that .. *phew*
Maaneet's relationship fixed.. engagement done ..
Coming to the next best part ... the delivery of Gaurav.. BUAHAHAHA Jaz you never fail to make me laugh with your hilarious conception of scenes regarding hospitals, baby deliveries, etc.. this one was no less... Maan and Teji .. oh gosh I would so love to see that played out on screen .. HILARIOUS! Teji being unconscious .. poor fella but I laughed so hard reading that part... haha Geet to the rescue indeed!! 😎
But aww Geet chose the name .. and the cutest bit was when Maan dreamt of having kids with Geet one day ... my heart <3 this man is truly in love .. or should I say was truly in love with Geet 😭 How could this dream end so abruptly... whyyy 🥺
Jaz.. rehem khaana hum per .. ok ... lol ..
I am really excited yet majorly nervous about what toofan is about to enter Maan and Geet's life... I mean they got married too! Everything moved at jet speed .. and seems like in a short span of time they will part ways... looking forward to that!
Wonderful update Jaz ... =) the story keeps getting interesting by the udpate!
Z
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: maankigeet4ever

res for ur STALKERJI 😃

abhi tak unreserve karne ka time nahin mila...uff!! chal...thodi dehr mein i'll post teaser...uske saath saath mujhe iss pichli update ka full comment bhi chahiyeh!! 😡

thanks 😳

Originally posted by: kiran_rati

beautiful update

waiting for more to come
hey plz give regular updates
thanx for the pm
cont soon dear

trying yaar...trying to be as regular as possible...didnt realize i missed one update last week so i'll try and post the next one ASAP 😃trying yaar...trying to be as regular as possible...didnt realize i missed one update last week so i'll try and post the next one ASAP 😊

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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: -bansi-

What a turn of events..

They had gotten married so what happened that both of them were separated..?!!

Curious to know the reason..

Loved the update..

Cont soon..!!

he he...that is the million dollar question...akhir dono ke beech mein hua kya? 😉 dont worry...it will be answered soon...as in...w/in the next few updates...i think 🤔...😆...

JAZ

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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: Dilsay

firstly thank you for an awesome blossom update ...

every thing was going so smooth but the precap turned the table ...
m I right in comprehending that Geet walked away

i will not confirm nor deny your comprehension 😉...aage aage dekho...hota hai kya 😛

JAZ

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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: ajenn

Wonderful update... I just love this whole part. thank you thank you 😳

Tej and Maan's convo was superb. Tej's way of finding groom for Geet, I loved it. Khurana marriage Bureau sounds really good, they should consider this new business. aare yaar...if they open a marriage bureau then all the ladies will be in line to marry Maan...us included!! 😆

Shock of life Tej planning to get Geet matching with Dev. At last he opened his mouth and confess. But the expression should be worth watching. i can just imagine Maan's reaction in my mind...lol...he must have been horrified!! 😉

Love the part Geet hiding behind Pammi , the shy her blush her glowing eyes her running away, evergreen classic heroin signature.. I loved this part'.(I still couldn't connect myself with the Pammi being Maan's SIL, every time I read Pammi it reminds me of someone old is married to Tej, how awful) i loved Geet as the strong punjaban but i LOVED when Maan used to make her blush!! 😳😳 it was just the cutest ever!! and ya...it was weird but i couldnt think of anyone else...Naintara just didnt fit...i used Pammi because i felt she was more like badi bhabi material 😃

Pammi's delivery part was awesome.. too good to describe. Looks like both Khurana's turn into clowns in that short period.. The best part was, both driving to hospital leaving Pammi behind. Wahrewah!!! Wonder whom they will sent to hospital if the patient is at home.. And another scene, Tej fainiting and cutting his head. Ow poor boy couldn't take the stress.. men turn into such fools during delivery...i remember when my bhabi's had their babies...the last one...my cousin didnt know which way was up...it was funny to watch 😆😆😆

Finally Maan's dream came true, getting married to his lady love.. yup yup...cute naa? 😛

Well what to say' looks like Geet had walk out of their marriage life.. why did she?? What happen.. Seriously Im going to ask this again and again' Im so curious, its bugging me..And you also should consider giving Precap on the same time after update😆 Now I need to wait for Teaser well...you'll see what Geet did and why she did it...just wait for it...i promise...it will be worth the wait 😉...vaise toh tum mujhe jaante ho...im a kamini when it comes to the truth coming out...but its always awesome in terms of twists 😆

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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: Myra.nelly

so beautiful..liked how they made him confess..oh and really laughed imagining both men headless chicken :))) just too good..reading ur update is always a pleasure because it has a perferct mix..romance.comic lines or situation and that most apealing mistery..

so she left to have her way..wonder what could it be tht he denied to her..juat love this guessing game..

i enjoyed writing this part...it was fun to do...just imagining Maan like that...all possessive of Geet...of course...just the thought of her with another man 😆... and the headless chicken part...classic men 🤣...i absolutely LOVE that you thought that Maan denied her something...love it...and i'll tell you...so far...you're closest to the truth 😉

JAZ

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