FF: Beetein Lamhe Prt 7 pg104 2/25/13 - Page 5

Originally posted by: indepgal

ok jaz, i hereby solemnly decree i am a sadist ...i came across your OS' and FF( u and me collide) only last week and read all of them in one go...!! since most of them are tragic and off the beaten path, obviously reading them together was like committing hara-kiri...but no...i continued inflicting pain to my emotional being and continued reaing your works...hence, the proclaimation! i am truly a sadist! yay!! a sadist!! haila...you me and reya!! 😃...we can all appreciate the pain of a few tears!! 😛 ...and happy you survived reading everything in one go...that had to be hard to digest!!! 👏

after reading the first OS-there u will be, where i bawled my eyes out, i read remembrance, thinking chalo 1 sad Os, but this shud be a happy one...nah! in the first u killed maan and in the latter geet...!!! then read daddy's little girl...and the trauma contd...but i must confess, i loved daddy's little girl...i am myself one, ever since we lost my mom whn i was 12 yrs old and this OS touched me to the core. it captured all the emotions and the deep love i have for my papa..so i forgive u for making me cry like a baby after reading it...that too in office! but i certainly do not forgive u my tears on reading the other 2 OS' and u and me collide...and demand compensation -u better make this FF end happilly with Geet and Maan living happily ever after...u have somewhat redeem urself with "best friends" and "where is my little girl"...but only somewhat... oh no...you started out with quite possibly the saddest one out there...well that and A New Hope...but dear lord...you got the guts girl!! omg...what an order you had...first maan dead...then geet...then her dad...oh dear lord...and youre still here...😲...im so happy you liked Daddys Girl...and sorry to hear about your mom...and sorry for making you cry in the office...i hope you've learned...like the others...reading my os's in the office...not the best idea 😆...you should read Tere Bindiya Re...My Mishti and The Surprise...oh and Smile in the Rain...those should get me a few more points!! 😉

but u go , girl...happy writing...( indep waving her arm and rushing to get tissues) lol... 🤣 you're too funny!! loved the comment!!!

Originally posted by: jnawaz

😲...maar khayegi!! i gave a damned good Maneet SR in HS!! even the besharams appreciated it!! 😲

JAZ

Originally posted by: jnawaz

<font color="#9900ff">he he...abhi se emotional ho rahe ho...lol...wonder what will happen in the future!! lol...stay tuned!😃
JAZ</font>

Originally posted by: sindu555

uff itna heart breaking prologue .🥺...

I guess I should brace myself for another set of heart attacks ...

since u're my twist queen and after the pleasant twist in "HS" ... me no loosing hope ... 😃 (sowwie me cant sudhrofy ... I will remain hopeless when it comes to Maaneet) ...

cant wait to see how u unfold this story ...

loved the starting ...

Sana

lol...thats ok...you can talk about maneet here all you want...im ALL ears!! 😉...and yes...a few twists in this one too 😛

JAZ

Originally posted by: --Nargis--

Damn...😲 How did i miss that...let me find it!!! Me running to Humesha Thread ASAP!!!😆

yes...how did you...i sent out PM's for that as well...😲...ps...me expecting comment once you read!! ha ha

JAZ

Originally posted by: Vidushi89

I know you write very sad, emotional ff's, which make me cry...let me tell you, when i read your ff the whole day i keep thinking abt them...ab kya hoga...aisa kyu hua...?? Tension ho jati hai yaar...that's why i left reading ''you n i collide''...dont kill me...plz... lol...tauba...dont do what someone else told me they did...i think it was jyoti_1...she had just read You & I...then her mom asked her a question and...she answered something about Adeet!! 🤣 ...
But there was no option left yaar...for 2 whole days i kept thinking abt it only...i was really disturbed...i know you must be laughing on me...par mai kya karu...m a hardcore maaneet fan, unko alag dekhna is hard to digest...sorry dear.

N now, 1 more ff...n you've already given the warning ki aage dekho hota hai kya...??
Are you planning to kill me...?? aare...maine sirf kaha...aage aage dekho...toh dekhti jaao!! 😉

Originally posted by: khwaishfan

Hi Jaz...Congrats on the new FF🥳! All da best 🤗! Thanks 4 da pm! Read the prologue...it was intense n emotional. Poor Maan! Loved it n looking forward to the story. Hope this has haappy ending! Lol...just joking! Please include me in ur pm list if u have nt already done so!😉...Thanks

thanks!! 😃...i loved how you said "thanks for the PM" and also said "include me on your PM list".. 😆...im glad you enjoyed it

JAZ